A Different Kind of Brawl (huge update!)

Summary: Holly and Arty are sucked into a different world, much stranger than any other...

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Chapter 1, Wake Up Calls and Casual Clothes

“Wake up, wake up! D’arvit, Artemis, wake up!” Holly shouted at the sleeping figure.

“Wh..huh?” Artemis Fowl the Second groaned, waking. Sitting up and rubbing his eyes he saw who awoke him. “Dang it, Holly, I was having a great dream where I had hacked into Foaly’s computers and-”

“No time for that, Mud-boy. We’re going to the Brawl Monument today,remember?” Holly reminded him.

For the first time that day Artemis noticed that instead of her usual L.E.P. uniform, Holly was wearing a deep green t-shirt with the words ‘I’m not short, I’m elf size’ in white, and light blue carpi’s. Artemis laughed at her shirt.

“Oh hush. Get dressed, Fowl, we leave soon,” with that, the elf walked out of the room.

The young man muttered a few things to himself, getting out of bed and going to the closet. He got dressed in rather casual clothing before going downstairs. Holly and Butler greeted him.

“Haven’t seen this side of you before,” The large man smiled slightly at his charge.

“I’ll agree with Butler, I don’t think I’ve ever seen you like this.”

The teen shrugged, “Ah well. Shall we go?”
The other two nodded. 
After several minutes wasted getting stuff in the car and Butler breaking up fights between the elf and the boy, four figures were in the car. A large, older man with a blue diamond tattoo, a girl with long blonde, braided hair, a young man with raven hair and mismatched eyes, and an elf with equally mismatched eyes.

“Thanks for coming along, Juliet,” Holly smiled,”I’m sure you’ll love the place!”
Juliet smiled and laughed, “I think this is going to be fun!”

Artemis looked back at the females from his place in the passenger seat. He rolled his eyes before burying his face in the road map.
The girls scoffed.
“Artemis, stop being a Debbie Downer!”
“Get your face out of the map and enjoy the scenery, Mud-Boy!”

This is going to be a long ride… The raven-haired teen thought to himself, grumbling and staring out the window.

A/N: Whoo hoo! I updated this! Dear Hylia, it’s old. Dayum. Okay, yeah. I might update more. Derp derp. Cya!~

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  1. O.K. Sorry for a short chapter.I know it’s kinda wierd for a girl to write about a video game.

    YES I AM WEIRD!
    BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SANITY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Yo. AA here. Please don’t stretch the page with excessive exclamation marks. Kthxbai.

  2. It’s not weird. Why is it weird? I love video games, and I’m a girl. A lot of my best friends who are girls love video games (one can even pwn her older brother at SSBB). 😀

    You need to use the space key, pls; it’s the biggest thing on your keyboard for a reason. This could be pretty interesting, I think. You just need to clean up some grammar, spelling, and spacing. K?

  3. Hermione Fowl April 21st, 2010 at 6:44 am 3

    UPDATE OR FEAR MY WRATH!!!!! I always wrote without many spaces too-after commas and full stops.=)=)

  4. It’s not weird. I like video games, I don’t really play that many, though. New Pokemon pisses me off, though *growls* What’s wih this “Diamond and Pearl” crud???

    Cool start, and, like AA said, THE SPACE BAR IS YOUR BEST FRIEND. If you refuse to be friends, I’ll lock you in a hobbit-sized closet with a small village of space bars, until you come out happy and singing Veggie Tales. Do we want this? Thought not. Use the space bar.

  5. Great job! This is pretty good! Short tho. And the SpAcEbAr WiLl MaKe YoU hApPy In ThE LoNgRuN!!!

    ~CC

  6. Short. Not the Holly kind.

    If you update, I will write a full comment. We’re sitting at the exposition of the story; how the heck am I supposed to review?

    @TWS: Diss Diamond and Pearl all you want, and throw in Platinum too, just leave HG&SS out if it. They’re remakes of old games anyway, so… 😉

    ~A Pokemon-game-addicted Yoshi

  7. Um….not to be a party pooper but what game is SSBB? *Everyone throws there comments at me cause I’m a party pooper.*

  8. Beckett Simpleton April 23rd, 2010 at 9:30 pm 8

    i wanna know too. I like Spyro, Lego Starwars and the Harry Potter games. Id that weird? You need a bit more of a story until i can reveiw this though.

  9. Ohansahyosheli April 23rd, 2010 at 9:44 pm 9

    I think she’s referring to SpongeBob, but you never know..

  10. Hermione Fowl April 23rd, 2010 at 10:10 pm 10

    I didn’t want to say that, PP, so thanks. I used to love Pokemon too, but scrap the new ones.=)=)

  11. To end the string of pointless comments, I believe she’s referring to Super Smash Brothers Brawl. 😉

  12. Hermione Fowl April 24th, 2010 at 2:16 am 12

    I’ve never heard of that. You’re smart, AA.

  13. 1. Your NOT the only female vidio gamer. 😉
    2.Your also not the only one with writer’s block…

  14. short do you even own a gameboy pokemon firered was awesome diomond and pearl suck as do black and white as for the story oooooppppppddddeeeetttttttt iys awesome

  15. i beat everyone in my neighborhood at wii.

  16. SSBB IS THE ONLY VIDEO GAME I PLAY. I LOVE IT, I LIVE IT, I BREATHE IT. Of course, that doesn’t necessarily mean I’m good at it. I can only use Kirby, Pit (with limitations), Metaknight (I’ll be abusing the B button, thank you very much), and Falco/Fox (though I haven’t quite perfected it yet). Sure, I can clear Classic on Extreme, but that’s my limitations.

    Well, this is incredibly short… an update for a longer comment? Guys, please don’t spam… we all like feedback, not pointless words about yourself.

  17. OOPDEET! This looks good. “I’m not short, I’m elf size.” Funny :LOL:

  18. (I don’t play vid games or watch TV I read.)

  19. Love it, space bar=friend, and UPDATE!

  20. Dear god. I need to delete this or fix it. What was I smoking while typing this. Will update for the sake of my sanity.

  21. Ohmai. I never would have guessed. I thought you deleted this XD

  22. Hey, I’m a girl and I like video games, that’s never wierd. The first thing my friend and I do is play. Lego Star Wars, Monkey Ball Banana Blitz, and Super Smash Brothers Brawl are my favorites.

    On the subject of your writing, I can read it pretty easily. Update! Please! I also really like the saying on Holly’s shirt! LOL! However, it needs to be longer before I can rate, but you’re on a good track! 🙂

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