Atkin Fowl (Artemis’s grandfather)
Written on November 22nd, 2007 by harrygzStory Details
(6 votes, average: 3.5 out of 5)
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This is my second story. I also have Artemis Fowl rewritten and I am still adding chapters to it. This is NOVEL with many chapters about Atkin Fowl(see title) Hope you enjoy!
Atkin Fowl was enjoying a cup of earl grey tea. He was planning his revenge against a dwarf who had recently robbed him of 2 tons of metric tons of gold. The dwarf in question Erar Diggums. He had somehow infiltrated his top secret security base. He needed a plan to overthrow the diggums. Just then a very evil idea sprouted in his mind. So evil he stopped himself from thinking to loudly about it.
Erar Diggums was enjoying his sweet victory. Not every man gets 2 metric tons of gold he said to himself. But now he was prone to one of the many faults of dwarfs. He had to spend all the money he had in his possesion. But where to spend it? The asnswer popped up almost immeadatly. Use it to get even more gold. At this point I have no clue wether he still wanted to spend it all or he had just fallen under gold fever. Then an evil idea popped into Erar’s mind. The richest person he knew was of course, Atkin Fowl.
This is the only time in the whole story who do you think’s plan will prevail. Leave your answer in a comment and find out if your right!
Julius Root was playing outside his house. He was ten at the time. He had recently taken an intrest in investigating crime.
November 22nd, 2007 at 7:35 pm
Ummmmm….. I think it could be good…
By the way… FIRST COMMENT DANCE!
November 22nd, 2007 at 8:12 pm
Thanks. Thanksgiving so I dont have alot of time to write.
November 22nd, 2007 at 8:36 pm
idk how it is going to be becuase it only has 124 words. before u post another chapter make sure you have at least 500 words then people who have slow computers will be able to read it more without waiting forever to read
November 22nd, 2007 at 9:05 pm
thanks jelly
November 22nd, 2007 at 9:17 pm
welcome. I hope I am not just being annoying! (that happens a lot!)
November 22nd, 2007 at 9:19 pm
good to know. Any other tips about writing storys?
November 22nd, 2007 at 9:22 pm
um wear stuff on your ears so that u can’t hear the other things going on, and be hungry we you type becuase it gives u good ideas. (also so then u aren’t to comfotable because then u get writers block):P
November 22nd, 2007 at 9:24 pm
lol thanks
November 22nd, 2007 at 9:51 pm
welcome
November 23rd, 2007 at 2:27 am
yeah i liked it keep writing ur gud! -abey
November 23rd, 2007 at 6:05 am
nice , so when are you going to continue? I liked it , and would love to see more of Julius in the story
November 23rd, 2007 at 6:05 am
it’s good! keep writing! thanks for the tips, Jelly!
December 6th, 2007 at 7:58 pm
Good. This story might have a lot of potential. It’s descriptive, but hard to understand. It’s short, so there isn’t much to say about it. All in all, very well written. I would rate it 3/5.
December 8th, 2007 at 3:06 am
It’s good! I like the idea! Update soon!
January 20th, 2008 at 1:47 am
Artemis rules y’all