Artemis meets Eragon updated (again)!
Written on August 31st, 2007 by ZakutanuvaStory Details
(13 votes, average: 3.69 out of 5)
Loading ...Chapter 3
Eragon, Saphira, Holly, and the demons sat around a campfire that night.
“How could this have happened?” asked Holly, for what must have been the sixteenth time.
“Galbatorix is very powerful, more powerful than all of us combined. He could crush us with out even lifting a finger,” said Eragon
“I still don’t understand how a human of his age could have the strength to crush an army and still be able to walk around like he was 25,” said Qwan.
“Well, he obviously has trained himself over a very long period of time to build up enough physical strength to support his spells,” said No. 1, surprising everyone.
“He’s been paying attention,” noted Saphira,” His kind of memory could be handy in a tight situation.”
“That still does not explain how he has that much strength; the human body can only go so far,” said Holly, “Even a Troll’s strength can only go so far.”
“You and I both,” said Eragon
. . . .
Galbatorix’s castle
Artemis sat in a corner of a dungeon. He was still baffled at how he, Butler, and Foaly were captured so easily. Butler could sense an ambush a mile away. Yet this “king” had simply swooped in and taken them from his friends. Artemis reflected on the events since his capture. During the ride, he felt another presence inside his mind. He remembered that Eragon said that Gabaroz or whatever the heck his name was had the ability to reach into other’s mind and see into their past and secrets. Artemis groaned internally. he could have given the enemy everything that could give him even more of an advantage.
“As if he needed more of one,” Artemis siad to himself.
In a seperate cell, Butler was beating himself up. How could he have let this happen? He was the best bodyguard in the world, and some grand-standing man om an over-sized bird had taken him away without even using any weapons. What kind of world was this? Dragons and kings with enough power to destroy cities? How was he supposed to protect Artemis when there were strangers that had abilities unknown to most humans? this was very frustating.
. . .
Back with the others, Holly was going over her weapons she had brought along. She had four extra Nutrino handguns, six rifles, and several dozen granades. This was fourtunate, but not expected. Ever since the Hybras adventure, she always kept a large weapons pack in case she ever had to go through another time tunnel. They had also been specially calibated for time spells not to effect them. There were also some medical items.
Holly gave a rifle, a handgun, and three granades to each demon.
“O.K. these will be our best form of protection we will have aside from Eragon’s magic. They’re fairly easy to use. Just aim the barrel at the enemy and pull the triggers. Keep the setting on three, and you should be fine. We wil have to be on full alert. Galbatorix could come back at any time. We need to be able to respond on a moment’s notice.”
Holly noticed that she somewhat sounded like Commander Root. She wished the Commander was here now. Holly knew that he would have restled the dragon bare-handed if he had too. Maybe, just maybe, she would too.
* * *
Foaly was very confused. In most situations, he had an explanation for most everything. Now, if someone asked him what was going on, he would say his three least favorite words: I don’t know. And it was true. He felt more confused than a dwarf in a washroom. And considering most dwarves, especially Mulch, went their whole lives with taking a bath, that’s very confused. But beneath the fear and confusion, Foaly felt something different, something new; strength. Strength fueled by hatred for Galbatorix and his dragon.
Dragons. Foaly never even thought he would meet a dragon. There were once dragons on Earth. But all of these had been wiped out by fairies and humans, back when they still lived in harmony. The dragons had grown fierce and murderous due to not enough land and too little food. They began attacking near by villages, torching houses and stealing cattle and sheep. So a band of human and fairies warriors were forced to kill all of them in an ambush. What a sorry way to go.
But the dragons here, or at least what was left of them, were intelligent and good tell the difference between right and wrong. The dragons Foaly’s father had told him about were only a little smarter than Goblins. In fact, so scientists speculated that Goblins were a stupider and smaller version of the dragon. Foaly had been surprised to find out that Sapphira was as smart as any human, maybe more. And even more surprised to find out that a dragon in this dimension could wait centuries in its egg to find the right person to be its Rider.
Foaly looked around his cell to see if there was anything that he could use. Not much. A bed, chains nailed to the wall that still had the decaying remains of some poor human, and an empty tray that had been tossed into a corner. “D’arvit,” swore Foaly. Never had he been in a place so technologically behind. Foaly decided that he would have to plot, not build. “Now, how would Artemis do it?” Foaly said to himself as he sat down.
August 31st, 2007 at 2:02 am
Well, I could use some ideas. feel free to share your ideas
August 31st, 2007 at 2:24 am
oook….weird, but yes, I think u should continue!
August 31st, 2007 at 3:02 am
wow, pretty good! it’s going a bit fast and i think you should slow it down and add more descriptions. also, as my teachers always tell me, more showing and less telling. like instead of “Eragon was happy” you could have Eragon say something like, “wow, Roran! that was great! we really kicked butt!” or something he might say because i doubt he’d say what i suggested. using dialogue to express…well, expressions would make the story more interesting. other than that, awesome story!!! you should continue!
August 31st, 2007 at 10:00 am
~~~!!kool!!~~~
August 31st, 2007 at 12:48 pm
this is confusing but good i like it lots lol!!!!!!!
August 31st, 2007 at 1:14 pm
ive read eragon and i think u should continue and u could say well myabe holly and aria become frends and they all teach the varden about stuff in their own century and maybe Artemis or foaly (personally Artemis but its ur story) could get kidnapped by galbatorix because of his genius and then well… ive run out of ideas now.
ok maybe my idea seems a bit odd. good luck with the fic
August 31st, 2007 at 6:12 pm
This is great. After My Harry Potter/Artemis Fowl story I was planning on writing on involving Eragon but you beat me to it. I love what you’ve done so far. Could you get Holly to get a dragon egg. That’s what I’m going to do anyway. Well
LOL from
Captain Holly Short
August 31st, 2007 at 11:49 pm
Thanks everyone for your ideas! I’ll take them into consideration when I continue the story.
September 1st, 2007 at 12:10 am
Needs some editting,(ex.bomd), and more chapters, and more dialuge. And please, please add some other peoples ideas (ig. Holly gets last dragon egg, Holly and Arya become friends, and demonds/ Artemis/ Foaly gets captured by Galbatorix.
September 2nd, 2007 at 3:11 pm
Oy, You gunna type more or are we all going to die of bordom without the ingenius typing that you have brought to our attention. I will admit that it needs some editing but appart from that it is deffinately one of the best stories that I have read in a while. I trust that you will deep writing and not dissappoint the many people that you have inspired with your work.
Signed.
Captain Holly Short
September 6th, 2007 at 9:11 pm
This is very good. I senserely hope taht you continue this thrilling story. Maybe after you’ve finished you can give me some ideas for my own Eragon/Artemis/Harry potter fic.
Well gotta go
Bye Bye
September 12th, 2007 at 12:02 am
Chapters 4&5 will be here in a couple weeks.
September 18th, 2007 at 2:08 pm
Old Galby aye? Love it!
Maybe just stick a little bit of filler in there but otherwise its great!
Love crossovers - I have always sucked at writing them but I love to read other people’s! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Jess
September 19th, 2007 at 1:46 am
How many more weeks?!?!?!!?!
September 26th, 2007 at 4:37 pm
You are going to kill us at this rate if you dont’ hurry up. I don’t want to have to go mad with waiting.
September 28th, 2007 at 7:51 pm
WHAT IS TAKING SO LONG
September 29th, 2007 at 7:17 pm
When you do do the next chapter can you make it longer. It wouldn’t be too hard and it would make people want to read it more. Can you give Holly the next dragon egg or make the Varden find one in Surda or something. It would be really cool.
October 27th, 2007 at 10:11 pm
Just so you know, i have been temeraraly banned from the computer, so it’ll be a while
October 27th, 2007 at 10:38 pm
I have never read Erogon so this is very confusing….
November 7th, 2007 at 5:39 pm
Pppppppllllllleeeeaaaaaasssssseeeee hurry up. I love the story so I really hope you’ll be getting onto the computer again soon.
December 9th, 2007 at 5:25 pm
finish it!!!!finish it!!!!!!!
January 14th, 2008 at 1:04 am
coolio, but please give holly or artemis the last egg! that would be super cool!
February 21st, 2008 at 3:33 am
I hope you enjoy the new addition.
February 26th, 2008 at 12:13 pm
WHAT THE HECK TOOK YOU SO LONG.
We all thought you’d dropped off the face of the earth or something.
The update is really good, keep it up.
Please update soon so we don’t die of boredom.
March 22nd, 2008 at 2:14 am
Now that i am back on the conputer, i am taking ideas for the story. I’ve heard the one about giving the last egg to Artemis or Holly, and i an deeply considering it, but i would really enjoy other ideas, anything from love intrist to who should die. DON”T HOLD BACK!!!
March 22nd, 2008 at 6:48 pm
PLZ, PLZ continue!! It’s really good. Try and finish it fast i want to read the end.
April 8th, 2008 at 1:24 pm
What about a romance between Butler and the leader of the varden. Nassuada. I thing that’s how you say her name.
What about Murtagh and Holly. That would be funny.
April 9th, 2008 at 1:20 pm
Please don’t make Artemis the new rider. All the others are boys. Have at least one girl to make it fair.
Is ther going to be any romance between Eragon and Arya? (No smart remarks please)
Think about it would yuh.
Cheery