Artemis Fowl rewritten
Written on November 22nd, 2007 by harrygzStory Details
(12 votes, average: 3.58 out of 5)
Loading ...Butler do you know anybody who owns reinforced steel that can withstand extreme heat. Possibly but I can garentee any means of retriving it would be illeagal. Most plots of mine are illeagal. Well then I guess your planning on venturing ***********. How did you guess. Maybe I just got lucky.
Artemis was traveling underground very quickly in a makeshift pod made by butler, hopefully it will stay intact under the emesnse pressure put on us by the magma core we a curently heading to” said artemis “yes lets hope.” According to my calculations were doomed so that can give us some happy thoughts. But if we do make it odds are we will find an entire fairy civilization. There is also the chance that we burn up, die, and never see the world again. Thanks for staying so positive, said butler. Welcome, replied artemis.
Down on the fairy ground everyone was in a panic. What is it they were saying. One said it’s a bird. One said it’s a out of control nutrino 2000. One said it’s a titanium pod carrying two humans which will discover us. Everybody chimed in yeah right at the same time. But no matter what it was nothing could have braced them for the impact it would have on the fairy civilization.
Commander Julius Root was worried. How long does it take to steal a stupid chip when you have camofoil and a 4992 Calliber Laser Dulux Aimpoint Equiped Pistol. Why does foaly have to make the names so dang long. In any event she should be back by now. And all the whole city is rambling on about UBGO (unidentified bellow ground object). It’s tough being commander of the LEP. Thats when his vizio screen came in with a site he had never planned on seeing.
November 22nd, 2007 at 4:25 am
cool , I like it , you’re bery discriptive but , I like the original artemis fowl series a bit better ( no offense) But you are an awesome writer.
November 22nd, 2007 at 5:03 pm
wow a very good piece of work but I think you could do a longer one But by all means keep going
A lbutler sibling- ( The Boy ) - out!!
November 22nd, 2007 at 5:34 pm
I am a little confused but other wise it was pretty good! I think we can all see that other stories of yours will be just as good1
November 22nd, 2007 at 7:00 pm
I will keep posting new chapters for this story. Hope you keep enjoying it!
November 23rd, 2007 at 6:14 am
it’s very good. i think you should work on your grammar a little more, but please continue!
November 26th, 2007 at 2:17 pm
Im Up!!!!
November 26th, 2007 at 8:38 pm
sorry Cman i didn’t get up very early also you sent that at 2:17 PM i repeat PM nice joke but not funny.
November 26th, 2007 at 10:45 pm
That clock isn’t correct! It is 8:24am here!!!!!
November 26th, 2007 at 11:02 pm
This is a great story! Love the beggining especially. Keep on writing!
December 5th, 2007 at 8:10 pm
computer1 can you hear me
December 6th, 2007 at 8:39 pm
hey harry your story is really good so far
December 8th, 2007 at 3:14 am
Yeah, very good. Continue!
December 18th, 2007 at 7:58 pm
Hey Harry
December 24th, 2007 at 10:14 pm
I don’t like the update. I don’t know why. But I just don’t… I don’t get it…
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January 19th, 2008 at 10:04 pm
You need to upd8 soon!