Accepted
Written on February 13th, 2008 by Star JininStory Details
Loading ...Wing Commander Vinyaya had suspicions about the new Short kid. She had good reasons for her suspicion. For one, he was acting vaguely suspicious, and two, fairy instrution was never wrong. Just you wait, Hubert! I’ll find out your secret! thought a beamused Vinyaya.
Trouble had been worried since this morning. Hubert had not shown up all day after showering.
Could it be Jeud and his two-bit gang?
The idea was certainly feasible after all, his gang had sent five new cadets packing in seven short days.
February 13th, 2008 at 4:58 am
FCD It is definitly not peverted! I love it! Holly pretending to be a boy to be accepted, I can totally imagine her doing that as a younger fairie! You should totally continue!
February 13th, 2008 at 1:15 pm
I like it so far! ^^ But how long was Holly’s hair before?
February 13th, 2008 at 5:09 pm
oh i totlay love this contniue i like this idea!
February 13th, 2008 at 9:16 pm
Oooh I really like this! That should be how her hair got so … well … short. Oh, and I didn’t get the chance to congratulate you on winning the contest! Happy Late Congrats!
PS I wasn’t here when the contest was held.
February 13th, 2008 at 9:17 pm
PSS: I rate Five!
February 14th, 2008 at 6:58 am
luv it so far
February 15th, 2008 at 12:11 am
Nice Upd8! I love it.
February 15th, 2008 at 2:19 am
Love it, as I do all your stories! Update!
March 2nd, 2008 at 12:33 am
omg i forgot about this story for a while and then read it again and i lurv it even more! plz update
!!!!!
March 2nd, 2008 at 4:44 am
Nice idea! Let me guess… Vinaya came to the LEP as a boy to, and she suspects Holly, right???
March 2nd, 2008 at 4:48 am
That’s a good idea… thanks, Hunter!
March 2nd, 2008 at 11:47 pm
Aaw. Poor Holly. I know what that feels like, so I can make a connection. That’s a good thing. Also, in the end, the last word should be Root telling Holly “Accepted.” I think that would be awsome.
March 4th, 2008 at 8:29 pm
I love this! Great job Star Jinin!
ps 5/5 and I lie in wait for the next chapter
March 25th, 2008 at 6:36 pm
can’t wait till the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!
March 31st, 2008 at 9:15 pm
You should check your puncuations. I saw lots of sentences without periods. Other than that, this story is awesome. Be sure to update soon!
Minerva Paradizo
April 27th, 2008 at 8:06 pm
I love this story sooo much! PLEASE FINISH IT. I check this story every day to see if there’s more! That’s how obsessed I am. FINISH
August 6th, 2008 at 3:28 am
What is FCD??? PLease update sooon
August 17th, 2008 at 11:53 pm
I love it you need to update it like really soon. I read it once then I just read it again and fell in love with it all over again.