Accepted
Written on February 13th, 2008 by Star JininStory Details
Loading ...Wow… Holly could only stare in amazement at the LEP Academy. She should after all, the Academy was built on a seven acre plot of land eight clicks from Police Plaza. Thousands of hopeful applicants flooded the grounds, and Holly knew that only a handful of the best would be picked for the LEP. A curious sensation ran up her spine: it was anxiety.
Holly approached the registration desk where a LEP gnome with a name tag that said “Ark Sool”. She was treated to a couple of suspicious glances.
Here it comes…the penny drops… thought Holly. There was no way she could pass for a male in the first place.
“What’s your name?” squinted Sool.
“Hol- Hubert Short” Holly stammered quickly.
Sool then glanced at her waist. He asked: “Then what’s that clipped in your pocket?”
Holly could barely contain a sigh of relief. Maybe the deception was working after all. Maybe.
“It’s my cell phone, sir”
“I’ll take that”, Sool replied, snatching the tiny communicator from her pocket, ignoring Holly’s protests. ”No communication devices during campus hours”
Holly didn’t argue further. She was lucky that she wasn’t booted off the Acadamy altogether and she better get a move on before that gnome could inspect her further.
Holly hurried to the auditorium, where the great Commander Root himself would be telling them about the LEP. She hurried off to hallway D4 so she would get decent seats.
“OOF! Oww…” Holly was so excited that she had crashed into another cadet.
“I’m…so sorry! I was just excited about Root’s opening speech that I wasn’t looking at where I was going!” Holly stopped as she saw who she just ran into. It was a elf that had a bright, cheerful expression and sported a T-shirt of various crunchball teams.
“Ha ha! That is like, the classic excuse of the century! No worries, no harm done. I’m Trouble Kelp!” Holly just couldn’t stop staring. Trouble looked just like those models you see in gossip magazines.
“Um… why are you staring at me like that?” Trouble asked awkwardly.
“Oh, um… nothing. It’s just that I have heard rumors about you and I couldn’t believe I am actually meeting the famous Trouble Kelp!” Holly lied. Of course she didn’t know anything about him.
“Ah, don’t listen to those silly fangirls! They just sprout the most ridiculous stories about me!” Trouble snorted. Holly smiled. Modesty was hard to find in a boy.
“Would you like to join us in a game of cruchball during free period?”
“Of course! See you at eleven!” Holly called as she skipped happilly down the hall.
February 13th, 2008 at 4:58 am
FCD It is definitly not peverted! I love it! Holly pretending to be a boy to be accepted, I can totally imagine her doing that as a younger fairie! You should totally continue!
February 13th, 2008 at 1:15 pm
I like it so far! ^^ But how long was Holly’s hair before?
February 13th, 2008 at 5:09 pm
oh i totlay love this contniue i like this idea!
February 13th, 2008 at 9:16 pm
Oooh I really like this! That should be how her hair got so … well … short. Oh, and I didn’t get the chance to congratulate you on winning the contest! Happy Late Congrats!
PS I wasn’t here when the contest was held.
February 13th, 2008 at 9:17 pm
PSS: I rate Five!
February 14th, 2008 at 6:58 am
luv it so far
February 15th, 2008 at 12:11 am
Nice Upd8! I love it.
February 15th, 2008 at 2:19 am
Love it, as I do all your stories! Update!
March 2nd, 2008 at 12:33 am
omg i forgot about this story for a while and then read it again and i lurv it even more! plz update
!!!!!
March 2nd, 2008 at 4:44 am
Nice idea! Let me guess… Vinaya came to the LEP as a boy to, and she suspects Holly, right???
March 2nd, 2008 at 4:48 am
That’s a good idea… thanks, Hunter!
March 2nd, 2008 at 11:47 pm
Aaw. Poor Holly. I know what that feels like, so I can make a connection. That’s a good thing. Also, in the end, the last word should be Root telling Holly “Accepted.” I think that would be awsome.
March 4th, 2008 at 8:29 pm
I love this! Great job Star Jinin!
ps 5/5 and I lie in wait for the next chapter
March 25th, 2008 at 6:36 pm
can’t wait till the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!
March 31st, 2008 at 9:15 pm
You should check your puncuations. I saw lots of sentences without periods. Other than that, this story is awesome. Be sure to update soon!
Minerva Paradizo
April 27th, 2008 at 8:06 pm
I love this story sooo much! PLEASE FINISH IT. I check this story every day to see if there’s more! That’s how obsessed I am. FINISH
August 6th, 2008 at 3:28 am
What is FCD??? PLease update sooon
August 17th, 2008 at 11:53 pm
I love it you need to update it like really soon. I read it once then I just read it again and fell in love with it all over again.