Clue :) New chapter, and the end!
Written on September 29th, 2007 by arty_and_holly_4everStory Details
(8 votes, average: 3.63 out of 5)
Loading ...10 minutes after they all split up, a door bell rang. Everyone ran to the door and slowly opened it.
“Hello, can i please use your phone, my car broke down,” said a man with a yellow hat.
“sure, here it is,” Butler said, handing the stranger the phone. “can you please make the call in the living room?”
“sure,” he responded, leaving the main hallway and going into the living room
“Okay, lets keep on looking,” whispered butler.
“Right, we’ll make sure the man gets out of the house,” Juliet said.
Everyone left to go back to there places.
“Okay, no1 are you hungry?” asked juliet.
“Yes, lets go into the kitchen, we’ll check on him in 5 minutes,” replied No1. Following juilet into the kitchen.
As soon as they Left the room and were eating a sandwich a gun was fired with a big crack, and a voice called out. No one knew that the murderer accualy knew the guy. And he had to be killed.
September 30th, 2007 at 1:26 am
Is it Juliet? I mean, she may like Artemis and killed Minerva so she could be Artemis’s girlfriend. Or maybe it was Holly. She might like Artemis and killed Minerva. May be it was Artemis. He may have had enough of her and killed her. It can’t be Juilet. You said that the killer was alone with with thier partner. It couldn’t have been Juilet or No 1. Okay. This is my final answer. It is Dave!
September 30th, 2007 at 1:26 am
OHHH I LUV MURDER MYSTERIES!!!!!!!!
hmmmmm…..ummmmm…..oh poopy i don’t know who it is…..oh yea (first comment dance)
September 30th, 2007 at 1:31 am
ohhhh im not telling, but let me say, its shocking!
September 30th, 2007 at 1:53 am
oh, and i’m sorry for those of you who like minerva, but i dont, so i killed her in my story! And if your curios, she was killed with a rope, in the bedroom! lol
September 30th, 2007 at 2:19 am
My answer is still Dave!
September 30th, 2007 at 2:36 am
I think that it was Butler because that would be shocking!!
September 30th, 2007 at 4:39 am
Hey, was the man in the yellow hat that guy from Curious George? Just wondering. Anyway, I’m going to guess Holly because… I don’t know. Because nobody else did, and a lot of authors do the Holly/Minerva love triangle thing.
September 30th, 2007 at 5:42 am
BUTLER! he’s the murdera! he told him to go into the lounge! i dont know why that has anything to do with it but its my only reason!
September 30th, 2007 at 10:44 am
I think artemis.
September 30th, 2007 at 2:54 pm
UPDATE!!! MBYBE ITS N01 HE SEEMS TO BE FULL OF SUPRISES! ALSO MINERVA HURT HIM BEFORE SO HE WANTED TO HURT HER! (I TO THOUGHT OF THE GUY FROM CURIOUS GEORGE.)
October 1st, 2007 at 1:21 am
Yea, it is the guy from curious george.
October 1st, 2007 at 1:34 am
That was a pretty good conclusion, and a nice story overall.
Congrats to everyone who guessed the right person!
October 1st, 2007 at 2:18 am
YAY ME GOT IT RIGHT!
October 1st, 2007 at 9:29 pm
yes! me too. great story! i havent seen a mrder mystery in foreva!
October 2nd, 2007 at 10:51 pm
GOOD JOB to anyone who guessed it right, i also had an alteritive ending and i will write it if anyone wants to read it!
October 3rd, 2007 at 8:02 am
ohhh plz write it
October 3rd, 2007 at 10:34 pm
oh fine,
October 5th, 2007 at 1:54 am
Write another ending!!! YAY~!!!!!
October 5th, 2007 at 2:41 am
YAY u wrote it
October 5th, 2007 at 2:55 am
Holly is the murderer oh no
October 5th, 2007 at 2:56 am
:)
October 5th, 2007 at 2:57 am
how do u do te other smiley faces?
October 5th, 2007 at 2:57 am
Ok one more “)
October 5th, 2007 at 3:27 am
Wow. That is so unlike Holly. But I know how. I mean, who wants Arty to break up with Minerva if they are going out in the sixth book? I know I do.
October 5th, 2007 at 3:27 pm
yea, me 2
October 5th, 2007 at 3:29 pm
Yea, i no, but it was just out of bure randomness that i created this, we were watching tv, n i was all like oh clue would make a lovely story, and my mom was like Be quiet! lol
October 5th, 2007 at 3:30 pm
rofl i like this one….. i’m sitting next to u right now! lol how r u on this lovely afternoon?????? BOB SAYS HI
October 7th, 2007 at 3:02 am
I think it was Butler
October 7th, 2007 at 4:42 am
Hey, I was actually right!
I like the ending additive, it’s a good twist. But there should have been a hint to it in the actual chapters.
October 9th, 2007 at 7:01 pm
yay i was right! this is realy good