Death Note

Written on May 28th, 2008 by Star Jinin

Story Details

Yay! Chapter seven! And I’m still not even going to be close to finished. I think I’ll cover all the way past the Yotsuba arc. I might omit you-know-who’s death as well 

Chapter 7: Voice 

Groan…where am I? Am I dead? Artemis’s mind clouded with fear and confusion.

“Artemis-kun! Artemis-kun!” Artemis opened his eyes groggily. Someone was shaking him awake.

“Are you all right, Artemis-kun?” A black haired man with bags under his eyes stood beside Watari.

“Yes…are you…L?” Artemis stared. He highly doubted that this skinny, insomniac man could be L, but who else could it be? 

“…Yes…I am L” He finally admitted. “We got a little worried when your tracking beacon stayed stationary for three days so Watari and I came ourselves to investigate. But please, from now on, address me as Ryuuzaki for safety’s sake”

“I-” Artemis flinched. He felt a massive migrane coming on and pressed a hand to his forehead.

“What is it, Artemis-kun?” Ryuuzaki kneeled and pressed an ice pack to the Irish boy’s forehead. “What happened to you?” He demanded urgently.

“I can’t seem to recall… in fact, I don’t even know what I’m doing here in the first place” Artemis admitted sheepishly.

Ryuuzaki stood. “I thought today was supposed to be your day off. Raye Penber took over your shift today”

“My day off from what?” Artemis frowned. This was not good. Just how much had he forgotten?

“Well, seeing that you have a faint recollection of who we are, it’s safe to say that your memory loss is relatively minor…I’ll explain when we get back to the Imperial Hotel. Can you stand?”

“Yes” Artemis scrambled up, flushing with embarassment. His pride had taken a severe blow after being found unconsious on the sidewalk. “I’ll fly there”

Ryuuzaki nodded. “Be sure to shield this time. We don’t want to risk that the cam-foil accidentally falls off during flight”

Artemis activated the wings and his GPS and flew towards the direction of the hotel. Once there, he requested ‘Ryuuzaki’’s room number. He knocked on the door and Chief Yagami opened it warily.

“Oh Yatamari! What are you doing here?” Soichiro asked.

“He is here at my invitation” Ryuuzaki replied. He and Watari walked in as well. “But for now on, you may address him as Artemis Fowl. He was previously at the NPA to gather information about Kira, but he is now currently in my services” Everyone seemed shocked at the revelation.

“You sent a spy to the NPA? I knew we couldn’t trust him!” Aizawa shouted.

“Actually, I took a personal curiosity about the Kira case and came of my own accord” Artemis shrugged as the other detectives gwaked at him. “Actually, I should be asking you what you all were doing here”

“I had gathered a group of NPA members from the Kira task force that I could trust and decided to have the Kira investigation take place here” Ryuuzaki explain as he sat crouched in his armchair Artemis took a seat as well.

“Artemis, would you mind explaining your latest little stunt?” Ryuuzaki began taking a bite out of a doughnut. ”And what had happened to you, I might add”

“I’m not sure…I’m assuming I got knocked out after getting the side of my head smashed…I don’t remember what I was doing, only that I was supposed to be following someone and that…I was looking for confirmation of something important…” Artemis mused.

“Watari and I found you at the site of a bus-jacking. A drug addict supposedly hijacked the bus and got run over by a car”

“Ah! So maybe this boy had seen Kira do something suspicious, and he Kira attacked to keep him quiet!” Matsuda shouted in outburst. Artemis scowled. He was technically too old to be referred to as ‘boy’. Ryuuzaki licked the chocolate from his fingers.

“Highly possible, but if Kira could kill with a heart attack, I doubt he would have went through all the trouble to assult Artemis-kun and leave him alive, and Kira would have probably had done a cleaner job of it. I have no doubt that he was left alive intentionally” Ryuuzaki started gnawing at his nails. “And so Kira either wanted to leave Artemis-kun as a warning, or because he’s not fond of killing juniors. Kira has yet to kill anyone under the age of 18″

Another sharp jolt of pain sparked in Artemis’s cranium. “Ugh…” Images flashed in his head. A crumpled note. A Japanese girl. A telephone.

“Artemis-kun is should go home and rest. If I find anything important, Watari will be at the NPA to convey the information” Ryuuzaki took a sip of coffee. “Hopefully, you’ll remember something in the morning”

Artemis gestured goodbye, and left the Imperial hotel. He walked back to his own hotel and whipped out his fairy communicator that was now fixed.

“Foaly?” Artemis had wired the communicator so that he could contact Foaly as well.

“Yes, Artemis? I’m in the middle of an important council meeting. It was about time my budget got raised” Foaly moaned.

“Have you heard anything about the Kira case that’s going on in Japan?” Artemis spoke urgently.

“Are you kidding, mud boy? That stuff’s been circulating around Haven for a month! Well, not that I’m saying hundreds of heart attacks happening simtaneously is coincidence, but there’s no way this ‘Kira’ is real, if you ask me” Foaly snorted.

Artemis opened his mouth to speak, but Foaly cut in. “Look, Artemis, I know what you’re about to ask, but the council will never authorize for us to act in human affairs, and I’m going to have a hard time getting Holly a surface pass. The counci’s already on to me for getting her visas to pick up hoof moistenizers”

Artemis sighed.

“But Holly can come and help once in a while in her vacation time, there’s no rule against that” Foaly added. Artemis breathed a sigh of relief. “All right, I look forward to seeing her here. Goodbye”

*   *   *

A week later…

What?” L shouted. “Dead?”

“Yeah”, said the FBI director. “eight agents were reported dead, I tried contacting all twelve, but couldn’t reach any of them. Kira got them. There’s no other explanation”

“Please stay calm. Who knew all the names and faces of all the agents?” L asked.

“Only myself, until yesterday…a request for the names and photos of the agents came in…I assumed that they wanted to liase with each other”

That’s it! Kira somehow got a look at that file!

“Who was the file sent to?” L demanded.

“It was sent to…all of the agents on the mission” The director went on. “I’m sorry, L, but the FBI is terminating its investigation in Japan. Those were twelve good agents we lost and they had familes. It’s a big loss”

*  *  *

Yesterday…

“So, Light. Are you going to kill off that FBI agent now? There’s so many people here” Ryuk asked.

“I’ve been doing experiments. Now you can see the results. If you write the cause of death, and the names later, they still happen” Light was dressed in a hoodie today. Normally, he abhorred wearing anything in public that was too informal

“Huh. I didn’t even know that” Ryuk mused.

Light found a particular man in the crowd. It was Raye Penber. “Right on time” Light muttered as he followed him.

“Raye Penber. I am Kira. If you turn around, or stick your hands in your pockets, I’ll kill you instantly” Light kept his voice low, just in case.

Ive…I’ve heard this voice before…whose is it?

“I’m going to prove I’m really Kira. See that employee in that shop? He will die in two minutes”

“No! Stop!” Raye demanded.

“That’s too bad, but you wouldn’t believe me without an example. That man was a menace to society but could not be convicted because of insufficent evidence. Now, I need you to do something. If you do anything besides what I tell you to do, I’ll kill you and your family. Now guess who I’ve taken hostage?”

“You’ve…you’ve taken her hostage?”Raye had a fiancee that was a former FBI agent who worked with L once. Of course, all this was just a lie, but Penber didn’t need to know that. “Take this envelope and put this transceiver in your ear”

A transciever. It’s practically a toy. No one would be able to pick up the transmissions. Got to hand it to him. Now what are these envelopes?

Raye found several envelopes with slots over them.

“Get on the Yamanote train and get the seat closest to the door.” Light’s voice came from the tranceiver. Penber did so.

“Now, how many FBI agents are there?” Light asked.

“Twelve. There’s four teams of three” Raye answered.

“Now, get someone under your rank to give you the files of the FBI agents that are in Japan” Raye dialed Belle’s number.

“I need the information of all the FBI agents in Japan” Raye replied. And soon, all the files were sent to him.

“Now” Light commanded. “Write the names of the FBI agents in the slots on the envelope while you focus on the photos”

Raye thought for a moment. If all he has are their names, he can’t kill them…

“Okay, now leave the envelopes on the rack overhead and exit the train” Light ordered. Raye exited the train, scowling.

Damn…why can’t I remember whose voice this is? Who is it?

Raye Penber stepped off the plane. Three seconds later-

“Argh!” He collapsed on the ground. Penber tried desprately to look on the train.

“Light…Yagami!” He sputtered out.

“Goodbye, Raye Penber” Light watched him emotionlessly as Raye stared helplessly as the train door closed.

Sorry about the delay in this chapter, but I was busy listening to Death Note’s soundtrack. L, Kira, Death Note, the WORLD, Arumina, and Near’s theme are awesome! :D RR&R!

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74 Reviews for “Death Note”

  1. Shanette Says:

    OH.MY.GOD I just LOVE death note I’m so happy you did a crossover! The story is really nice so far, I like it! Maybe Artemis should be on Light’s side. I like it that way. =D Just an opinion. ;) But great job so far. I’ll definitely check back.

  2. mayqueen17 Says:

    Death Note is the awesomest anime/magna ever!!!!! Maybe Arty’d do better if he’s with L. You know, Light’s kind of like a more dangerous version of his 12 year old self.

  3. DomovoiBlack Says:

    I’m not into Manga, but I found Light’s story to be fascinating. I’m inclined to think that Artemis’s brainpower is match enough for anyone, but with a tool like the Death Note, he may have found a competent adversary…or will they be conspirators? It could easily go either way, and I don’t have a preference. I’ll check in on your story again. :)

  4. AFDNLOVA Says:

    I love Deathnote! It’s so crazy when that really hot girl is jacked by that guy then he is killed by the truck! It’s so cool!

  5. Steven Says:

    That girl is sorta cute, but really hot? Nah! But I still live that show!

  6. mayqueen17 Says:

    My vote’s still that Arty teams up with L. And Yotsuba is the…. rival I think of the police that Light’s dad works or is in charge of.

  7. Star Jinin Says:

    Yotsuba is the company that got ahold of the Death Note after Light loses his memory…:o Oops. I think I said too much! :) Hmm…also, maybe I’ll also give Arty the ownership of one Death Note later on and he loses his memory later…but I still need a dominant alliance.

  8. Shanette Says:

    Maybe I change my mind… Artemis and L seem better. Now that I think of it. Yeah, maybe I’ll go with that.

  9. Star Jinin Says:

    Okay! Seeing that no one else on the site seemingly even reads Death Note, I’ll go ahead with Arty and L. L wins! I’ll work on it right away! Don’t worry. I’ll make SURE that Artemis doesn’t give Light away…

  10. kenny Says:

    i cool it’s death note i would never have thought of that and if i did i don’t think i would have done it

  11. Random Is My Style Says:

    i love death note!
    artemis should definately be on L’s side. Light is too evil. and twisted. even tho i cant help but love him! ive only read the first two mangas tho.. gotta catch up!

  12. Shanette Says:

    Ahh. Of course. I like Light too. But poor thing… *keeps quiet* ;)

  13. Star Jinin Says:

    I like Light too! :D I think one of the main reasons why he is so popular is because nothing can stand in his way. Not Ryuzaki, the FBI agents, being locked up, or the death of family members. He’s a hurricane that will tear up anything in its path. But I have more fantasies about Ryuzaki rather than Light…Ryuzaki’s so cute! Anyway, I’ll work on ch 4 if I have time.

  14. kenny Says:

    oh i don’t know i think it would be cool artemis teamed up with L and meet light and then betraed L but what next…:( ah…never mind

  15. kenny Says:

    and great story

  16. Shanette Says:

    Yes Ryuzaki is cute!!! Haha, he’s my favourite. :P

  17. shanette Says:

    Wow, I liked chapter 5 a lot!! It’s really nice, keep going!

  18. mayqueen17 Says:

    Death and Artemis Fowl is THE greatest x-over ever! ^^ I wonder why no one ever did it though….

    Chp 5 was my favorite chappie so far! ^^ If L (to Arty) is still the fancy L on the laptop, how is he eating a strawberry and drinking coffee?

    This is BlackOpal. I merged your messages. Please try to avoid double posting. 

  19. artyrox Says:

    Once again a wonderful piece of Fanfiction from Star Jinin! Death Note is like the best ever manga in the world. I love drawing manga (however terrible at it I am). By the way, I know this will sound rather annoying but you spelt recognising wrong. Keep up the good work!!!

  20. Star Jinin Says:

    mayqueen17-We know he’s eating because the story is told from third-person, not first person.
    artyrox-I enjoy drawing manga too! And I’m really good at it. Friends ask me to draw them all the time! :)
    Also, I’m glad you pointed the mistake out. Even if I’m too lazy to correct it because I need my time to write updates, thanks for doing it anyway :P

  21. GoMulchGo Says:

    This is a very good story, but I would like to to point out something. When there is more than one person talking, it’s difficult to keep track of who’s saying what. So, can you maybe distinguish the dialogue. That would be much appreciated.

  22. shanette Says:

    Ahh, I loved chapter 6!

  23. mayqueen17 Says:

    Ahhhhhhh! Arty got hurt!

    I think you took a big risk of letting Arty forget things, but you pulled it off good, sister! ^.^

    Edited by MMK:  I merged your posts.  Please try not to douple post.  Thanks.

  24. mayqueen17 Says:

    Hey, Star, are you on any other sites like Artemis Fowl Confidential? Or ff.net?

  25. Star Jinin Says:

    Nope. I perfer this site! It’s much better than those other poorly made sites. And it’s not spammy either. I do go to ff.net, only I hate the ads.
    Anyway, ch 8 is up! Plot twist! Lol. I know that he didn’t lose his memory because of the Death Note, so his memory should not have come back, but I needed to add that in anyway

  26. mayqueen17 Says:

    *gasps* Arty crossed over to the….. other side! Or did he?

  27. shanette Says:

    I loved the new chapters! I really like where this is going. I too go to ff.net sometimes. I plan on starting there too. But I’ll still remain here :D

  28. songfic_freak Says:

    Inkheart, I suspect you can’t rate stories or get to your own because the editors might have taken that privilege away from you, because you keep flaming stories without any explination. If you do not stop flaming stories, you might be banned from Fangathering altogether. Please stop.

  29. BlackOpal Says:

    Inkheart’s comments have been moved to spam.
    If you see anymore just ignore them.

    -BlackOpal

    Regarding the story:

    This sounds like such a cool thing! I only read one chapter, I’ve never seen/read Death Note, but it’s a great idea. :D
    Maybe I’ll read the rest (if it’s not too confusing) and see how it turns out.

  30. mayqueen17 Says:

    Don’t you just love it his eyes glow red?

  31. Star Jinin Says:

    YOU READ THE UNFINISHED CHAPTER!? HOW COULD YOU?! *sigh*. Curiosity killed the cat, you know! *cackles as mayqueen17’s name is written in the death note*

  32. Shanette Says:

    Haha, well, I absolutely willed myself not to read it. :)
    How could you kill poor mayqueen17 for that?
    -chuckles-

  33. mayqueen17 Says:

    *can’t tell you how awesome Chp. 9 was because she’s floating around as a spirit somewhere….)

  34. Shanette Says:

    Awww haha. Poor thing. Oh and now that I think of it, Star Jinin, your name actually sounds really, really…chinese. It really does. The thought just struck me suddenly. 0.0

  35. Star Jinin Says:

    Yes, it is! Glad you noticed! People keep saying that Asian writers are bad at literature, and I’m pretty much here to prove them wrong. I picked a username close to my own initials S.J. ‘Jinin’ sounds like the Chinese sound effect for ‘twinkling’

  36. Shanette Says:

    OHH!! I’m Asian too!! And I know plenty of Chinese. :)
    Which country are you from?

  37. Star Jinin Says:

    Look, this is getting REALLY off-topic, but if it makes you happy…I used to live in China.
    Also, so the next part of the story is where Misa comes in, right? I forgot (shame on me)

  38. mayqueen17 Says:

    I didn’t peek this time! ^^ I hope Holly knows what the heck she getting into!

  39. HS9 Says:

    People are here to prove this wrong… How interesting. Even though this is off topic, I am Chinese. Some people think we are the smartest people in the world! Some think that. Some people thimk we are just plain dumb.

    This story is interesting. Even though I started to watch it back in Feb., I’m hooked. Artemis, in my opinion, is a little OOC. The disappearance of Naomi Misora? What happened? I know I peeked, but you don’t know my name or how I look like. There is no way you can kill me. :D

  40. Star Jinin Says:

    Oh YEAH!? Wanna bet? *trades for Shinigami eyes*
    Okay, Naomi died because of the death note. Light wrote it in to make her commit suicide without letting her body be found after he manipulated her into telling her real name, if you read carefully.
    I had a theory about how the Death Note corrupts the owner’s mind, and a with a ego like Artemis’s, I thought it would be reasonable that he would be lured by the Death Note.

  41. HS9 Says:

    Well… That is possible… Besides even if you get Shinigami eyes, you would need my picture. So, how are you going to get it? Tell me that!

  42. Moonlite Knight Says:

    Wow, that was awesome! I’ve only read the first volume of Death Note, but it scared me for some reason, so I didn’t read the rest. But your story isn’t scary at all, it’s great! You’re going to add more right? Please?

  43. Star Jinin Says:

    HS9-Oh yeah? Well, there’s this new *coughcough* invention called facebook. Ever heard of that? Oh wait…I need your name for that. Oh snap.
    MK-Yeah. The artist once said that he was afraid he was cursed for drawing shinigami. I was really afraid the story was too confusing and I haven’t even come up with a plot yet…and it’s not gonna be surprising if I take suggestions. I’m glad you enjoyed it!

  44. HS9 Says:

    HA! I spoiled your plan! What’s Facebook? By the way, won’t you feel guilty if you kill someone from your own race? Or are you so cold-blooded that you will kill me? You still have not updated.

  45. AF rules Says:

    I LLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEE
    Deathnote! Your Story is AWESOME!

  46. mayqueen17 Says:

    The second Kira is Minerva isn’t it? -_-; No offense, I just don’t like her.

  47. Star Jinin Says:

    Well, yeah! That’s why I made her the second Kira. I don’t like her either, but I hate Misa more. And putting Misa in would make the story SO predictable to DN fans! Misa is such a moron. Another genius would be better. And I have to balance the AF and the DN characters otherwise I’m on shaky ground even for a crossover

  48. OliverWoodsgirl223 Says:

    NOOOO! If you kill L…..:( He’s already dead! Can’t you just be nice to the poor guy for once? Well…I’m guessing the second Kira is either Minerva or Misa…Misa-Misa is the second Kira after all! DEATH NOTE RULES! Also, is Mello and Near going to come in? Near is so cute!

  49. Star Jinin Says:

    Uh…I just told her that Minerva is the second Kira…I mean, I made it really obvious. I guess most DN fans are a bit biased. And I haven’t decided if I’m really gonna kill L. I might, I might not. I hope to end it after the sucessors come in, but before the 1/28 meeting. I’m not gonna include Mikami either. I hate that guy!

  50. mayqueen17 Says:

    just don’t kill L! He’s an awesome character! ^^ I trust that you can make everything work out if you let him live.

  51. AF rules Says:

    I like your story! But PLEASE don’t kill L!

  52. Star Jinin Says:

    Silence, pathetic mortals! I, with the almighty fanfic authoress powers bestowed upon me, shall decide the fate of L! Muahahahahah! Ha..ha. ha. *coughchoke*
    Sorry, I got a little carried away there. But I do know what I’m gonna do about our little panda. No matter what the outcome, please don’t try to flame me or anything. I know all about those L diehards out there and so please keep reading till the end, no matter what happens.

  53. AF rules Says:

    I loved chapter 12! I wonder what Artemis is planning.

  54. Star Jinin Says:

    Er…you weren’t supposed to read that chapter. It’s an work in progress, meaning that you should heed the bolded text and wait till I post an announcement to read it! Grr…people just don’t get that…

  55. mayqueen17 Says:

    the code thing was a cool idea, but i dont get it that much

  56. geniustkw Says:

    Hi! I am geniustkw, singaporean chinese AF Fan! Nice story, I like how you combine Death Note with Artemis Fowl, it’s so fun and interesting, if you won’t mind, please give me your comments about my story Artemis Fowl and the Mallan Rebellion, Thanks!

    geniustkw

  57. mally Says:

    i like this crossover, but i really think you make arty a little stupid. i can never see him as a pawn to anyone. i see him ruling and planning the whole thing. make him win with l though because l is awesome.

  58. AF rules Says:

    I agree with mally. Artemis would never let himself be commanded like that. The storys very good though. :)

  59. Star Jinin Says:

    Sigh…I know, but I like Light being the smarter one, and I know that Artemis is being a bit submissive. But I suppose he did learn some humility and…well…okay, I don’t have an excuse. I just wanted Light to be the dominant one! Artemis can tolerate being told to do something, while Light will throw a hissy fit or find some way out of it. I admit, it’s mostly favortism on my part. And Light’s much more ambitious and his mental strength is much greater. I’ll try to make them more ‘buisness-associate’ like in the future. Thanks for the reviews!

  60. Captain Short 711 Says:

    :shock: gasp!!!! I’ve never seen/read death note ever b4! (shame on me :-( ) but its definately the next book I’ll be reading!(apart from book 6)such a cool story by the way!:-D

  61. Captain Short 711 Says:

    I cant make smiley faces! I’ll try again :-D

  62. Captain Short 711 Says:

    ( YAY!! idid it!!) :-D

  63. AF rules Says:

    When will you update? 0_0

  64. OliverWoodsgirl223 Says:

    ARGH! You still haven’t answered mah question, ARE MELLO AND NEAR GOING TO BE IN THIS? They gotta B! Love ur update!

  65. AF rules Says:

    Please update. You haven’t updated in like a month. :(

  66. Star Jinin Says:

    Sorry! I was on vacation for two weeks and I also kinda forgot about this site (SHAME on me!). I’ll try to make time for this story. FF.net is SO addicting!!!
    Yeah, Near and Mello are definete maybes. I can TRY to squeeze them in even if I don’t kill L off, but keep in mind that they’re only like, fourteen when the Kira case starts.

  67. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    wow, GO ANIME AND MANGA!!!!!, i didnt reed it b-cuz, i never watched death note, BUT I HEARD OF IT SO MANY TIMES!!! i’ll read or wwatch it then reed this.

  68. Star Jinin Says:

    MAHI!!! UR BACK!!! *glomps Mahi*
    I missed you!!!
    And yes, DN is a awesome series. I’ve pused aside everything for my DN obsession. But just so you know, it has some mature themes in it.
    And no, I have not abandoned this story, god forbid. I am just a little occupied with ff.net right now.

  69. AF rules Says:

    IM SORRY! I READ CHAPTER 13 :( Minerva’s a psyco.

  70. AF rules Says:

    When will you update! :sad: :cry:

  71. AF rules Says:

    PLEASE UPDATE! I love your story! Im going crazy! Grrrrrrrrr :evil:

  72. AF rules Says:

    UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! :twisted: I’ll kill you if you don’t! *writes name in Death Note* AHAHAHAHA :evil:

  73. AF rules Says:

    UPDATE! Please Please! GAAAHHH Are you dead? Have you forgoten this story? WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  74. Star Jinin Says:

    I feel SO guilty! I just am very busy, and ff.net has stolen my attention…I will probably update…maybe…gah! I’m a rotten procrastinator and I know it…

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