Aphrodite
Written on September 6th, 2007 by VinyayaStory Details
(2 votes, average: 4 out of 5)
Loading ...After reviving an embarrased Artemis Affy was still extremly excited. ” Oh Frond I have soooo much to ask you!”
” Emm ok -”
” Do you secretly like Trouble Kelp???”
” No I-”
” Do you secretly like Foaly???”
” NO I-”
” Do you secretly like Butler???”
” No! Wait, what the hell ! How dare you! That’s gross!”
” Ok sorry, do you secretly like Chix???”
” NO!!!!”
” Ok then, I know who you secretly like! Or should I say LOVE!”
” Who?”
” Don’t answer that question.” Artemis had recovered sufficiently to speek now.
” But it is soooo obvious!”
” Come on just tell me! Who do I secretly love then?”
” You love-”
” IthinkyoushouldgoandgetsomethingtodrinkAphrodite,youlookreallypale!” said Artemis in a rush.
” But-”
” NOW!!!!!!!!!”
” Ok…”
Holly sighed.
” Hey wait! Does anyone else know I exist in this house?”
” Only Nyx.”
” Ok then. We need to talk later though.”
” Ok and by the way, Artemis? Do you love Minerva or Juliet?”
” I love…”
To be continued.
Immediatley.
” Neither!!!!!”
” Oh good Minerva is such a mary-sue.”
” A what?”
” And Juliet is like your sister. But she is much nicer than in the books…”
Artemis were still staring as Aphrodite walked down the hall and down the stairs, humming.
” Artemis do you really not love Minerva?”
” Holly I have no interest in her at all.”
” Who do you have interest in then?”
” I think we should go for a walk tonight. See you later.”
Holly stared at him as he walked down the hall after Affy.
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September 6th, 2007 at 11:24 pm
This is good!
September 6th, 2007 at 11:53 pm
your so good at writing!
September 7th, 2007 at 1:57 am
I like the Greek godess additions. (aphradite is supposed to be drop dead gorgeous! Hara is supposed to be an evil little fart, lol according to hercules!)
September 7th, 2007 at 4:24 am
yeah when arty tells them his name….well I’ll wait and find out!lol;)
September 7th, 2007 at 8:13 am
oo i love greeek mythology, Aphrodite - goddes of beaty, Hera .. Zues’s ‘wife’ ig you can call it that.. ahaha read up on it people- its not at all like hercules!
September 7th, 2007 at 10:25 am
yay a greek mythology story!!!
September 7th, 2007 at 12:46 pm
yup lol btw although i am aphrodite it is not based fully on me. i am pale and not tanned and i am not very tall but at least i am not fat lol. in this our greek mythology names will all be explained and yes the characters are based on my freinds lol. and hera in this although very superficial is not evil lol. !!!!! thanx 4 reviewing lol!
September 7th, 2007 at 2:33 pm
ok chappie three added tell me if u want me to add more lol
September 7th, 2007 at 7:36 pm
more more more!
September 7th, 2007 at 7:50 pm
thats soo good u gotta finish it!(hey no one did *first comment dance!*)
September 7th, 2007 at 8:24 pm
oh man i lurved the virgin part! that was hilarious! please write more!
September 7th, 2007 at 10:17 pm
yay u liked it i will write more now!
September 8th, 2007 at 12:14 am
lol i luv the walk in wardrob part “A black Armani suit or a black Armani suit”
September 8th, 2007 at 3:44 am
more more more MORE pls.:)
September 8th, 2007 at 4:12 am
I love greek myths toooooo!!!!!!!!I’ve been looking online for a good GREEK MYTHS books….add more pls
September 8th, 2007 at 2:15 pm
ok part 4 done now i will add more later
September 13th, 2007 at 12:32 am
hi! i still love it! hurry up and write part 5 and beyond!
September 14th, 2007 at 1:08 pm
but i might write a bit more quickly if someone else reviewed (hint hint)..
September 14th, 2007 at 3:10 pm
there. chappie 5 and 6 added lol
September 14th, 2007 at 7:54 pm
but still no-one reviews. hmph.
September 14th, 2007 at 11:45 pm
I like it. I wonder why they would be excited to see Artemis Fowl. You know the one that says “Arty’s Diary”? You said that chapter seven was up. There are only six chapters. I still like it.
September 15th, 2007 at 8:15 am
no i didn’t say chappie seven that was someone else telling me that their chappie seven was up. and you will find out why affy and nyx were excited to find it was arty soon (hint: they read the arty fowl books back in their dimension)lol
September 15th, 2007 at 5:12 pm
ok i am gonna write the next aprt now even though no-one will read it
September 15th, 2007 at 7:43 pm
Oh. Don’t think that no one will read your next chapter. If no one does, than I am wrong, but I will read it. So don’t think about the wrong way.
September 16th, 2007 at 12:25 am
god this is really funny lol, “rolling on ground”
September 16th, 2007 at 9:43 am
thanx ok i take it back lol
September 16th, 2007 at 10:22 am
Lovely lovely lovely
September 16th, 2007 at 5:21 pm
ok lol
September 16th, 2007 at 5:46 pm
there chappie 8 up lol what u thinkin?
September 16th, 2007 at 5:48 pm
I think…I think that
September 16th, 2007 at 5:50 pm
its cool so far..even if I’m an A/M shipper.dont say anything about the fact that I’m an A/M fan.and dont secretly hate me please.
September 16th, 2007 at 7:47 pm
i don’t hate u don’t worry lol
September 17th, 2007 at 3:13 am
thx that put my mind at ease
September 17th, 2007 at 4:29 am
One question. When are you going to write chapter 10? Another question, are Affy and Nyx obsessed with Artemis Fowl? I mean That part was really wierd. In a good way.
September 17th, 2007 at 5:49 am
I have to admit that my first thought glancing at this story was ‘wow, this is stupid’. And I still think it’s sort of stupid. But now I mean it in a good way- hard to explain. Everyone is completely OOC and there’s only the barest thread of a plot, but it’s a really cute story and pretty funny. It moves quickly, and is easy to read. And it kept me reading for nine chapters, which is impressive.
Anyway, the point is, I like it.
September 17th, 2007 at 11:18 am
um thanx i guess?
btw u say everyone is out of character but me and my freinds are actually like that.lol.
September 18th, 2007 at 4:42 pm
and there will be a chapter ten just be patient
September 18th, 2007 at 4:48 pm
k gues u missed me…..*sob* i was bout to talk to someone over da internet for once in my life.
September 19th, 2007 at 2:31 am
I really am patient most of the time, but when things get exciting and really good(like your story for example), I can be impatient. I’ll try to wait though. You still have not answered my first question. Are Affy and Nyx obsessed with Artemis? I mean the way they act, its just like they are obsessed with him. It is still really good though.
September 19th, 2007 at 4:39 pm
i did answer! it is just up the page and by now u should know that nyx and affy came from this world and got sucked inot arty-fowl land accidently. they are obsessed cos they are fan girls like you and me!
September 19th, 2007 at 10:14 pm
Oh, sorry about that.
September 19th, 2007 at 10:40 pm
Hey. Read my story. It’s called “Artemis Fowl Goes to Hogwarts”. I might write more today if I get at least two reviews.
September 21st, 2007 at 9:52 am
lol “he does smell good” lol thats good ♣♣♣
September 22nd, 2007 at 7:56 pm
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay another chappy
September 22nd, 2007 at 8:07 pm
omg i rotfl!!!! i still love it. affy and nyx are exactly like me and my best friend!!!!!
September 24th, 2007 at 4:38 am
◘♥♣ditto to wat 1crazyhollyfan said. lol.♣♥◘
September 24th, 2007 at 11:50 pm
please hurry up!!! its been… *consults calender* three days and you still havent added anything!!! grrrr
September 24th, 2007 at 11:55 pm
moooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeee nooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwww pppppppppppppplllllllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzz
sob sob sob (place sad smiley face here!)
September 25th, 2007 at 8:41 pm
KEEP ADDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
September 25th, 2007 at 9:18 pm
ok lol i thought u had all given up on me!!!! xx thanx!
September 25th, 2007 at 11:12 pm
more more more!!!!!
September 27th, 2007 at 2:12 am
give up on one of the best fanfic writers here?? never!
September 27th, 2007 at 5:15 pm
thanku crazy! btw who is jelly? boy? girl? anyone know? and when did she get here???
September 28th, 2007 at 2:14 am
Hello Vinyaya my daddy told me not to give anyone any information so i cannot tell you my gender if you want to criticize me fine but you even if you think my writing is stupid or what ever i still worship your stories keep writing!!!
September 28th, 2007 at 12:46 pm
I don’t think you are stupid don’t worry. Thanks for all the positive reviews! And nice to meet you, I normally welcome people!
September 29th, 2007 at 8:40 pm
Thank you Plz keep writing this is a good story!!!!!
September 29th, 2007 at 9:25 pm
I am just about to type the first sentence of the next chapter. Shall I tell you what it is? Nah. I’ll let the suspense build… lol
September 30th, 2007 at 2:58 am
type more or the world will blow up! Mohahahahahahaha *choke* *choke* Well you get the point.
September 30th, 2007 at 2:56 pm
Where is the 12th chapter!!!
October 2nd, 2007 at 4:49 pm
it should be there… oh wait! shoot i forgot to press publish! brb
October 2nd, 2007 at 9:50 pm
This chapter is a little short….
October 3rd, 2007 at 2:43 am
more M O R E ! N O W
October 3rd, 2007 at 7:57 am
ohhh i can’t wait!it’s just so good!!!! (jumps around the room watiting)
October 3rd, 2007 at 4:38 pm
arrg what is wrong with it it wont add what i type!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! grrr… i will try once more…
October 3rd, 2007 at 8:08 pm
Well, I see it, so it must have worked.
I liked this new chapter, but it’s a bit short. And I was hoping Minerva would be a positive, nonromantic character for once (wishful thinking, I know). Anyway, good chapter, keep it up.
October 3rd, 2007 at 9:28 pm
she will later lol i am not nearly done with this! and hestia and juliet and hera are going to get more important
!
October 3rd, 2007 at 9:28 pm
so girls what do we think about the graphic novel? is it fabulous or is it fabulous!!!!
October 3rd, 2007 at 9:57 pm
I dunno I haven’t seen it yet
October 3rd, 2007 at 10:01 pm
I love this chapter because it is actual factual
Also I hate Minerva!!! SHE MUST BE SQUASHED LIKE THE EVIL FART SHE IS!!!
p.s.for Vinyaya only: on the week on the farm story you told me to add action. What kind of action would you like to see?
October 4th, 2007 at 12:34 am
its pretty darn obvious that you dont like minerva. lol, good job on latest chappie! (and thank for calling me “experienced” and “favorite writer.”)
October 4th, 2007 at 12:45 am
I agree with Jelly. Hey, Jelly, how did you come up with that name?
October 4th, 2007 at 1:20 am
WHOO HOO GRAPHIC NOVEL!!!!!…dont mind mind me just a bit crazy =)
October 4th, 2007 at 4:58 pm
it amaze is it not? lol
5the graphic novel not this lol
October 5th, 2007 at 1:46 am
i WENT TO GIRL SCOUT CAMP AND MY FAVORITE COUNSELOR THEIR HAD CHOSEN THE NAME JELLY
October 5th, 2007 at 12:47 pm
ewwwwwww goose fat
October 6th, 2007 at 12:50 am
I agree with lil.arty. EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Goose fat! I think Minerva would hate that. But I know that Affy and Nyx hate her too so I am okay with that.
October 6th, 2007 at 10:39 am
yay lol kill minerva with goose fat!!!
October 6th, 2007 at 4:51 pm
Are you going to kill her with Willy Wonka’s Golden goose’s goes fat or regular goose fat?
October 6th, 2007 at 9:47 pm
erm huh?
October 7th, 2007 at 2:53 am
she means is it going to be goose fat from normal geese or Willy Wonka’s golden gooses goose fat!?!?!?
October 7th, 2007 at 11:35 am
eh i have no idea… normal goose fat will sufice i think… and i don’t think she will actually drink it let alone die …
October 7th, 2007 at 12:18 pm
ok chapter 13 up! wot r ur thoughts?
October 7th, 2007 at 8:57 pm
Good chapter but they should be pretend sleeping then when Artemis leaves they can stuff Willy Wonka’s Golden Gosses gosses fat in her mouth!!
October 8th, 2007 at 10:23 am
once again…..
ewwwwwwwwwwwwwww goose fat!!!!!
October 9th, 2007 at 12:26 am
I wonder where they will get it?
Hey they could get it from real peoples goosebumps then when Minervia finds out what it is she will toss her cookies even more!!
October 9th, 2007 at 4:49 pm
omg would you let me write the story without guessing what i am gonna do lol!
October 9th, 2007 at 7:07 pm
oh eh sorry then no more guessing fom me I just think that the goosebumps would be awesome.
lol!
October 9th, 2007 at 9:36 pm
What is so funny r u going to update and acctually use the goosbump idea?!?!?
October 11th, 2007 at 9:58 pm
NO LOL!
October 11th, 2007 at 10:12 pm
GOOD! that would make a few weak people barf and it would be painful to those people who got rid of their goosebumps!
October 12th, 2007 at 12:48 pm
goose fat doesn’t ome from goosebups anyway…
October 13th, 2007 at 2:30 am
ok i dont know were the goose fat even begain buttttt it is reallyyyyyyyyyy ….random
October 13th, 2007 at 6:53 pm
Random is what I LIVE for!! besides how would you know what goosebumps contain?!?!? have you actually tested it?
October 14th, 2007 at 4:51 pm
i am going to write the chapter now.
October 14th, 2007 at 4:51 pm
does anyone actually want me to do the goosebumps idea?…
October 14th, 2007 at 5:00 pm
One word for you:NO! I do not have a weak stomach or anything, but I am concerned about people who do. I do want to scare my sister though. I wuold not do it.
October 14th, 2007 at 7:42 pm
ok lol i will go ahead and not do it. i didn’t really like that idea anyway…
October 14th, 2007 at 9:11 pm
YAY another chapter! LOL I really didn’t think you would even CONSIDER doing the goosebump idea!!
October 15th, 2007 at 11:15 am
well i can’t type the chapter untill wednesday because i am staying with my gran and although her computer works i can’t acces youtube livevideo or the story panel here on it. sorry! the new chappie will be up by wednesday morning in scotland e.g the middle of the night in america lol
October 16th, 2007 at 12:05 am
You live in Scotland!?!? that is to cool!
October 16th, 2007 at 1:43 pm
ok now this is getting EXTREMELY of the point lol can we stick to reviewing the story please?
October 18th, 2007 at 8:14 am
bak to reviewing……………..eek i can’t wait for the next part
October 19th, 2007 at 1:46 am
Just read chappie 13! That was good.
October 20th, 2007 at 6:48 pm
UPDATE SOONEEEEYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!
October 20th, 2007 at 8:19 pm
2 mmk plz go imedialey 2 this post:HELP ME! SOMEONE HAS DELETED ALL MY STORIES!!HELP ME MMK!!!
October 25th, 2007 at 6:27 pm
grrrr I am very jelous of you Vinyaya You have 105 comments when the most I have is 63! dang I am contributing!
* waaaaaaaaa* sob sob sob (puts head on keyboard and cries even more) gtybvhrft5555555555555cmkjihynubggbhhtyvgvftbfdcrrcdv,jh sorry. my head spelled that other stuff. HET IT ISN”T UNDERLINED!
October 26th, 2007 at 4:28 pm
…?
October 26th, 2007 at 6:22 pm
:)
I m a happy hippy house!
October 28th, 2007 at 1:09 am
whooo random person! GO HIPPYSSSS!!!….plzzzzzzzzzz addddddd moreeeeeeee
October 28th, 2007 at 1:15 am
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October 30th, 2007 at 10:25 pm
did you know that subject rhymes with reject? Just like my brother he is a social reject!
November 1st, 2007 at 3:28 am
U HAVE TO UPDATE , I LOVE UR WRITING! SERIOSLY ITS GREAT , I REALLY WISH U’DE CONTINUE.
November 1st, 2007 at 5:36 pm
i know i know but i am really busy and i have prelims!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ahhhhhhhhhhhh *goes back to revising* eeep!
November 2nd, 2007 at 8:21 pm
prelims?
November 3rd, 2007 at 4:33 pm
exam in scotland lol!!!!
November 3rd, 2007 at 4:41 pm
is it like the wdyka (What do you know already)
test? or is it like an IQ test?
November 4th, 2007 at 3:05 pm
neither it is like an extremly important test which can decide what collage you go to and what your job will be like!!!!!! and there is one for each of you subjects!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ahhhhhh *falls of chair in terror* eeppppp!
November 4th, 2007 at 6:43 pm
WHAT?!?!?!? that sounds like an EVIL test! I don’t want to go to middle school or high school anymore! Of course there is the matter of getting your drivers license….
November 4th, 2007 at 6:44 pm
is it the aptitude test?
November 5th, 2007 at 1:12 am
EEK! I Dont wanna go to highskwl next year anymore lol
November 5th, 2007 at 1:27 am
WOW your 14 years old! to think I talk to you guys as if you were 9 too!
November 5th, 2007 at 9:30 am
hee hee im 12
November 5th, 2007 at 8:32 pm
i am an old fogey lol compared to you jelly lol… bow down to me oh young one!!! for i have a great 5 years more knowlegde than you!!!! jk lol
November 5th, 2007 at 11:03 pm
lil arty did you skip some grades? I only skipped one that was 4th.
Vinyaya: lol guess what! If I don’t die in a car accident or something I WILL live longer than you!!!! MWAHAHAHAHA and just for your information I turn ten on November 12!
November 6th, 2007 at 5:56 am
Im only 12.I haven’t skipped grades but jus t because I don’t want to.I am smart(really really)
Anyway,age and grade isn’t important.We’re here for a reason.TO WRITE ARTEMIS RELATED STORIES!!!and review so that the author knows you appreciate them.
GOOD LUCK!and I still love your story,Vinyaya!
November 6th, 2007 at 6:23 am
jELLY:
I DIDN’T skip a grade or atleast not that i can remeber
November 6th, 2007 at 6:08 pm
you can’t skip years at school in britain, but yoiu can be held back lol
November 6th, 2007 at 10:54 pm
REALLY! there was a kid I read about and he got in college at age twelve!!!
:p
keep going! 
Vinyaya: good update
November 8th, 2007 at 7:25 am
yay an update! plzzzzzz do another update! i beg of u once again!
November 13th, 2007 at 8:29 pm
ok so this next update is the last one so i hope it is worthwhile and you enjoy it!
November 13th, 2007 at 9:26 pm
btw Happy 10th birthday Jelly!!!!!!!! sorry i forgot to say that yesterday!!!!
November 13th, 2007 at 11:15 pm
Thank u!! BOO HOO!!
don’t LEAVE!!!!!! write more stories PLEASE!!!!!!
November 15th, 2007 at 7:49 am
ohhh happy birthday jelly!
November 15th, 2007 at 1:25 pm
happy birthday Jelly…..sorry , I didn’y know before! and so wait YOU GUYS LIVE IN SCOTTLAND? COOOL! so the prelims are like the S.A.T’S OR STATE TESTS right? I agree they are EVIL
Oh yah and if you wanted to skip grades here theysent you to the gifted program , great story Vinyayay
November 16th, 2007 at 1:33 am
who r u talking about living in Scotland? I noe Vinyaya does I live in Australia and so does Kgerrad Arty_and_holly_4ever lives in the us in Wisconsin. And soooooooo many more people live in the U.S. I just don’t know who. Today in social studies we learned about America and went on to the computer to see what your culture was and I saw you guys were having thanksgiving (WHAT IS THAT?!??!) So Happy Thanksgiving. (plz explain what that is all about! there was a thing that said what it was below but we had to leave the lab before I could read it.)
Jelly
November 22nd, 2007 at 5:12 pm
I went onto the computer and found out.
HAPPY THANKSGIVING! AMERICANOES!!
November 25th, 2007 at 3:29 am
Haha, Vinyaya, you never fail to make me laugh. I love you story, even though I am totally not an A/H shipper. Very well done
November 29th, 2007 at 2:24 am
Jelly told me Vinyaya left FanFiction. Is that true?
November 29th, 2007 at 2:35 am
OMG!! Y ou neva heard of tahnx givin’ it’s like the best , thanx giving holiday’s and everything! I like it cuz there is a 4 day weeekend! otherwise i don’t celebrate it….. but anyway , I learned about Europe and am learning about Africa ( IN S.S ) , and wacth out Jelly Australia is next!! ( HOPEFULLY )
November 29th, 2007 at 10:55 pm
I take it you live in the US?
November 29th, 2007 at 10:57 pm
yup! And in the famous city! NEW YORK CITY!
December 8th, 2007 at 5:46 pm
Awwwwwwwwww this is the 1st time i read this and it is good!!! Im such a loser! :sobs: but ya me is a A/H shippah! oh yeah! that was really funny!!
December 10th, 2007 at 11:45 pm
To Vinyaya: This is my Favorite story EVER!!!
December 12th, 2007 at 1:37 am
I live in the US. In east Tennessee. I can’t believe that you’ve never heard of Thanksgiving. THATS CRAZY!!!
December 12th, 2007 at 2:31 am
I KNOW , but then when u think about it , thanx giving is celebrated for when the pilgrams met the native americans , is AMERICA , so , obvoiusly it won’t be celebrated anywhere else..( usually)
December 13th, 2007 at 11:07 pm
Yeah so I know i sed i was fiished with this. I toally lied!!!! I am gonna write a sequal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
December 13th, 2007 at 11:20 pm
YAY!!
December 14th, 2007 at 8:25 am
oh goody a sequal
January 20th, 2008 at 1:17 pm
YYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
January 22nd, 2008 at 2:03 am
I nominate this story for Editors choice! even tho it isn’t up 2 me I think Vinyaya deserves it!
*clapping people in background*
January 27th, 2008 at 8:31 am
i agree…*whistles and cheerin in backround*
March 29th, 2008 at 9:50 pm
Okay, looking back to this story after all this time, it strikes me odd on why Affy couldn’t have simply used Artemis’s cell phone…surely he has one…
May 10th, 2008 at 10:14 am
maybe he had no conection line
May 11th, 2008 at 1:50 pm
WOW, the story was nice! I loved it! xD
Not fair.. sobs I think I’m the only Asian here
Singapore is a VERY warm place Dx
SCOTLAND!!! I AM DYING TO GO THERE!!
June 7th, 2008 at 2:21 am
Hmm…. I’m not so sure I like it so much anymore… But keep updating.
June 14th, 2008 at 9:28 pm
Minervia, there’s a sequal…
July 9th, 2008 at 3:09 pm
In chapter 10 I have faund someting wath I didn’t anderstend
” Nyx wake up they are killing rabbit!”
Nyx was up and out of bed like a dart without pause to ask where said kidnappers (killers) were. A minute later She stormed back into the room.
October 26th, 2008 at 7:31 pm
Say, I like this story. I’m not a shipper though. Hah! Artymon, you have not commented on this story yet!!!
Also, why are all the comments, like, 4 months old?