Artemis Fowl and the Queen of Hybras- III

Summary: The demon had its long,taloned finger under her chin."There is no stopping us."Holly dared herself to answer."Artemis will come for me."

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5

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IMPORTANT  A/N : I do NOT take full credit for the whole of part three, my friend Silver (or SilverGoddess) is helping me a lot with this. THANKS SILVER! You are great, believe me. I totally owe you everything, if Ithere’s anything you want, ask me.

CHAPTER  THREE:

The demon had its long, taloned finger under her chin. “There is nothing you can do now. My army is coming and there is no stopping us.”

Holly dared herself to answer. “Artemis will come for me.”

Abbot chuckled coldly. “No, he wouldn’t.”

“Hey Mud Boy, done dreaming yet?” that was Foaly,stamping a hoof impatiently.

Artemis snapped back to the present. Just a dream.

Holly seemed more concerned than Foaly was. “Artemis, if anything’s wrong-”

Artemis waved a hand impatiently. “Nothing.”

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5

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6 responses to “Artemis Fowl and the Queen of Hybras- III.” Join in!

  1. SilverGoddess March 5th, 2013 at 7:23 pm 1

    Hmmm… I seem to be spending more time helping shaadia than updating mine. I don’t think I have updated DM since the second week of February. Oh well, I’m glad I’m able to help her.

    Actally I think I’m going to sign up to be a beta. Yep, I think I will.

    yea…GO UPDATE DEADLY MELODY!!! PUPPY EYE-ING HERE!!!! PLEEZEEE!!!

  2. Shaadia, your thing for cliffhanger endings is very annoying, though thats not going to keep me from reading your stories cause I like them! 🙂 Sorry I didn’t comment on the other two parts, but I didn’t see this before cause I didn’t have much computer time. Everyone seemed to be in character, and I liked it, so 4 stars. I saw a few spelling mistakes too.
    sterred= steered
    semmed=seemed
    fiering=firing
    digets=digits
    anither=another
    stapmeding=stampeding
    suddenley=suddenly
    All in all, not bad. Not that many mistakes, and most of it was probably just mistakes while you were typing. I did see a couple of space errors, but there was not that many so I’m not going to worry about them. I still liked it! 🙂
    @SilverGoddess: I think thats a good idea. You would make a good beta!

    OK…just for your information silver wrote the whole of chapter four. The FIRST chapter four. I noticed “Chapter four” is written twice. I wrote the SECOND chapter four. So Silver kinda gets credit for the better half of the story. I know what you think of my cliffhangers, but tell you what it’s irrisistible to put them there!
    I’m glad you like it. You should compliment Silver,too.
    -Shaadia.

  3. Okay, Sorry, I didn’t know that!

    @SilverGoddess- I really liked it! I didn’t realize you helped or I would have praised you before. It was awesome! Did you sign up as a beta yet? Oh, and thanks for commenting on History Repeats! 🙂

    @Shaadia- Thank you too! Every little bit helps. 🙂 I just updated that before I came here to so the next part is up. 🙂

  4. um….just a random question, where do you live? just curious. ,oh and which should be my priority, neon crystal or queen of hybras?

  5. Silver being too lazy to log in March 15th, 2013 at 4:31 pm 5

    Yay Update! And I think BOTH should be a priority 🙂

  6. shaadia should be studying but does not care March 16th, 2013 at 4:48 am 6

    silver, that you?
    Sorry for spamming on my own fic. I just wanted to ask.

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