Auld Lang Syne (Dark Canvas)

Summary: White sequins on dark canvas Artemis and Holly New Year's Fluff I hope you enjoy my poem Er... R&R and stuff? ;)

4 votes, average: 5.00 out of 54 votes, average: 5.00 out of 54 votes, average: 5.00 out of 54 votes, average: 5.00 out of 54 votes, average: 5.00 out of 5 (4 votes, average: 5.00 out of 5)
You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading...

Reading Mode

White sequins on dark canvas
The night is no longer young
The year behind a script played out
An intricate song now sung

White sequins on dark canvas
They watch from the outcropped ledge
The breaking dawn still far to come
The old year on its edge

White sequins on dark canvas
A promise riding on a breath
The air around them heavy laid
With misery and death

White sequins on dark canvas
Juxtaposed in calm, still peace
Below and entertwined, they share
A kiss on soft caprice

White sequins on dark canvas
New words etched on blank paper
Lost in the night and each other
Intoxicated with some sweet vapor

White sequins on dark canvas
The cycle begins again
Two lovers unite under starry sky
In the other mentioned when

Happy New Year, everybody! Some A/H flufff to start your 2010 off. I’ve never been too good with poetry, but… meh, it’s the holidays. And I promise to put it in the right category just as soon as I get mah hands on a computer…

Comments on This Post

9 responses to “Auld Lang Syne (Dark Canvas).” Join in!

  1. Not good at poetry? I think I’ll correct you: You ARE good at poetry. That was AMAZING!!! 😀

    Happy New Years to you too! 😉

  2. Diddo, star7. I can’t believe you’d think this wasn’t good. HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! O, and 5 STARS!

  3. That was the most beautiful thing I ever read
    🙂 five stars!

  4. as to quote from someone’s username : WOW/THATS/GENIUS!!!!!!

    () ()
    (0.0) heh heh

  5. … Alright, I guess either you guys are being way too nice and sugarcoating your reviews, or nobody cares about a bit of slant rhyme and breaking rhythm …

    Well, thanks, and happy new year, gais.

  6. Of course we care!!! My brain is just too small to comprehend!! 😀 😀 😀

  7. Of course I care too! It truly was amazing. 😀

  8. Wha- no, I meant that’s the bad stuff, and you guys are overlooking it. Thas a good thing XD
    I don’t consider slant rhyme and broken rhythm to be good aspects of a poem like this, so saying you don’t care means you’re not caring about the bad stuff and you still like it… yeeahh…

  9. This is… WOW. All I have to say. You, Volt(my nickname for you, hope you don’t mind), are amazing and a WAY better poet than me. XD I didn’t see any mistakes with rhythm and rhyme. Nice job. 🙂

Leave a Reply

Help: How do I get an avatar?