Artemis Fowl Meets Hank and Roy Spire
Written on January 29th, 2008 by Demon_ObsessionStory Details
LEP Shuttle (3 km from Abbot the Guinea-Pig’s Secret Cave: Monday afternoon, 2:50 pm
Holly flew a shuttle towards the cave that the Spire brothers seemed to count as home with their free will. Or they thought so. After a couple of hours of boring flying, Holly ran into a wall which she could not cross. “It seems to never end!” she shrieked with frustration. “It’s much too strong to break according to the computer and there’s no way around.” Artemis and Minerva were discussing things around a small table in the shuttle. After a couple of moments, they both came to a conclusion. “Holly, we can pass straight through this wall.” said Artemis.
“Why didn’t I see it before?” asked Holly, who was quite disappointed in herself. But she didn’t know that she was being affected by a certain influence.
“Well, now we can be absolutely sure that somebody lives here!” exclaimed Artemis. “Someone must have set up the holographic wall with the misleading computer directions.”
The more closer the shuttle was to the cave, the more Holly got tired and uncomfortable. At 2:55 pm, she threw up in the ship and felt weaker and weaker. By the time the shuttle arrived at the cave, Holly had collapsed onto the floor and been tended to by Minerva while Artemis took over the flying. Minerva was quite baffled by Holly’s sickness. Is it the fact that we’re getting closer to the cave?, she thought. Or is it something that has built up in time? Maybe her body can detect something in the location we are currently travelling to?

(5 votes, average: 4 out of 5)
January 29th, 2008 at 5:34 am
Please R,R & R (Read, Rate and Review)! By the way, you can guess what happens next.
January 30th, 2008 at 3:31 am
Ohhhhh interesting! Keep writing! (FCD)
January 30th, 2008 at 5:50 pm
Pretty darned good if i say so myself. Finish it soon!
January 31st, 2008 at 1:27 pm
thanks!
first shot, so I thought it was going to be rubbish
February 1st, 2008 at 4:28 am
Ohhhh major twist! LOL I really like it. My only suggestion is to fix the double negative in the 4th chapter
February 1st, 2008 at 9:41 pm
Awesome! Please add on, as this is the most interesting story I’ve read yet! I can’t wait for you to finish.
February 9th, 2008 at 10:16 pm
I don’t think I’ve ever read a story with Abbot as a villain!It just keeps getting better and better!
March 18th, 2008 at 11:23 pm
May 28th, 2008 at 6:45 am
Nice, I loved it!