Artemis Fowl Meets Hank and Roy Spire
Written on January 29th, 2008 by Demon_ObsessionStory Details
(5 votes, average: 4 out of 5)
Loading ...Abbot the Guinea-Pig’s Secret Cave: Monday Afternoon, 2:30 pm (a little ‘meanwhile’ thingy)
“So!” cackled Abbot. “How are you going to help your little friends now?” Mulch and Doodah were tied to the ceiling in ropes and handcuffs were bound around their hands. Hank and Roy were guarding them with great care. They were also gagged, as the cave was big and the sound would echo. “Now, I’m going to take a nap. Being a guinea-pig tires me so much. Roy, bring me three raw rabbits. Hank, go do your business before you do it on the cave floor. As for you two, (as he glanced pointedly at Mulch and Doodah) just stay quiet, ok?”
“MMMPHRE!!!” screamed Mulch.
“Death it is, then. You’d better watch out! You’ll be dead in 4 days.” Abbot grinned as evilly as a tiny, fat old hamster could. He’d just had one too many rabbits for a guinea-pig’s diet. Come on, men, let’s get going.”
“Sir yes sir!” replied the Spire brothers in a brainless army manner.
January 29th, 2008 at 5:34 am
Please R,R & R (Read, Rate and Review)! By the way, you can guess what happens next.
January 30th, 2008 at 3:31 am
Ohhhhh interesting! Keep writing! (FCD)
January 30th, 2008 at 5:50 pm
Pretty darned good if i say so myself. Finish it soon!
January 31st, 2008 at 1:27 pm
thanks!
first shot, so I thought it was going to be rubbish
February 1st, 2008 at 4:28 am
Ohhhh major twist! LOL I really like it. My only suggestion is to fix the double negative in the 4th chapter
February 1st, 2008 at 9:41 pm
Awesome! Please add on, as this is the most interesting story I’ve read yet! I can’t wait for you to finish.
February 9th, 2008 at 10:16 pm
I don’t think I’ve ever read a story with Abbot as a villain!It just keeps getting better and better!
March 18th, 2008 at 11:23 pm
May 28th, 2008 at 6:45 am
Nice, I loved it!