Artemis Fowl and The Goddess of Fire
Written on March 29th, 2008 by KcoolStory Details
Chapter 1
Fowl Manor, Ireland
Holly groaned. Being unconscious wasn’t that bad, it was sort of like a deep sleep. The only bad thing about it was waking up; that hurt.
Holly groaned again and opened one eye. This didn’t go very far to identifying exactly where she was so she opened the other eye as well.
Her surroundings were strangely familiar but she couldn’t quite put her finger on it. She sat up, looked around and laughed. Then she stopped laughing because that hurt. What she had seen to make her laugh also explained where she was. She was in a bed at Fowl Manor and Artemis was sitting in a chair next to her, arms and legs sprawled and fast asleep. His hair was a mess and his suit was damp. Holly had to suppress another burst of laughter when he shifted in his sleep causing him to fall out of the chair.
Artemis looked around, startled by the sudden awakening. When he saw Holly looking down at him he jumped to his feet.
“Holly, you’re OK!”
“Yes,” She said darkly as she remembered the reason for her trip to Fowl Manor. “But others soon may not be.”
“Holly, I think you had better tell exactly what is going on and don’t leave anything out.”
A street in Chelmsford, Essex, England
The first thing to be heard was not, as you might expect, the blast of the bombs, nor was it the shattering of windows or the crumbling of bricks. It was the screams that awoke Hestia from her already troubled sleep.
She jumped from her bed and her own scream quickly joined the rest of those in her street. It wasn’t what she could see that made her scream, it was what she couldn’t see. Her house and every other house, as far as the eye could see were held up purely by their wooden frames. The bricks of the walls and shards of the glass windows lay in smoldering heaps everywhere.
“No!”She thought bewildered. “How could they have found me?”
And this was the last thing that passed through her mind before a second round of bombs came cascading down upon the inhabitance of Hutchins Street, causing the roof to give way and come plummeting down towards her.
The last thing she heard before she was claimed by the blissful ignorance of unconsciousness was the cry of her younger brother calling her name…
“Hess!!”
And the sound of sirens screaming clawing at the night.
Little did she know that this same scene was being replayed in different streets all over the country.


(5 votes, average: 3.4 out of 5)
March 29th, 2008 at 10:12 am
Please R&R.
March 30th, 2008 at 2:46 am
i lurv how u started this. it made me want to read quicker and quicker and before i knew it i had finished both chapters! plz continue!
April 9th, 2008 at 3:09 am
I like the beginning very much! It’s catchy to read and alsmost (like 99.99%) perfect in grammer and paragraphs. If you want, use 11 spaces for indents. I really like the story plot!
April 9th, 2008 at 1:39 pm
i thought Hestai was goddess of wisdom??and Justiful war??? and headacke!! did you know that actually how she was born… at least i think that was her… well Zues had a head ack so bad that he couldn’t and Hephstias god of the forge and fire offered to hit Zues’s head with a hamer to relive the presure and Zeus was like sure but H. hit it so hard he cracked open Zues’s ut came Hestia fully grown and were ing battle armer.
ouh like no wonnder he such a head ake!!!!! i really like this and i really dont’ tend to notice speling and grammer stufff cuz i spell things so often!!!! updte soon!
April 11th, 2008 at 11:59 am
I think that Hestia is the Greek goddess of Fire (or at least will be in this story) and wasn’t it Athena that was in Zeus’ head, but you might be right I don’t know.
April 27th, 2008 at 5:13 am
Actually, Hestia is the Greek virgin goddess of hearth, or domesticity.
http://www.crystalinks.com/romegods.html
Anyway, this is a good story!
August 4th, 2008 at 8:07 pm
love the story ali!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i havent read any of the artimus fowl books but if they are anything like that i will buy them so i can….. it really enjoyed it nd want to read more!!
August 19th, 2008 at 1:10 pm
Thankx beka, remind me to lend you the books sometime!