Back Again
Written on March 24th, 2008 by FictionWizardStory Details
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In The Lower Elements
“Holly, you will never believe what happened while you were gone!”
“Thinking about what happened while I was I in time tunnel I’ll probably believe that you stopped eating carrots…so try me.”
“Okay I’ll tell you now” Foaly breathed in “Ididn’twantotellyou,butI’lltelluanywayRoot’salive.”
Holly rolled her eyes “Yeah right, I don’t believe you…..I’m going to see for myself. where is he.”
“He’s in his office but don’t scream. Okay I’ll see you later. I have to get more carrots.”
Holly walked up to the commander’s office, opened the door, and peeked in and saw Root (well not him exactly but she knows that fungus smelling smoke)she ran up to him and hugged him but, unfortunately he couldn’t see her with all the smoke. So this is what he said when he thought some dude was hugging him “GET OFF ME, OFFICER!”
“Yes, sir, Commander Root, sir”
“Wait a minute” he put out his fungus cigar “Holly” then he said “Where have you been and why have you got two different eyes colors?”
Holly gave him another hug then after what seemed, like, maybe 1 minute Root returned the hug
Just at that moment Foaly decided to come in “I’ll just leave you two alone.”
“You do that” Root said still hugging Holly as if he hadn’t seen her in 4 years
At the same time Holly was crying her eyes out but with happy tears.
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March 25th, 2008 at 12:00 am
please comment
all comments are welcome
thank you for reading a story
that came to me in a dream
man, now I have 2 make another one up
last night i had a dream that Artemis was on ‘That’s So Suite Life of Hannah Montana’I think maybe I’ll write about that I’ll write about that
bye
March 25th, 2008 at 1:12 am
i like this…fatastic ….there all in character too. plz continue
March 25th, 2008 at 4:35 am
I like it.
March 25th, 2008 at 12:34 pm
r u new here? i haven’t been here in a while so i don’t realy know the newbee’s unless your REALLY old and i just never read anything by you…. ANYWAY i’m lbutler and me and my sister use this account toghter soooo just a warning to let you know i’m not bypolor. i love your story and can’t wait untill you update!
March 25th, 2008 at 2:18 pm
I am new here
phew this story took three days to put together but don’t worry another chapter will be up tomorrow if not it will be Friday
March 25th, 2008 at 3:31 pm
awesome!!!!!!!!!!!
March 29th, 2008 at 11:23 am
Thats great please update asap. I was sooo happy when I read that first chapter that I atually clapped and giggled and jumped up and down like I was four. Not a pretty sight lol
April 7th, 2008 at 2:17 am
Huh. Im lost. I like it though. Continue plz.
April 12th, 2008 at 7:51 pm
I will continue first thing in the morning but only 1 chappy if I don’t get anymore comments I won’t update and make you wait a week muah-ha-ha-haaaaa
April 30th, 2008 at 7:03 pm
I just LOVED the butterfly comment! It was hilarious! Keep Writing, so I can keep reading!!!