Can I have this dance?

Written on November 29th, 2008 by Vera Venus

Story Details

For the next few days, Artemis had to endure Vera not speaking to him. Occasionaly, she threw him a glare which had so much malice in it he actually staggered backward. During rehearsal, when Artemis and Vera had lines together, she acted it out very well. But when rehearsal was over, they were back to their old silence.

But Vera not talking the Artemis was good in some ways. He didn’t have to keep chatting with her. He could think without listening to her talking in the background. He could hatch plans without her being his conscience.

And he was absolutely miserable.

That was a stupid argument, he thought, and I should have thought before saying anything.

But the damage was done. Now, Vera hated him. A brave person would go and apologize to her, but Artemis Fowl the second was anything but brave. And strong. (But that’s irrelavent.)

“I think I need to have a talk with Nick Styles.”

After school, Nick got ready to go back home. He packed his things into his bag and went out of class. At the school gate, he was greeted by Artemis.

“Hi, Troy. Ready for the basketball game? Don’t forget to getcha head in the game!” Nick laughed.

Artemis smirked. A pretty good pun, he thought, but it’s time to get down to business.

“It’s about Vera.” he said.

Nick blushed. “She’s been avoiding you for a while, hasn’t she? What did you do? I saw the glares. Ouch.”

“We had a small quarrel. Anyway, how do you feel about her?”

By this time, Nick’s cheeks were as red as a tomato. “I think she’s a really great friend.”

Artemis sighed. Judging by his blushing reaction, he definitely liked Vera. “Listen, Nick. I know how you feel. And she feels the same way.”

Nick looked up in surprise. “Really?”

“That’s was one of the main reasons we quarreled. Look. She likes you a lot. During the Fall dance, she didn’t have a partner. Why don’t you be hers?” Artemis said.

“There’s no dance coming up.” Nick pointed out.

“So? Use your imagination.” Artemis said, then walked away.

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42 Reviews for “Can I have this dance?”

  1. artymon Says:

    Artemis singing? Very disturbing, I may get nightmares….
    EURO EURO EURO!!! Vera and Foaly, match-makers at large!
    Is this Nick fellow going to play a love interest for Vera?
    I need to go read Time Traveler, though.
    I haven’t seen HMS3 either, so I should possibly make a trip to Wikipedia?
    FCD

  2. kierisa12 Says:

    DUDE YOU HAVENT SEEN HSM3!!! IT WAS TAWESOME!! getting back on topic, I think the play will be a disaster. Artemis sing? Its more likly he will scream PIE then sing. Kool story, I am going to enjoy this.

  3. Harmony352 Says:

    MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!!!!

  4. Miasaki Says:

    Ahahaha! pie! and no, K12, like I have time with my editor hounding me, my homework piling up AND continueously checking this site!!!!!

  5. tinyathlete Says:

    I don’t know, the whole idea seems kinda cheesy. I can’t exactly describe what it is, but cheesy comes close. Arty is a scientist, I’m sure he’ll figure out how to sing, even if it involves a lot of equations. Also, I don’t understand why SO many people are SO jazzed about HSM. It’s okay, I guess, but I can name at least a dozen better actors.(and songs, for that matter) But it’s well written, so I applaud you for that.

  6. EvilOpal Says:

    I loved HSM3! My mom didn’t though…when I went to see it again she took my siblings out of the room….This looks like it’s gonna be really funny! One mistake: you said the biology teacher was a man, and then said the name was Ms. Ong. Other than that, great job! Update!

  7. Helen Says:

    Artemis… sing? What!!! you can’t make me listen to that even if you gave me a million bucks! Well, maybe yes, but… Artemis singing!!! *BIG, round eyes* I… suddenly remembered that, er, I’ve got somewhere to go before you update…. yeah, I gotta go… somewhere awaaay from you and the internet.

    Not that I’m running away from you, of course. Just that it’s urgent. It’s for my sanity’s sake. Okay?

  8. artymon Says:

    Bless. You. Tinyathlete.
    You have said it.
    Thank you.
    I suppose, “If you put your mind to, you can accomplish anything.”
    So, I guess Artemis could sing, and if he couldn’t? :twisted: VERA SHALL MESMERIZE YOU!

  9. Vera Venus Says:

    Okay. Fine. I’m so annoyed because everything you guys are saying is completely wrong. Okay.

    1.Yes, Nick will play a love interest for Vera.

    2.Artemis will NOT sing. You will find out how we get through this after I finish it.

    3.Not only do you need to learn how to sing, you also need to have talent, so Tinyathlete, Artemis cannot simply learn how to sing if he has no talent.

    4.I am NOT Vera Venus(in the story). I simply like the name.

  10. kierisa12 Says:

    Oh, ok… now that we have all THAT straight… when are you updating??!?!?!?!? you driving me crazy!!!!!! I had LOTS of caffine yesterday and I am starting to feel…. CRAZED!!!!! update! holly luvs bananas! i hate mushrooms, is Holly a good singer, coke does bad stuff to me, I LUV supernaturalists!!! gaaa!!!!

  11. Miasaki Says:

    um K12, have you by any chance, been taking too much caffine ’cause of thanksgiving or something?

  12. kierisa12 Says:

    Yes, actually, we had TWO thanksgivings, one with my moms side and the other with my dads side.. we are getting off topic,

    Vera, did you know you have been added to ‘Opal Koboi and the truffles of doom’ thought I’d let you know. Ok, your story is sweet, but really you could make the chapters longer for your fans, although that would mean it would take longer to update, hmm… whatever. CAFFINE!

  13. Miasaki Says:

    Well, I don’t celebrate thanksgiving ’cause my parents don’t have the time of day. Besides, I live in Canada, so our thanksgiving is in October. :P

  14. kierisa12 Says:

    Woah, I never knew Canada did thanksgiving in October! thats weird! (not in a bad way though) Any idea why???

    I read the newest chappy! Kinda short but I cant complain! My Fav song in HSM3 is ’scream’ than its ‘walk away’ I LOVE them!

  15. Vera Venus Says:

    I don’t celebrate thanksgiving. I live in Malaysia. How does it feel like to celebrate thanksgiving? Anyway, thanks for your cool comments.

  16. Julissa Holly Fowl Says:

    It’s just eating, really. I sound very unpatriotic, don’t I?
    VERA!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!
    I’ll stop shouting. Vera, It is most definitly 5/5!!!!!
    And that’s coming from a H/T shipper!

  17. Valeria Says:

    I argree we don’t celebrate Thanksgiving here is Malaysia and i still don’t bother to write at all and i also suck at it i loved the story and i still suck at writing and i love the story

  18. hiholly123 Says:

    Yeah, it was awesome!!!!

  19. EvilOpal Says:

    UPDATE!!! THIS IS AWESOME!!!!! That is really all I have to say. Oh, and am I insane, do you think?

  20. Miasaki Says:

    Malaysia??!!!! Coooooooooool!!!
    I’m chinese American. Our thanksgiving was in October. Actually, we don’t celebrate Thanksgiving either. BUT, my sisters birthday is over thanksgiving weekend, so we celebrate that.

  21. Kierisa 12 Says:

    So am I the only one that celebrates it and likes it????? Its awesome! Thanksgiving break! I get to see my cousins who i never get to see! I get my fav foods! and after the party we put up our Christmas stuff!!!!! (although thnksgivin isnt me fav holiday)
    I love your update! that part at the end was kinda weird, with vera and Arty. Are you going to put the songs in this??!?!?

  22. Vera Venus Says:

    So thanksgiving is just eating until you drop? What about the poor turkey? (I say poor turkey just for fun. I eat turkey for Christmas) Anyway, thanks for the reviews. Yes, K12, I am going to put the songs in this. Well, just one song. Thanks!

  23. Brenda Says:

    Your story is impressive. Good job. Please write more, they’re so good!

  24. Valeria Says:

    TURKEY FOR CHRISTMAS!? THAT’S NOT FAIR!!! And i luv it MORE PLEASE!!!

  25. Vera Venus Says:

    You don’t eat turkey for Christmas? o_0 I pity you. Thanks for the reviews!

  26. artymon Says:

    Yeah, turkey for X-mas.
    K. Just read all da chappys.
    I must say: In chapter 3, I got more of a V/A than an N/V.
    It’s a bit like Singing on thy Sidelines, bit in reverse. I think I may include this Nick fellow in chapter 6 of Truffles of Doom.

  27. Vera Venus Says:

    Whaddaya mean, V/A? They so do not go well together. Artemis is just protective. That’s all. Nick in truffles of doom? ……disturbing.

  28. artymon Says:

    Yes…..I need to see thy rest of this…..and yeah….a little bit of A/V in chappy 3….argument….a tad of jealousy…

  29. Vera Venus Says:

    No way. No no no way. There is no chance that it is A/V. Artemis, I repeat is just protective.

  30. Valeria Says:

    Please please please i beg you! update pls!!!

  31. Brenda Says:

    I love it! You’re so talented at writing stories! Great work!

  32. artymon Says:

    Artemis and Vera, sittin’ in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G!
    Wait, is it done? NOOOOOO! BLAST! Ah well, back to stalking people.

  33. Vera Venus Says:

    For the last time, Artymon. It’s supposed to be A/H and V/N. And stop stalking people! It annoys me. And which Vera are you talking about anyway? Thanks for your reviews everyone! And please R&R the new story, A Christmas Tale!

  34. Mickey5595 Says:

    I love this story !!! 5 stars :D

  35. Julissa Holly Fowl Says:

    THANK YOU for updating! I love it! (but then, why wouldn’t I? Vera is one of the best authors ever, in my opinion.)

  36. hitsugayatoushiro Says:

    eeeeeeeewwwwwwwww i hate HSM, I’m one of them girls that wretch at the sight of it, i prefer HP movies!!!
    BTW i luv the part with arty singing ,i always imagined him 2 sing like a bull-frog

  37. tinyathlete Says:

    Your Message I’m sorry for the length of this comment, but please try to get through it. First- uh oh, artymon likes me. Second-this one’s for Vera Venus-my voice teacher has been known to take the least talented people and turn them into really good singers. Third, thanksgiving is commemorative to the Pilgrims and Indians pitching in for a meal at Plymouth (Massachusetts). Fourth, it’s not unusual to not have turkey on Christmas. Some people have ham, some have roast, and some (like me), have both! Finally, fifth, hitsuguyatoushiro-whew, that’s a long name-I don’t exactly wretch at the sight of HSM, but I definitely prefer HP. Actually, I LOVE HP!!!!!

  38. ArtemisFowlfan Says:

    Wow! I love it! Its so romantic! Its so great!

  39. hitsugayatoushiro Says:

    hey u spelt my name wrong
    ah that realy hurts u kno it’s not my fault i’m craze bout japanease animes

    it hitsugAyatoushiro u put in a U in stead of an a any way it’s not a long name thats just toushiro’s whole name put 2 gather

    i kno soooooooo do i
    i’m in2 lord of the rings, batman, superman and things lyk that.
    hsm dont realy apeal 2 me but it was a realy good story anyway

    Meova here, please don’t double-post.

  40. therealauroralee Says:

    why has it finished?

    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaw…

    more please!!!! :)

  41. hitsugayatoushiro Says:

    SOZ i didn’t kno that i double posted it was an accident :)

  42. partyonsoccerfan Says:

    WOW! I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!

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