Commedy in turns!OLIVE YOUR TURN!
Written on January 31st, 2008 by mahi101 AF FanStory Details
(10 votes, average: 3.8 out of 5)
Loading ...THIS STORY IS ONLY ON MY ACCOUNT BUT IT IS DONE BY JELLY , OLIVE AND I. WE ALL DESERVE EQUAL CREDIT IN IT!
CHAPTER ONE- MAHI
Riley sighed as she came to Fowl Manner, her mother thought she was stupid , dumb , ununique she was sending her to spend her summer in Fowl manner………. with a genuis who was going to TUTOR her.
“Could this GET any worse?” Riley said dragging herself to the door.
Angeline Fowl answered the door,
“Why, hello Riley! We have set up everything for you! Your mother gave me a scedule for you…..”Angeline started but Riley wasn’t listenning, instaed thiking
”Mother already thought of a scedule? She’s already one step ahead!Maybe…. if I annoy these people to death… wait then I’ll get in trouble… the boy! He is a genuis, if I annoy him , he’ll probably find some unique way to throw me out….RIGHT?” She thought , plans started to form in her head.
“This might be fun after all……………” Riley thought as she walked to the room , it was Artemis’s room , it was time for her lesson ….. she heard music comming from the room …. ROCK music……She opened the door and fell back and tried to crawl away and she laid on her stomach with her hands over her eyes…….. Artemis fell back in his underwear and dropped the pencil he was using for a pic for the fake guitar he was playing in his underwear. Artemis grabbed the towel and ran into the bathroom……..
Okay Artemis was pretending to play a guitar in his underwear and she walked in by accieddent , I’m not making Artemis OC , he was doing that because he had acciedently insulted Holly and she mesmerised him to do that for payback.
Artemis came out in an Armani suit with his face crimson red.
Riley oppened one eye to make sure everything was in perfect order and she came in…
“Let’s sart the lesson.” He siaid , when she sat next to him he said ..”I can explain…..”
Riley raised an eyebrow….
“Okay , I ……lets say… out of my mind… please forget that , that isn’t a very good first impression anyway…..”Artemis still felt a bit weird.
Finially Riley spoke….”I could have gone my whole life without seeing that…………”
That might have stunk… sorry! I’m not a good comedy writer really!……….
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January 31st, 2008 at 1:09 am
i c spelling mistakes……. i noe!n ill try to fix them but i have to go now! JELLY do the next capter!
January 31st, 2008 at 1:50 am
My cousin plays the air gitaur in his Batman underwear, and he’s 17!
Men. Of cousre it’s not as funny as when I picture Arty the criminal mastermind doing that! This was really funny!!!!
January 31st, 2008 at 2:32 am
Um… Mahi? We’re still doing ~Mystery in Turns~. I have too much to update already. I’m sorry. But is you want me to do this, you’ll have to wait until we finish ~Mystery in Turns~…
January 31st, 2008 at 3:03 am
oh alrite , Jelly suggested we start doing others as well , I’ll hold off on it if you want me too.
January 31st, 2008 at 4:28 am
I know people who play guitar in their underwear and that is pretty much a reenactment of what I’ve seen. When I saw it though I covered my eyes and shreeked and I quote “MY EYES! MY EYES!”
January 31st, 2008 at 1:44 pm
yeah… that’s what i was going to make riley scream
January 31st, 2008 at 11:12 pm
lol that was good! I will get started on the next chapter to this back in Ireland and Mystery in turns! OH I got a good idea!!!! what if when we repost Mystery in turns we repost comedy in turns too!
January 31st, 2008 at 11:18 pm
YES! but…… 017350 doesnt want to continue…..read the comments!
January 31st, 2008 at 11:22 pm
I know! I think he is just overwhelmed right now! wut if we hold off on this for a while? like we finish a few stories we already started and then hop onto this! u noe more time and all?
January 31st, 2008 at 11:28 pm
yeah…. like I said!
January 31st, 2008 at 11:55 pm
I finished mystery in turns tho.
February 1st, 2008 at 12:54 am
alright, I will type the new chappy, (I updated Back in Ireland so I have time for it)and we will see what happens with 017350. OK? I mean with him it is ussually nice quick chapters that r 2 the point so he should have time todo them, idk let’s ask.
February 1st, 2008 at 1:11 am
u can find my chapter @ http://artemisfowl.fangathering.com/fanfiction/funny/comedy-in-turns-lol-mahi-4-u
February 1st, 2008 at 4:15 am
I ADDED IT ON! HE IS NOT THE ONLY ONE WITH EXRA WORK! MY BOOK BAGS SO FULL ITS HARD TO TAKE THE BOOKS OUYT! I HAVE TO DO AN EXTRA SCIENCE PROJECT BECAUSE I AM ” CAPABLE ” AND I HAD TO GET CHOSEN FOR ANOTHER FEILD TRIP TO EXAMINE BILOAGY THINGS! AND I HAVE TO MAIL TEACHERS THE NOTES FOR OUR NEXT MEEETING! AND I HAVE TOTUR HOMEWORK! AND IT WAS JUST PARENTS-TEACHER CONFRESSS! AND I - I WANNNA WATCH T.V!!!!!!!! my dad wants me to still do more more work! I AM UPSET! ………… my science folder just went flying over the roof! MY NOTES! I’LL FAIl!
February 1st, 2008 at 4:16 am
SORRY… I just HAD to let that out!oh yeah! AND I HAVE AN INTERVIEW ON SATURDAY!
February 1st, 2008 at 11:06 pm
um Ok….. I hate weekend homework too but u always fit it in AND find time to watch T.V. I probably won’t update because of the precious T.V. idk when should I post the other? or should I wait?
February 2nd, 2008 at 12:04 am
WAIT… now chapter 3 is going to be who’s turn?
February 3rd, 2008 at 2:53 am
idk maybe we can find someone else… Olive?
February 3rd, 2008 at 5:04 am
sure.. lets ask her! OLIVE DO YOU WANT TO DO THE NEXT CHAPTER! AND BE PART OF THE COMEDY IN TURNS?
February 4th, 2008 at 3:46 am
OLIVE!!!!
plz?
February 4th, 2008 at 4:33 am
OH WRITE THAT IN A STORY SHE WROTE! SHE’LL BE SURE TO CHECK THERE!
February 8th, 2008 at 11:14 pm
OK I did and she said yes so… u might want to change the beinging of the story
February 8th, 2008 at 11:54 pm
yup.. WIKLL DO RITE NOW!
February 10th, 2008 at 10:04 pm
I like it. Sort Of…. You need to hire an expert comedian. I know a good one named 017350. And he works for free!
February 15th, 2008 at 5:02 am
Okay, I published my part of the story! Sorry it took so long but I’m in the middle of a writers block and wanted to give you all a chance to write.
February 16th, 2008 at 5:42 pm
Mahi, r u going 2 add it ne time soon?
February 20th, 2008 at 4:05 am
Ohh!!! Can I join comedy in turns? It may not look like it but I am often bored and I am an expert in comedy! CAN I PLEASE!?!??!??!??!??!?!??!??!?!??!?!??!??!??!?!??!?!?? Okay, I will stop with the exclamation and question marks…
February 21st, 2008 at 6:04 am
Okay I upd8, and I read all the comments, 017350 and star jinin, Its okay with me, but it’s not only me here, pleas e ask jelly and olive as well….
February 21st, 2008 at 11:28 pm
hmmm…. maybe they can join the next one… we don’t want to have to many people doing this then it gets hard! will see what Olive says, personally I say next time guys! sorry! I just don’t think It would work out rite now!
February 22nd, 2008 at 12:15 am
kk, then Jelly rite the next chappy, lets see what olive says,
February 24th, 2008 at 11:52 pm
I think they should have been already even with the underwear thing…but where’s the fun in that!?
February 24th, 2008 at 11:56 pm
lol, I noe, but imagine, the one guy you adore will never adore you again, do you think making someone walk out in there underwear is enough? I THINK NOT! And lol anyway its funny.
Jelly write the next chapter.
Olive- it’s you choice now, I say yes Jelly says no. You’re the tie-breaker.If you have no idea what I’m talk about then read comments 24 -29
February 25th, 2008 at 12:46 am
Also, I think even though Artemis messed up her love life, he still meant well for Holly’s lip fungus XD
February 25th, 2008 at 12:56 am
lol
February 26th, 2008 at 10:32 pm
OMG there is so much pressure! I hate being the tie breaker. I think… It’s tough, but I think we should wait until next time. It’s really nothing personal but it may get to complicated to have so many people at once. Sorry!
On another note, who’s turn is it to write?
February 26th, 2008 at 10:58 pm
Okay, sorry guys! and aslo IT S JHELLY’S TURNz!
February 26th, 2008 at 11:05 pm
Jelly please write the next chapter!
February 28th, 2008 at 1:08 am
No rush though. I need time to come up with another idea. JK go at whatever speed you want.
February 28th, 2008 at 3:46 pm
Can I write a chapter please? I can write comedy! Sort of… Read my comedy, The Doughnut Dilemna, and see if you like my style.
February 29th, 2008 at 3:35 am
OOOOOOOOOH! I m SOOOOOOOO sorry I havn’t been on in along time! life has been being lived down under and things have been getting in the way! I PROMISE I will write it tommorow if I don’t you can kick me out of the story!
February 29th, 2008 at 9:56 pm
who’s turn now?
February 29th, 2008 at 9:58 pm
LOL, dont worry, we would never do that! We need the commedy! and Its olives turn. I love the chappy u wrote!
February 29th, 2008 at 10:03 pm
thanks! But when i click on it it says “sorry not found”
February 29th, 2008 at 10:25 pm
OK I’m going to write it the second I have the chance.
February 29th, 2008 at 10:29 pm
thanx olive and whats not found ?
February 29th, 2008 at 10:43 pm
The chappy. nvm tho. one of my com. cords was unplugged.
February 29th, 2008 at 10:47 pm
lol, kk.
February 29th, 2008 at 11:45 pm
after this story is done don’t repost it! when we finish the next we will repost every story we had written that is “in turns”!
March 1st, 2008 at 1:03 am
OH!… that sounds awesum!
March 2nd, 2008 at 10:49 pm
wut do think about calling our last story ‘Moonshine’ ? and lastly do u think I should delete Peter and…. Artemis? ?
March 2nd, 2008 at 10:56 pm
Sweet! I love Holly taking revenge on Artemis. I think that once Artemis finds out what he was doing, he will suicide. Poor Arty!!!!!1
March 2nd, 2008 at 10:58 pm
olive? waddya think?
March 3rd, 2008 at 12:01 am
~LOL~ All of them are HYLARIOUS! ~LOL~ Can’t wait for the next one, can you add mine? I have three in a different story called “Funny Stuff! Update!”. Copy any one you want …
March 3rd, 2008 at 12:07 am
*coughchaptercoughthreecoughcough*
March 3rd, 2008 at 12:11 am
I’m thinking you can somehow add it in here. FYI
March 3rd, 2008 at 1:02 am
lolz, well I dont know about that but Jelly that sounds gr8 and thanx 4 the comments evryone!
March 4th, 2008 at 10:22 pm
I totally love it Jelly, as usual! I will find time to get my part on as soon as physically possible. I just have this other story on my mind and need to write that one first, or at least start it.
March 5th, 2008 at 10:57 pm
I posted my part! Who’s turn is it now?
March 12th, 2008 at 2:27 am
mine?
March 17th, 2008 at 9:21 pm
its my turn and olive can u give me the link to the part.. im wayyyy soorrryy its jus that my dad said no internet and its been two weeks and im going crazy!soo.. im really sorry to jelly and olive and guess wut? Im not ganna b on for another 2 weeks…….
March 18th, 2008 at 12:05 am
http://artemisfowl.fangathering.com/fanfiction/general/comedy-in-turns
omg that sucks! we’ll miss you!
March 22nd, 2008 at 6:07 am
Hey there!
Just browsing through when I saw this… do you think I could join the next one?? I want to! And would love to!! PLEASE? *puppy eyes*
March 22nd, 2008 at 5:21 pm
You guys have been putting a lot of work into this. And you’ve been doing it for a long time.
I would start one like this. But there are so many authors I like, I wouldn’t be able to choose who to add!
But anyways, it’s very good! Not many bad things to say about it. Artemis is a bit OOC in some parts, though.
I can’t beleive I still haven’t rated this! Well, I’ll rate it 4/5. Keep up the good work! :)
March 22nd, 2008 at 9:49 pm
thanx, and jelly I’ll add on soon so then it’ll be ur turn.
March 22nd, 2008 at 11:02 pm
sorry I havn’t been on in like 2 months. Life is going on and I feel so overerwhelmed with moving and tests please accept my apology! I will give u the update in a moment.
March 22nd, 2008 at 11:26 pm
http://artemisfowl.fangathering.com/fanfiction/funny/for-mahi-for-comedy-story
go there for next chappy
March 26th, 2008 at 10:56 pm
I am so sorry I haven’t been on. I can’t get on more then once a week with school and my job at the moment. I’ll try to get on again soon.
March 27th, 2008 at 1:34 am
Oh no. Now we’re losing Jelly AND Olive! At least I have good old Mahi 101 AF Fan left. I hope you guys can start getting on again soon!
April 9th, 2008 at 2:59 am
I’m here!
gosh life has been ridiculously busy and the last thing I have gotten to do is come here but still I AM ALIVE!!!! poor Mahi she still hasn’t come back yet….
May 7th, 2008 at 4:04 am
im back.. and alive!!!!!!!!! lolz
May 15th, 2008 at 12:17 am
yay! ppl r coming back!
June 14th, 2008 at 9:10 pm
HI MAHI! we needs Olive tho… OLIVE!!!! neway if she doesn’t come then why don’t we just finish without her.