AF6:The Time Paradox——————————–fan version
Written on December 16th, 2007 by therealanswerStory Details
- Status : Incomplete
- Category: General
- Author: therealanswer
- Word Count: 1174
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Chapter 3: Flight delays
Holly was rolling her eyes as she waited in an extensive line at the Tara shuttleport. She was just about at the point of hi-jacking a shuttle when she was next in line. a middle aged pixie slumped in a swivel-chair averted his gaze gaze onto holly who promptly demanded a ticket for the 5:45 ride. “very well.” the sleepy pixie practically snored.
She snatched the ticket and stepped into the shuttle. Once she got into the shuttle holly was trying to sleep but she couldn’t seem to. her eyes would close but she just lay the listening to children whine and corny shopping mall music play. after a while of lying there she finally fell asleep but was woken about 15 minutes later by a familiar feeling: her soldier sense. It was buzzing so much in her head she could swore she could hear it. There was eminent danger here. her eyes snapped open like lighting and she looked around. no one seemed aware of anything unsettling. Then again, no one had quite been through what she had. Her eyes whipped across the room and searched out of all the windows. Nothing.
Then she it out of the corner of her eye. Something black and moving quickly. She had seen pictures of these in the academy. A human grenade. Make that grenades. her first thought was, How in Frond’s name…, but she quickley pulled herself together when she heard the first explosion. It had hit the roof of the tunnel. The muffled but loud explosion caused some rock and rubble to fall onto the shuttles roof. screams appropriately followed. Holly went into LEPrecon captin mode. “Okay, everyone! move to the North End of the shuttle wall!” As she was recognized as the hero of the goblin rebellion and the Zito probe this order was hurriedly obeyed. Holly had commanded this because the attckers were firing from the south end and if enough rubble hit the roof it would collapse in the middle, crushing anyone in the central part of the shuttle.BANG! another grenade hit the tunnel roof. She crouched and thought, humans…wait…Artemis! But no, Artemis was over being evil. She thought.But it could have all been a bluff. He was calming us down for one last attack. Then, no he’s honest I know for sure! He admitted we were friends even.
Now the attacker was throwing whole clusters of grenades and the roof of the tunnel crumbled and its contents finally collapsed the shuttle’s roof. It was then Holly realized, they’re not trying to kill us. They’re trying to trap us and get in! Holly looked up at the 10ft hole in the ceiling. Standing in the gap with a grin on their face was the person Holly least expected to see. “Crap.” she whispered under her breath.
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(5 votes, average: 3.4 out of 5)
December 16th, 2007 at 4:57 pm
*first comment dance!* I love it please keepo writing!!!
December 16th, 2007 at 5:43 pm
yes keep writing i love it!!!
December 16th, 2007 at 7:19 pm
idk enough of t 2 rate it but good so far! PLZ KEEP WRITING!!
December 16th, 2007 at 7:36 pm
really good , keep writting
December 16th, 2007 at 8:52 pm
I like it keep going!
December 16th, 2007 at 11:07 pm
when are you going to update!!!!
December 17th, 2007 at 4:12 am
i love how you included details like the LEP suits into the story. keep writing and make sure to post an announcement when you write more so I know to read it.
December 19th, 2007 at 10:47 pm
soz dudes(& or chics)
soo much stuff but I’ll keep writing and commenting and occasionally saying:
viva il hammer!
yeah. u heard me.
December 19th, 2007 at 11:02 pm
`~}{~` hiii!! i like the update keep it up!
December 21st, 2007 at 8:29 pm
dayummmmm ok im gonna write like a paragraph probabley then just like get my hair cut
(blonde with light and dark blonde highlights, layers, and sidebangs)
so yeah ok i need you dudes to rate this like really high so you can find me easier in the top tens!!!
viva il Hammer!!
puantti!!
jk for those who speak italian=)
December 21st, 2007 at 9:58 pm
nice
December 21st, 2007 at 11:32 pm
not much has changed MORE ACTION!!
December 22nd, 2007 at 2:02 pm
holee… dude it’s like 8:00 am where i live dude, where are these clocks set for????
January 13th, 2008 at 4:31 am
i don’t know but I will read it on Sunday. right now it is 9:30 pm so YIPES! it is BEDTIME! byebye ppl! read u guys tomorrow!
March 6th, 2008 at 4:22 pm
It’s Opal, most likely. But I wish I was Artemis… That would be so fun to read!!!