Clone Saga

Written on July 21st, 2007 by artyfowl3

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  • Category: General and Other
  • Author: artyfowl3
  • Word Count: 3418
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Chapter five: ‘Till Death Do Us Part

The ex-captain was sitting in her room. She hadn’t budged from that spot since she had spotted the intruder the night before in her apartment.

Who was that? She wondered, what would she want with the commander.

She heard voices downstairs. “No.” said a voice which was obviously Root’s.

“You must. You know the consequences.” said a second voice. It sounded like…no. Couldn’t be.

Holly stood and crept downstairs.

“I’m not doing it.” The Commander sounded like he was resisting some kind of powerful force.

“You have to. He says so. He wants you to.” The mystery person emphasized the ‘he’ as if wanting to make it obvious that it was a substitute for the real name.

“You can’t make me!”

“I can’t, but He can.”

“No! I will not obey him anymore!”

Holly looked closer. There was the commander and…no! Opal Koboi!

“No! I won’t do as you or He says anymore! Never!”

Was the commander working for her?

“If not then I have no choice but…to kill you.”

“No!” cried Holly as she leapt out into full view. She couldn’t bear to witness her friend and former superior officer’s death…again.

“Ah, Short. I’ve been hoping you’d come to see the ‘Commander’s’ death.”

“No!” Holly repeated. “He died once. He isn’t going to die again.”

“Oh, no.” The pixie mocked. “He didn’t die yet. Your dear ‘Commander’ happens to be a clone.”

“But he can’t!”

“Oh, yes. He knows how. He can make clones live!” She took a control device out from behind her. “Good bye, Julius.” She said and pressed a button.

Immediately, Root keeled over and fell to the ground. Holly sprang to his side and rolled him onto his back. “Commander!” She cried. “Commander! Oh my god, Julius, speak to me!”

But she was too late. He was gone. Forever.

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6 Reviews for “Clone Saga”

  1. Holly Says:
    July 22nd, 2007 at 12:50 am

    That’s a good story”sniffs dramatically then chokes on own mucus..gags” I knew they couldn’t kill root that easily…or is it an imposter?!? WRITE MORE!

  2. lil.arty Says:
    July 22nd, 2007 at 2:24 am

    that is one of the best storys i have read~~~~~~it’s so GOOD….~~~i dont know if i should be happy or sad :) :(

  3. elfreda Says:
    September 7th, 2007 at 5:48 pm

    why would holly do dat???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

  4. elfreda Says:
    September 7th, 2007 at 5:49 pm

    sorry bout da long page ….

  5. lil.arty Says:
    September 8th, 2007 at 12:22 am

    marvolus

  6. Jelly Says:
    October 17th, 2007 at 3:09 am

    interesting.

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