Artemis and the World of Snow

Written on January 15th, 2008 by 017350

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  • Author: 017350
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Chapter 6: Uninvited Company

      They flew on in silence. Butler sat in the pilot’s seat, Artemis sat in one of the passenger seats, and Myles and Beckett were locked in the lavatory. No one was very happy. After a couple of hours, they arrived at the Raufarhofn airport in Raufarhofn, Iceland. Butler walked to the back and unlocked the lavatory door. Myles and Beckett tumbled out. They all left the plane together. Later, they found a hotel. “It was just built recently,” said Artemis, pointing to the sign above the hotel entrance. “Maybe that’s why Foaly didn’t find anything.”

      The hotel was called Hotel Nordurljos. It was a snug little hotel with not many rooms. It had a breakfast service, though. As if I’m ever even going anywhere near hotel food, thought Artemis. There was a nice fireplace going in the corner. After checking in, they were directed to their room. The room was looked nice and the beds were comfortable. Not exactly home, thought Artemis. But it’s better than camping.

      The next morning came sunny. There were a few cloud here and there, and there was no wind. Artemis started the day with a cup of Earl Grey tea. Then, after a nice breakfast of ham and eggs from the resteraunt down the road, they got back in the plane and headed for Mt. Öræfajökull along with Myles and Beckett. About an hour and twenty minutes later, they were there. Artemis looked at Öræfajökull from his plane. It seemed huge! Artemis had seen pictures of it on Google Earth. But it seemed so much bigger now. Artemis stared in awe. It was covered in a blanket of snow with a few bare rocks jutting out here and there. There weren’t many caves on Öræfajökull, so it probably wouldn’t be hard to find Holly.

      It was hard to find Holly. They had stopped at every cave and let Butler down to explore them. He had come out of each and every one of them without finding even a trace of her. After a long day of searching without any luck, Butler flew them all back to the hotel. The hotel didn’t seem quite as nice anymore. They went back to their room and found it trashed! Artemis stared from the doorway. Butler immediately went to his bag to get his finger print kit. “Dang it!” yelled Butler. “He stole my fingerprinting kit!” “No he didn’t,” said Myles with a grin. “I brought it on the plane. I thought that we might need them to look for finger prints in the caves.” Butler quickly snatched it out of his hands without so much as a “Thank you!”, and immediately began searching the room for finger prints.

      That night, Butler slept in the bed near the window and Artemis slept in the bed closer to the door. Myles and Beckett slept between the two beds. They kept getting squashed every time Butler or Artemis got up to use the restroom, or to get something to eat. Butler had found a few fingerprints on the luggage and the windows. He had turned them into the police. They had identified them as the fingerprints of Derek Walker. He had died ten years ago in an airplane crash over the Pacific Ocean. His body had never been found. He was assumed dead. But the fingerprints had provided convincing evidence that he had lived. Before he died, he had lived in Raufarhofn, Iceland with his wife and three children. They had all died in the plane crash along with Derek. Except his youngest son, Neville. Neville had been too young to speak when he had been left with his Aunt Janice. His father had been going on vacation to a luxury resort and spa in Canada. He had left Neville with Aunt Janice because he wasn’t old enough for a spa yet. When their plane crashed, Janice started caring for him. She sent him to school, and paid for his food and clothes. When Neville was five, his Aunt Janice had died of a heart attack. Neville was sent to the Little Hearts Orphanage, where he spent the rest of his life. Neville was eleven now.

      Artemis woke up the next morning to the smell of freshly-baked doughnuts. He went downstairs with Butler and the twins and ate until he could eat no more. There were bagels, donuts, eggs, bacon, toast and more! Artemis had tasted better, but he was surprised at good the hotel food was. He had always thought of hotel food the third worst kind of food in the world, next to fast food and airline food. But this, he enjoyed! They left at around noon and went back to Öræfajökull. After a half-hearted search for Holly, they left for the Little Hearts Orphanage.

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122 Reviews for “Artemis and the World of Snow”

  1. Olive Says:

    FCD I really like the emailing idea and the way you formatted it. Plus, I love where it’s going. Nice job!!

  2. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    FOR SUM REASON IT DOESNT TAKE MY COMMENT! i wrote it already but its not showing up!

  3. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    but it took that.. I really like it and you must continue , but I have one question…. How did you get the a and the e to stick together?

  4. shanette Says:

    haha, a and e sticking together… nice!

  5. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    I saw it in the ” Golden Compass” too!

  6. 017350 Says:

    How did I get the “a” and the “e” to stick together? I was doing a Wikipedia search for mountains in Iceland. When I saw Öræfajökull, I copied and pasted it onto the story panel! I’m glad you liked it!

  7. xxemxx Says:

    LOL- didn’t thik he’d like skiing! Not sure how you could get the “a” and “e” to stick together. Anyway I like the e-mail idea (instead of IM- I’ve seen loads of them now). The plot is also orginal so update soon!

  8. Jelly Says:

    æ coolieo! I can’t wait for more but you probably should have put chppy 1&2 together
    æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ

  9. 017350 Says:

    I think I WILL put chapter 1 & 2 together. Thanks for the suggestion, jelly!

  10. Jelly Says:

    æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ
    Welcome! r u going 2 update 2?

  11. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    æ its soooo cool! lol , good job!

  12. 017350 Says:

    UPDATED!!!

  13. Jelly Says:

    æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ

    Hooray! I like it but not enough has changed for me to really criticize, rate,or compliment. Still here tho so I guess that means your story is good enough! I hope tho they go 2 Mt. Öræfajökull. soon!

  14. Olive Says:

    I really like it so far! Keep it up!

  15. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    nice, keep it up.

  16. 017350 Says:

    I’m glad you like it! I’m also VERY glad I had that dream that gave me this idea! :)

    P.S. Jelly seems to just LOVE that “æ” thing! :mrgreen:

  17. xxemxx Says:

    Just read Chapter 2- quite short- but just as good as the first chapter!!
    :)

  18. 017350 Says:

    UPDATED!!! :D

  19. 017350 Says:

    WWHAAA! Nobody’s commenting on this story! How can I continue without my favorite readers *cough*Jelly*cough* commenting!? I will update after at least 3 comments. RR&R! :)

  20. Jelly Says:

    why is it cold?!?!? and if you really did get that info from Wiki then you need to do a Bibliography at the end of this! please continue! I love this story! of and gauzuntight! I sure hope your virus doesn’t last long! comon ppl! we want MORE! comment!!

  21. Olive Says:

    You obviously did your research and I love that in a story. Keep it up!

  22. 017350 Says:

    Jelly- Don’t worry, I will do bibliography at the end. Why is it cold? :twisted: You’ll just have to wait and see…

    Olive- Yes, it took a LOT of research. All these places are real. Mt. Öræfajökull is real and I will add more REAL places later! I might even add a pic of Mt. Öræfajökull! ;)

    Thanks for reading! I will update soon! :D

  23. 017350 Says:

    It’s small, but I’ve

    UPDATED!!!

  24. The Mafia Says:

    I like it very much. It has a good layout and a great storyline. No grammar mistakes that I can see. But I think that this story is really going somewhere!

  25. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    wow , its nice! I love it, The reason why they do æ its kind of old english , the way they used to write. I LOVE THE STORY , TELL US WHEN U UPDATE!

  26. ARTY'SELFFRIEND Says:

    I like it so far….. How in the world do you do the ae thingy?

  27. 017350 Says:

    Like this: æ

  28. Olive Says:

    It was definitly a small update, but I still love where it’s going. Keep writing!

  29. Jelly Says:

    Arty wants a hotel?Y? can’t he just sleep in a tent like a normal person?

  30. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    lol… normal people sleep in tents! no, lots of people sleep in hotels! (I’m scared of bugs climbing on me while I’m Sleeping!)

  31. Jelly Says:

    they don’t climb on you if you close the screen!

  32. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    yeah….. but sleeping in the wild ,…. I always wanted to do that…. but then again…….I want to live in a place ( or sleep in a place ) WHERE THERE ARE NO BUGS AT ALL! (At least no bugs for another 5 million miles or so )

  33. Jelly Says:

    impossible. there are little tiny bugs in everyones bed in their pillow and mattress they are so small they fit through the threads holding it together.

  34. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    I noe… THAT CREEPS ME OUT! I SAW IT ON THE NEWS , I WENT TO MY DAD AND ASKED FOR A NEW BED …. TOO BAD,…. MY BROTHER GOT ONE AND SINCE I HAD JUST GOTTEN AN IPOD I COULDNT GET A NEW BED!

  35. Jelly Says:

    æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ
    There is a new type of sheet that keeps them ou. I saw it in an add.

  36. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    I WANT THAT SHEET then , I’ll get it! YOU’LL SEE!

  37. 017350 Says:

    There is a sheet that keeps bugs out!? Tell me about it! I might use it in my story! ;)

  38. Jelly Says:

    OK, you see the other blackets have to large of holes that let the little bedbugs come through invest you, your clothes, and anything they come in contact with. so the people invented a sheet that you ca put over you mattress and pillows to keep them out, the threads are so tight, when you spill something on it it falls right off with no trace of it every being there, not even a wet spot!

  39. 017350 Says:

    Sweet! They must be really expensive though. But nothing Artemis can’t afford! I’m deviding an idea of how to put that in my story right now! :twisted:

  40. Jelly Says:

    cool!

  41. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    whats it called ( the bedsheet? )

  42. 017350 Says:

    I probably won’t use the anti-bug blankets until later. I might end up having to go camping. Because I’ve been doing some research, and there appear to be no hotels anywhere around Mt. Öræfajökull.

  43. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    wow……………. poor arty….

  44. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    luv the up8

  45. Jelly Says:

    Mahi- I don’t remember the name if you go 2 google and type in bug risitent bedsheet u might find it.
    I luv the upd8 but just for future refrences: You spelled Myles wrong it is spelled with a “y” not an “i”
    æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ æ

  46. 017350 Says:

    Are you sure? Let me check…

  47. 017350 Says:

    You’re right! I’ve updated it now!

  48. Jelly Says:

    great! thank you!

  49. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    bug risitent bedsheet …I’ll search it! UPD8 SOON PLLZZ

  50. Olive Says:

    How far into the future is this because Myles and Beckett sound older then 3.

  51. Jelly Says:

    well they must be like 3 because in preschool you learn to read and one of them couldn’t read yet making that child either stupid or three. :mrgreen:

  52. 017350 Says:

    I didn’t learn to read until Kindergarten! Myles and Beckett aren’t genii like Artemis. So they’re about 6 years old. :mrgreen: Oh! And if anyone sees me spell Myles M-I-L-E-S, please point it out. I keep forgetting it isn’t spelled like that! :roll:

  53. 017350 Says:

    UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :mrgreen:

  54. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    GR8 UPDATE! , wait , I bet artemis will say”NO HOTEL?FINE THEN!I’ll get one built.”

  55. Jelly Says:

    I thought that everyone learned to read in preschool!
    oh well good update! Maybe Arty will build a super-tent that is almost like a house!

  56. ARTY'SELFFRIEND Says:

    *Giggle* I’ve slept in a tent B4 and it ain’t fun!!!!!!! PLZ CONTINUE SOON!!! Anti bug sheet!!! *Cracks up*

  57. Jelly Says:

    tents are cold!!! when u go camping they wake you up at the crack of dawn and then you get outside and feel all hyper my little bro thought it would approprite if we drank Fanta the OJ kind to wake up with the sun so we rode around on our baikes for an hour slurping OJ while singing stupid songs waking everyone else up! lol oooh how stupid I feel now! :lol:

  58. 017350 Says:

    I have to go camping ina tent all the time. I remember once when I had to go camping when it was only 2 degrees out! That was a miserable night. Poor Arty…. It’s even colder in Iceland…

  59. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    omg… wow that kinda sounds like fun ! Not the freezing part.

  60. Jelly Says:

    It is! except for the spiders and racoons around the tent banging on it for the chips on the inside1

  61. 017350 Says:

    I live in bear country… It’s not uncommon to hear big heavy footsteps and to see hairy shadows on the tent wall. You might even hear low growling! It’s scary! :cry:

  62. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    BEARS AND SPIDERS?(falls out of chair.) okay , i dontmind bears , bears are okay , BUT I HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE spiders! i hate all bugs!

  63. 017350 Says:

    I live in the foothills of the smoky mountains. WE have everything here! Everything to make a camping trip heaven on some occasions. But on others, pure hell.

  64. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    …………..scary…..

  65. 017350 Says:

    Isn’t it. Artemis has to sleep in really cold temperatures. I don’t know what kind of animals live in Iceland. But I will do some research on that! :) I will update soon.

  66. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    MAYBE POLAR bears.

  67. 017350 Says:

    Do polar bears live in Iceland?

  68. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    i dont noe………

  69. Olive Says:

    LOL I like Artemis’s little thought at the end of the chapter. Keep it up!

  70. 017350 Says:

    I put that thought there just to give readers an idea of what Artemis thought about all this. AND it makes his condition seem worse, seeing it all condensed into one short paragraph! :lol:

  71. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    lol….. again./.. poor arty.

  72. 017350 Says:

    UPDATED!!

  73. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    LOL! wow , way to go out of thier way for one mesily adventure… shouldnt artemis expect this , if he knew the twins read the mail… or even if he suspects them reading it shouldnt he know that they might try this or is he too excited to think about anything else but saving holly’s life?

  74. 017350 Says:

    Whatever works.

  75. Jelly Says:

    *fourth comment dance*
    WOW! loving it! I KNOW polar bears don’t leave in Iceland (u should make it Greenland, its colder!) But I am positive wolves and Coyotes do! update soon!!!! :l

  76. 017350 Says:

    Greenland is a ice desert. Hardly any people live there. Iceland is better.

  77. 017350 Says:

    UPDATE!

  78. Jelly Says:

    how was I 2 know? I don’t like resaerching!!

  79. 017350 Says:

    Do you like the update?

  80. Jelly Says:

    YES!!!

  81. 017350 Says:

    Good. *Sighs with relief* I was afraid that nobody would like it…

  82. Olive Says:

    LOL I love Myles and Beckett’s last line. Keep it up!

  83. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    lol , me too “that wasn’t suppose to happen” that was funny , I LUV IT! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

  84. 017350 Says:

    I’m sorry I haven’t updated in a while. I’ve had a lot of things to do lately. :cry:

  85. 017350 Says:

    UPDATED!!!!!!!!!

    Sorry that I haven’t been on in a long time. But I’m back now!

    Jelly- Sorry, but I won’t be able to use those anti-bug blankets. I happened to overlook a hotel in the area, and now they won’t be going camping… :(

  86. Olive Says:

    That was a small update but still awesome!

  87. 017350 Says:

    Thanks, Olive. Most of my updates are probably going to be small.

  88. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    Actully , they could have the anti-bug bed sheets for the hotel bed…. lol, I love the small update, lol, I hope they find Holly.

  89. 017350 Says:

    They could be… But that would hardly be worth mentioning…

  90. 017350 Says:

    UPDATE!!!! To Chapter 6!!!! :mrgreen:

  91. Olive Says:

    OHHHH a twist! =D

  92. 017350 Says:

    What!? A twist!? Where!? :shock:

  93. 017350 Says:

    UPDATE!!!!! :D :mrgreen:

  94. Olive Says:

    I love how much background info you had about the other family. You definitly didn’t leave any blank spaces in the description, which was completly awesome for a reader! Keep up the good work.

  95. symojen Says:

    Lol! For some reason this cracks me up!

    Also, in Re: It’s cold,
    It’s “My family and I”. Please fix. Otherwise, It’s really cool! Awsome!

  96. symojen Says:

    FYI: Iceland is very warm, it has no ice. It was named that way by the Romans so that other people would THINK that its cold and nobody would steel their precious land. GREENLAND is the cold one, as it was also named by the Romans so that people would go THERE instead of Iceland.

  97. symojen Says:

    If it’s wrong, BLAME MY S.S. TEACHER!

  98. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    LOL, no you’re right, Greenland is colder but Iceland isn’t the warmest place on earth either, it is also cold, but some parts of it is green.Yeah, they should really switch those names now right?

  99. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    OH YEAH, fogot to mention in my last comment, love the update!

  100. ARTY'SELFFRIEND Says:

    *Crashes through the door* Ahhhhh!!!! BEAR!!! zomg!!!! I LOVVVVVVEDDDDDDD the UPDATE!!!!!!!

  101. Jelly, sick and bored Says:

    hmmm…. y rnt they looking 4 Holly instead of Neville? it doesn’t make enough sense for me 2 decide wut 2 rate it. oh well still like it!

  102. 017350 Says:

    They’re looking for Neville because his dad was the one that broke into their hotel room. They suspect that Nevilles dad has something to do with the Holly Case. But his dad was killed in a plane accident 10 years ago, so they need to find Neville to question him about his father. Even though he was only about two when his dad died. Let me tell you now, Neville is going to be a main character in this book. I took a quiz that rates OCs and Neville was rated 26! That’s an almost perfect number! So I hope that answers some questions of yours. Tell me if you have any more!

  103. 017350 Says:

    Oh! And another reason: They already looked for Holly and found no trace of her. But don’t worry, they’ll definitely come back for her later! ;)

    P.S. Celebrate! This is the 103rd comment for Artemis and the World of Snow! :mrgreen:

  104. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    lol wow, this story is a bog hiit and only with 6 chapters lol.Keep on writting I’m waiting.

  105. 017350 Says:

    (small) UPDATE!!!!!!! :D

  106. Olive Says:

    Okay, it was very small. It was still excellent though! You spelt done wrong though. Just thought you should know that.

  107. 017350 Says:

    Whoops! You’re right! I’ve fixed that now. Thanks for pointing that out! ;)

  108. 017350 Says:

    A long awaited UPDATE!!! ;)

  109. Olive Says:

    That was a very small update, but very sweet! :)

  110. Star Jinin Says:

    Erm…how does this relate with the plot?

  111. 017350 Says:

    Remember Neville? It was from his point of view. You’ll see how that affects Artemis in the next chapter.

  112. Simetra16 Says:

    Symojen is right, Iceland has only ice on the northern tip, and it’s not so much. It’s really warm; sometimes reaching 100 degrees southern in the fall. That’s okay! :) I really like the story so far! Please continue.

  113. Simetra16 Says:

    Wait lemme’ search Iceland … no, no! This is really confusing but just listen. Europe told Rome that this penninsula (Iceland - wasn’t called Iceland back then; was a penninsula) was full of lush vegetation and stuff like that because they thought it was. So the Romans tried to get there and start a new civilization there. They ACTUALLY ended up in what is now greenland. Iceland was infact very warm back then, and Greenland was very cold. They became angry because Rome thought Europe had lied to them to get them out. So, they named greenland Greenland so that they could get rid of the Europeans! When they found Iceland on their way back, they named it Iceland so the Europeans wouldn’t go there. OVER TIME GREENLAND BECAME WARMER AND ICELAND BECAME COLDER.

  114. symojen Says:

    Oooh! Now I get it! So Europe made a mistake, Rome mistook it. They went to Greenland by accident and got mad, then tricked Europe to get revenge. See what revenge can do? It can get people confused about what actually happened and may just start a war.

  115. 017350 Says:

    Sweet, Simetra16! I didn’t know that! :)

  116. Shanette Says:

    WOW, I really like it! Has a unique storyline, and the title is nice as well! Update soon!

  117. 017350 Says:

    UPDATE!!!

  118. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    LOVE UR UPDATE! I love this story its zawesum, also i DID SOME RESEARCH ON ICELAND! Did you know it was number 1 on the HDI ranking list…. that must mean its and awesum place to live in……

  119. iWrite Says:

    Really good story!

  120. 017350 Says:

    Sorry I haven’t been updating. I’ve been VERY VER VERY busy recently. That’s because I started my own forum: http://writersclubforum.lightbb.com/ , and I’ve been REALLY busy with it.

  121. Steven Says:

    Ummm… Can u plz update?

  122. kuyokiartemis Says:

    Keep going! Let someone freeze in Iceland! [As long it isn’t Artemis, Holly, Butler, Foaly, or Root] You know what? Let Grub freeze to death! Who needs him?

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