Death Note
Written on May 28th, 2008 by Star JininStory Details
(5 votes, average: 4 out of 5)
Loading ...Yay! Thanks for the reviews! I luv Death Note as much as you do! Here’s chapter 6!
Chapter 6: ‘Accident’
Artemis did exceptionally on his job. Covered in cam-foil, he was invisible to the naked eye (not that he needed it, as he learned to shield by now) and Light and Ryuk didn’t even suspect a thing. This would have been an exellent opportunity to collect information…if only there was anything suspicious about Light at all.
Another six crimminals were killed… most bafflingly. The first three were simple heart attacks…but the rest did something unusual before they died.
The first man cut his finger and drew a five-pointed star inside a circle with his own blood, then died. The second escaped to a restroom and collapsed. The third had written a dying message:
Lord have mercy,
Do what I can, I’ll either be hanged or
you know it, killed by Kira, I
know about him. He’s going to get me
L wondered. If Kira can control the time crimminals die, maybe he can control the actions before they die? Wait! This… this says:
Lord have mercy,
Do what I can, I’ll either be hanged or
you know it, killed by Kira, I
know about him. He’s going to get me
“Chief! Please only tell the media that the crimminals only died of heart attacks. Kira probably used the crimminals to test something. We don’t want him to know if he suceeded or not”
“Treating human beings as lab rats…it’s abdominable!” Chief Yagami muttered in disgust.
* * *
Light woke up early this morning and grabbed the morning paper.
“Got your test result?” Ryuk asked. Light held up the newspaper.
Crimminal holds up convenience store and gets stabbed to death. Police releases employee as acting in self-defense
“The Death Note’s really useful. My other test results were already entered into Dad’s computer” Light referred to Soichiro Yagami, who was in fact, the superintendent of the NPA. Light had hacked into his computer the night before.
* * *
Beep beep. Artemis’s cell phone rang. It was a text message from L.
Master Fowl, Raye Penber will be taking over your shift today. Actually, he had been doing so since yesterday, but I thought you should know.
Artemis sighed. He could head back to the hotel, but he was still too curious for his own good. It didn’t hurt if he followed Yagami-kun for another day. He activated his Hummingbird H7 (Foaly had done him quite a lot of favors ever since the demon incident). He just managed to catch Light as he headed out the door to the Spaceland bus stop.
“So you’re going to make the convict attack your date?” Ryuk asked.
“Huh? Ryuk, you didn’t see the details I wrote for the cause of death?” Ryuk had mentioned that he was being followed yesterday by a middle-aged man, and he fully intended to get rid of him. He knew what he looked like, and all he needed was a name.
“It’s no fun if I know what’s going to happen” He replied.
Artemis could not catch what Light Yagami was muttering about over the roars of the buses, but his suspicions that it was another fairy aiding him was nagging at him again. He’d call Foaly about this theory, but L had demanded that he’d leave all his communication devices with Watari. Not even Foaly’s paranoia could match up with L’s.
Just then, he noticed a girl at the bus stop. Perhaps Light was going on a date.
“Light! I haven’t been to Spaceland since Junior High! And I get you all to myself! This is gonna be fun!” Yuri clung to Light like a parasite.
“Uh, yeah…” Light muttered.
Raye Penber watched carefully from the shadows.
He only goes to school and that prep academy. It’s the weekend and he goes on a date. He’s a ordinary teenager. Light Yagami, no grounds for suspicion. I don’t think I need to shadow Chief Yagami’s daughter. I’ll just shadow his son one more day…
Penber gets on the bus too as Light and his date Yuri board as well. The FBI agent sits behind them as Artemis also follows, shielded (cameras can penetrate cam-foil and he didn’t want to take the risk). At the second stop, a short man enters the bus.
He’s here! Light thought. The man presses a handgun to the head of the driver.
“This bus has just been hijacked, ladies and gentlemen! Anyone who makes a sound gets their damn head blown off!” Many of the passengers start cowering in fear while Light sat, unperturbed. Artemis was troubled. He could easily disable the man shielded, but then the passengers would not understand how a man suddenly got wrestled to the ground, and if he shown himself and tried to disarm the man, more than likely, people would start to wonder how in the world did a boy just appear out of thin air.
I know this man. He’s the drug addict, Kiichiro Osoreda on TV who robbed the bank and escaped the other day. Didn’t think this sort of thing happened in Japan, though. Penber thought.
“You know the Spaceland phone number, right? Call it and tell them what’s happening” Demanded Osoreda.
The driver picked up the phone shakily. “This is Sasaki of bus #124. This bus has just been hijacked by a man with a gun!”
“Gimme that” The hijacker snatched the phone. “Now, take all the money you made yesterday and let a woman deliver it two stops from here, and no one else! Try to be smart with me or call the police and I’ll kill everyone on this bus!”
Light scribbled a note to Yuri.
Yuri, don’t worry. It’s going to be okay. I’ll look for a chance to jump him and grab his gun. My dad’s a detective so he told me what to do in cases like this. He’s pretty weak looking, I’m sure I can restrain him.
Artemis strained over to look at at the note. He shook his head. This guy must either be very brave or very stupid. Raye leaned forward and said.
“Don’t do that. It’s too dangerous. Let me take care of it” Raye whispered.
“I don’t mean to be rude, but you have a slight accent. You’re not Japenese, are you?” Light asked.
“I’m American. My mother’s Japenese, though” Raye knew what Light was getting at.
“Any proof that you’re not the hijacker’s accomplice?” Light questioned.
Yuri shuddered harder. “My gosh, you don’t mean…”
“It’s pretty common practice. They make you think there’s only one guy, but they put someone else in the back to keep watch and come to the rescue if something happens. Any proof you’re not his accomplice?”
Penber had no choice. If Light was Kira, he could just give the hijacker a heart attack. He took out his ID.
“You want proof? Here.”
FBI? So L’s using FBI agents to probe the NPA! Thought Light. Artemis almost shouted in protest. Was this man stupid? Did he just show his ID to a ‘possible’ Kira suspect?
“All right, I won’t ask what a FBI agent is doing in Japan. Do you have a gun?” Asked Light quizzically
“Yes” Raye answered. But I only pull out the gun as a last resort. I don’t want police asking me what I’m doing in Japan…
“So you’ll take care of it if something happens?”
“Yes…” The top priority is saving these people’s lives…
Light suddenly dropped a crumpled piece of paper. “Oops…” He reached down to grab it.
“Hold it! What’s that paper!? Trying to plan something, aren’t you?” Osoreda picked up the scrap of paper.
Oh no! If he reads that paper, he’ll find out that Light was planning to jump him! Thought Artemis and Penber.
The paper read:
Minami Park
bus stop, 11:27
Spaceland bus stop
“Tch! What’s this? Somewhere you were meeting your date? Drop something again, and I’ll kill ya!” He turned towards the back. “And that goes for all of ya’ll”
His eyes suddenly widened. “What the hell? How long have you been there, monster?”
“Hm? You mean me? You can see me?” Ryuk was surprised.
“Don’t move, monster! Stay there or I’ll shoot!” The drug addict started brandishing his gun.
“He’s on PCP or something! He’s halucinating! Everyone get down!” Raye demanded. Artemis seriously doubted that he was halucinating, judging from the symptoms. Perhaps…it was something more? Fairy technology that allows only certain people to see them? Well, but seeing a three foot tall fairy wasn’t enough to scare this man that much.
“Oh, I get it…the note he tore was out of the Death Note. So only this guy can see me, but no one else can. Smart kid, Light!”
Osoreda started firing. The bullets went right through Ryuk.
“Sorry, dude. I’m a shinigami. Bullets aren’t going to kill me. Smart how Light put it all together. And he got his follower to show him his ID…”
When Ororeda saw that the bullets weren’t working, he demanded the driver open the door. He ran out of the bus. A car came and-
Crash.
The perpentrator was dead.
“Exactly 11:15. The Death Note’s on time”
* * *
“I’m actually on a top secret mission and if the police come…”
“Understood. I won’t tell anyone about meeting you. That includes my father, of course.”
“Thanks…now I don’t want to be here when the police arrive…” Raye hurried off.
“Now, Yuri, I know we were set to go to Spaceland, but after something as freaky as this…” Light turned to his date.
“Yeah…maybe some other time, Light… Bye!” Yuri also hurried towards the direction of home. Light (and Artemis) watched her leave. Artemis also tried to walk quietly out of the bus.
“But where do you think you’re going?” A hand shot out and grabbed Artemis’s wrist. Artemis turned to face a furious Light.
“Uh oh…Busted!” Ryuk giggled.
“How did you?” Artemis stammered.
“That’s not important. What’s important is that you’ve seen something you shouldn’t have!” This boy was trouble. If he’d gone and blabbed about how Penber had shown someone his ID while following Light Yagami…
But this guy is only a child…surely death wasn’t the only option I have…
Light made a jerking movement, and smashed Artemis’s head against the bus. The area was empty, except for themselves. Artemis started coughing blood. There. That had to be enough for a concussion. Artemis collapsed on the cold pavement.
“Um…Light? Why didn’t you simply use the Death Note?” Ryuk asked. Light did not reply as he headed back home.
At least the boy got to live, even if he is going to have memory loss.
And he walked away from the lucky mud boy who was the only one to survive the wrath of Kira.
May 28th, 2008 at 5:51 am
OH.MY.GOD I just LOVE death note I’m so happy you did a crossover! The story is really nice so far, I like it! Maybe Artemis should be on Light’s side. I like it that way. =D Just an opinion.
But great job so far. I’ll definitely check back.
May 29th, 2008 at 1:07 am
Death Note is the awesomest anime/magna ever!!!!! Maybe Arty’d do better if he’s with L. You know, Light’s kind of like a more dangerous version of his 12 year old self.
May 29th, 2008 at 5:13 am
I’m not into Manga, but I found Light’s story to be fascinating. I’m inclined to think that Artemis’s brainpower is match enough for anyone, but with a tool like the Death Note, he may have found a competent adversary…or will they be conspirators? It could easily go either way, and I don’t have a preference. I’ll check in on your story again.
May 29th, 2008 at 11:40 pm
I love Deathnote! It’s so crazy when that really hot girl is jacked by that guy then he is killed by the truck! It’s so cool!
May 29th, 2008 at 11:41 pm
That girl is sorta cute, but really hot? Nah! But I still live that show!
May 30th, 2008 at 12:07 am
My vote’s still that Arty teams up with L. And Yotsuba is the…. rival I think of the police that Light’s dad works or is in charge of.
May 30th, 2008 at 12:49 am
Yotsuba is the company that got ahold of the Death Note after Light loses his memory…:o Oops. I think I said too much!
Hmm…also, maybe I’ll also give Arty the ownership of one Death Note later on and he loses his memory later…but I still need a dominant alliance.
May 30th, 2008 at 8:43 am
Maybe I change my mind… Artemis and L seem better. Now that I think of it. Yeah, maybe I’ll go with that.
May 30th, 2008 at 10:30 pm
Okay! Seeing that no one else on the site seemingly even reads Death Note, I’ll go ahead with Arty and L. L wins! I’ll work on it right away! Don’t worry. I’ll make SURE that Artemis doesn’t give Light away…
May 31st, 2008 at 3:50 am
i cool it’s death note i would never have thought of that and if i did i don’t think i would have done it
May 31st, 2008 at 8:07 am
i love death note!
artemis should definately be on L’s side. Light is too evil. and twisted. even tho i cant help but love him! ive only read the first two mangas tho.. gotta catch up!
May 31st, 2008 at 11:28 am
Ahh. Of course. I like Light too. But poor thing… *keeps quiet*
May 31st, 2008 at 5:58 pm
I like Light too!
I think one of the main reasons why he is so popular is because nothing can stand in his way. Not Ryuzaki, the FBI agents, being locked up, or the death of family members. He’s a hurricane that will tear up anything in its path. But I have more fantasies about Ryuzaki rather than Light…Ryuzaki’s so cute! Anyway, I’ll work on ch 4 if I have time.
June 1st, 2008 at 7:10 am
oh i don’t know i think it would be cool artemis teamed up with L and meet light and then betraed L but what next…:( ah…never mind
June 1st, 2008 at 7:26 am
and great story
June 1st, 2008 at 7:37 am
Yes Ryuzaki is cute!!! Haha, he’s my favourite.
June 2nd, 2008 at 5:59 am
Wow, I liked chapter 5 a lot!! It’s really nice, keep going!
June 2nd, 2008 at 5:52 pm
Death and Artemis Fowl is THE greatest x-over ever! ^^ I wonder why no one ever did it though….
Chp 5 was my favorite chappie so far! ^^ If L (to Arty) is still the fancy L on the laptop, how is he eating a strawberry and drinking coffee?
This is BlackOpal. I merged your messages. Please try to avoid double posting.
June 2nd, 2008 at 7:50 pm
Once again a wonderful piece of Fanfiction from Star Jinin! Death Note is like the best ever manga in the world. I love drawing manga (however terrible at it I am). By the way, I know this will sound rather annoying but you spelt recognising wrong. Keep up the good work!!!
June 2nd, 2008 at 11:15 pm
mayqueen17-We know he’s eating because the story is told from third-person, not first person.
artyrox-I enjoy drawing manga too! And I’m really good at it. Friends ask me to draw them all the time!
Also, I’m glad you pointed the mistake out. Even if I’m too lazy to correct it because I need my time to write updates, thanks for doing it anyway
June 3rd, 2008 at 5:36 am
This is a very good story, but I would like to to point out something. When there is more than one person talking, it’s difficult to keep track of who’s saying what. So, can you maybe distinguish the dialogue. That would be much appreciated.
June 3rd, 2008 at 1:56 pm
Ahh, I loved chapter 6!
June 5th, 2008 at 1:12 am
Ahhhhhhh! Arty got hurt!
I think you took a big risk of letting Arty forget things, but you pulled it off good, sister! ^.^
Edited by MMK: I merged your posts. Please try not to douple post. Thanks.
June 5th, 2008 at 1:15 am
Hey, Star, are you on any other sites like Artemis Fowl Confidential? Or ff.net?
June 5th, 2008 at 4:53 am
Nope. I perfer this site! It’s much better than those other poorly made sites. And it’s not spammy either. I do go to ff.net, only I hate the ads.
Anyway, ch 8 is up! Plot twist! Lol. I know that he didn’t lose his memory because of the Death Note, so his memory should not have come back, but I needed to add that in anyway
June 6th, 2008 at 11:55 pm
*gasps* Arty crossed over to the….. other side! Or did he?
June 7th, 2008 at 8:51 am
I loved the new chapters! I really like where this is going. I too go to ff.net sometimes. I plan on starting there too. But I’ll still remain here
June 8th, 2008 at 4:23 pm
Inkheart, I suspect you can’t rate stories or get to your own because the editors might have taken that privilege away from you, because you keep flaming stories without any explination. If you do not stop flaming stories, you might be banned from Fangathering altogether. Please stop.
June 8th, 2008 at 5:53 pm
Inkheart’s comments have been moved to spam.
If you see anymore just ignore them.
-BlackOpal
Regarding the story:
This sounds like such a cool thing! I only read one chapter, I’ve never seen/read Death Note, but it’s a great idea.
Maybe I’ll read the rest (if it’s not too confusing) and see how it turns out.
June 11th, 2008 at 1:13 am
Don’t you just love it his eyes glow red?
June 11th, 2008 at 8:37 pm
YOU READ THE UNFINISHED CHAPTER!? HOW COULD YOU?! *sigh*. Curiosity killed the cat, you know! *cackles as mayqueen17’s name is written in the death note*
June 12th, 2008 at 10:12 am
Haha, well, I absolutely willed myself not to read it.
How could you kill poor mayqueen17 for that?
-chuckles-
June 13th, 2008 at 9:50 pm
*can’t tell you how awesome Chp. 9 was because she’s floating around as a spirit somewhere….)
June 14th, 2008 at 7:33 am
Awww haha. Poor thing. Oh and now that I think of it, Star Jinin, your name actually sounds really, really…chinese. It really does. The thought just struck me suddenly. 0.0
June 15th, 2008 at 2:33 am
Yes, it is! Glad you noticed! People keep saying that Asian writers are bad at literature, and I’m pretty much here to prove them wrong. I picked a username close to my own initials S.J. ‘Jinin’ sounds like the Chinese sound effect for ‘twinkling’
June 15th, 2008 at 8:39 am
OHH!! I’m Asian too!! And I know plenty of Chinese.
Which country are you from?
June 15th, 2008 at 11:58 am
Look, this is getting REALLY off-topic, but if it makes you happy…I used to live in China.
Also, so the next part of the story is where Misa comes in, right? I forgot (shame on me)
June 19th, 2008 at 8:51 pm
I didn’t peek this time! ^^ I hope Holly knows what the heck she getting into!
June 23rd, 2008 at 3:38 am
People are here to prove this wrong… How interesting. Even though this is off topic, I am Chinese. Some people think we are the smartest people in the world! Some think that. Some people thimk we are just plain dumb.
This story is interesting. Even though I started to watch it back in Feb., I’m hooked. Artemis, in my opinion, is a little OOC. The disappearance of Naomi Misora? What happened? I know I peeked, but you don’t know my name or how I look like. There is no way you can kill me.
June 23rd, 2008 at 3:29 pm
Oh YEAH!? Wanna bet? *trades for Shinigami eyes*
Okay, Naomi died because of the death note. Light wrote it in to make her commit suicide without letting her body be found after he manipulated her into telling her real name, if you read carefully.
I had a theory about how the Death Note corrupts the owner’s mind, and a with a ego like Artemis’s, I thought it would be reasonable that he would be lured by the Death Note.
June 23rd, 2008 at 8:12 pm
Well… That is possible… Besides even if you get Shinigami eyes, you would need my picture. So, how are you going to get it? Tell me that!
June 25th, 2008 at 7:19 am
Wow, that was awesome! I’ve only read the first volume of Death Note, but it scared me for some reason, so I didn’t read the rest. But your story isn’t scary at all, it’s great! You’re going to add more right? Please?
June 25th, 2008 at 11:24 pm
HS9-Oh yeah? Well, there’s this new *coughcough* invention called facebook. Ever heard of that? Oh wait…I need your name for that. Oh snap.
MK-Yeah. The artist once said that he was afraid he was cursed for drawing shinigami. I was really afraid the story was too confusing and I haven’t even come up with a plot yet…and it’s not gonna be surprising if I take suggestions. I’m glad you enjoyed it!
June 28th, 2008 at 12:56 am
HA! I spoiled your plan! What’s Facebook? By the way, won’t you feel guilty if you kill someone from your own race? Or are you so cold-blooded that you will kill me? You still have not updated.
July 3rd, 2008 at 3:51 am
I LLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEE
Deathnote! Your Story is AWESOME!
July 5th, 2008 at 3:10 pm
The second Kira is Minerva isn’t it? -_-; No offense, I just don’t like her.
July 5th, 2008 at 4:13 pm
Well, yeah! That’s why I made her the second Kira. I don’t like her either, but I hate Misa more. And putting Misa in would make the story SO predictable to DN fans! Misa is such a moron. Another genius would be better. And I have to balance the AF and the DN characters otherwise I’m on shaky ground even for a crossover
July 5th, 2008 at 4:21 pm
NOOOO! If you kill L…..:( He’s already dead! Can’t you just be nice to the poor guy for once? Well…I’m guessing the second Kira is either Minerva or Misa…Misa-Misa is the second Kira after all! DEATH NOTE RULES! Also, is Mello and Near going to come in? Near is so cute!
July 5th, 2008 at 8:56 pm
Uh…I just told her that Minerva is the second Kira…I mean, I made it really obvious. I guess most DN fans are a bit biased. And I haven’t decided if I’m really gonna kill L. I might, I might not. I hope to end it after the sucessors come in, but before the 1/28 meeting. I’m not gonna include Mikami either. I hate that guy!
July 6th, 2008 at 6:59 pm
just don’t kill L! He’s an awesome character! ^^ I trust that you can make everything work out if you let him live.
July 7th, 2008 at 8:01 pm
I like your story! But PLEASE don’t kill L!
July 8th, 2008 at 3:06 am
Silence, pathetic mortals! I, with the almighty fanfic authoress powers bestowed upon me, shall decide the fate of L! Muahahahahah! Ha..ha. ha. *coughchoke*
Sorry, I got a little carried away there. But I do know what I’m gonna do about our little panda. No matter what the outcome, please don’t try to flame me or anything. I know all about those L diehards out there and so please keep reading till the end, no matter what happens.
July 9th, 2008 at 5:39 am
I loved chapter 12! I wonder what Artemis is planning.
July 9th, 2008 at 3:28 pm
Er…you weren’t supposed to read that chapter. It’s an work in progress, meaning that you should heed the bolded text and wait till I post an announcement to read it! Grr…people just don’t get that…
July 11th, 2008 at 2:33 pm
the code thing was a cool idea, but i dont get it that much
July 12th, 2008 at 12:14 pm
Hi! I am geniustkw, singaporean chinese AF Fan! Nice story, I like how you combine Death Note with Artemis Fowl, it’s so fun and interesting, if you won’t mind, please give me your comments about my story Artemis Fowl and the Mallan Rebellion, Thanks!
geniustkw
July 13th, 2008 at 5:09 pm
i like this crossover, but i really think you make arty a little stupid. i can never see him as a pawn to anyone. i see him ruling and planning the whole thing. make him win with l though because l is awesome.
July 13th, 2008 at 5:39 pm
I agree with mally. Artemis would never let himself be commanded like that. The storys very good though.
July 13th, 2008 at 7:07 pm
Sigh…I know, but I like Light being the smarter one, and I know that Artemis is being a bit submissive. But I suppose he did learn some humility and…well…okay, I don’t have an excuse. I just wanted Light to be the dominant one! Artemis can tolerate being told to do something, while Light will throw a hissy fit or find some way out of it. I admit, it’s mostly favortism on my part. And Light’s much more ambitious and his mental strength is much greater. I’ll try to make them more ‘buisness-associate’ like in the future. Thanks for the reviews!
July 22nd, 2008 at 12:17 pm
July 22nd, 2008 at 12:18 pm
I cant make smiley faces! I’ll try again
July 22nd, 2008 at 12:19 pm
( YAY!! idid it!!)
July 22nd, 2008 at 8:47 pm
When will you update? 0_0
July 31st, 2008 at 12:29 am
ARGH! You still haven’t answered mah question, ARE MELLO AND NEAR GOING TO BE IN THIS? They gotta B! Love ur update!
August 3rd, 2008 at 12:58 am
Please update. You haven’t updated in like a month.
August 12th, 2008 at 12:16 am
Sorry! I was on vacation for two weeks and I also kinda forgot about this site (SHAME on me!). I’ll try to make time for this story. FF.net is SO addicting!!!
Yeah, Near and Mello are definete maybes. I can TRY to squeeze them in even if I don’t kill L off, but keep in mind that they’re only like, fourteen when the Kira case starts.
August 14th, 2008 at 5:14 pm
wow, GO ANIME AND MANGA!!!!!, i didnt reed it b-cuz, i never watched death note, BUT I HEARD OF IT SO MANY TIMES!!! i’ll read or wwatch it then reed this.
August 16th, 2008 at 12:08 am
MAHI!!! UR BACK!!! *glomps Mahi*
I missed you!!!
And yes, DN is a awesome series. I’ve pused aside everything for my DN obsession. But just so you know, it has some mature themes in it.
And no, I have not abandoned this story, god forbid. I am just a little occupied with ff.net right now.
August 18th, 2008 at 4:28 am
IM SORRY! I READ CHAPTER 13
Minerva’s a psyco.
September 4th, 2008 at 10:20 pm
When will you update!
September 11th, 2008 at 1:06 am
PLEASE UPDATE! I love your story! Im going crazy! Grrrrrrrrr
September 19th, 2008 at 7:25 pm
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I’ll kill you if you don’t! *writes name in Death Note* AHAHAHAHA 
October 18th, 2008 at 3:49 pm
UPDATE! Please Please! GAAAHHH Are you dead? Have you forgoten this story? WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
October 20th, 2008 at 2:56 am
I feel SO guilty! I just am very busy, and ff.net has stolen my attention…I will probably update…maybe…gah! I’m a rotten procrastinator and I know it…