Artemis Fowl and The Goddess of Fire
Written on March 29th, 2008 by KcoolStory Details
(5 votes, average: 3.4 out of 5)
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“Holly, Holly! Can you hear me?”
Her face was pale and her skin was cold.
“Holly! Holly! Talk to me!”
An edge of panic began to creep into Artemis’ voice.
“Butler, come quickly!”
He grabbed her shoulder and shook her gently.
“Come on wake up.”
He checked her pulse: It was normal, if a little fast.
“Holly, wake up.”
He brushed a strand of sodden hair out of his friends face and tucked it behind her pointed ear.
“Butler! Where are you?”
He lifted her slightly out of the mud and pulled off his own jacket to shelter her from the worst of the rain.
“Come on Holly, don’t leave me now!”
He shot blue sparks from his fingers but they could find no wound.
“Artemis, what’s happened?”
Butler had appeared behind him.
“Ah Butler, there you are,”
Artemis was trying to sound his usual brisk and business like self, even though he was deeply concerned about his friend.
“Could you take Holly up to one of the spare rooms on the third floor. Tell my parents that I have a friend over and make sure that the twins don’t go up there.”
Butler blinked twice. The spare rooms on that floor were virtually never used since Artemis’ room was there and Artemis did not like to be disturbed, but Butler knew better than to question his young charge and simply lifted Holly off the ground and carried her indoors.
Artemis hesitated at the door. He was not accustomed to unexplainable things happening. He was a genius and did not get caught off guard. Despite this he couldn’t figure out what would have brought Holly this far from home in the pouring rain. Why would she have needed to be here so badly, that she had pushed herself so hard she had passed out on the lawn at Fowl manor. What ever it was it couldn’t be good.
March 29th, 2008 at 10:12 am
Please R&R.
March 30th, 2008 at 2:46 am
i lurv how u started this. it made me want to read quicker and quicker and before i knew it i had finished both chapters! plz continue!
April 9th, 2008 at 3:09 am
I like the beginning very much! It’s catchy to read and alsmost (like 99.99%) perfect in grammer and paragraphs. If you want, use 11 spaces for indents. I really like the story plot!
April 9th, 2008 at 1:39 pm
i thought Hestai was goddess of wisdom??and Justiful war??? and headacke!! did you know that actually how she was born… at least i think that was her… well Zues had a head ack so bad that he couldn’t and Hephstias god of the forge and fire offered to hit Zues’s head with a hamer to relive the presure and Zeus was like sure but H. hit it so hard he cracked open Zues’s ut came Hestia fully grown and were ing battle armer.
ouh like no wonnder he such a head ake!!!!! i really like this and i really dont’ tend to notice speling and grammer stufff cuz i spell things so often!!!! updte soon!
April 11th, 2008 at 11:59 am
I think that Hestia is the Greek goddess of Fire (or at least will be in this story) and wasn’t it Athena that was in Zeus’ head, but you might be right I don’t know.
April 27th, 2008 at 5:13 am
Actually, Hestia is the Greek virgin goddess of hearth, or domesticity.
http://www.crystalinks.com/romegods.html
Anyway, this is a good story!