A Wild Yet Flawless Orchestration Of Broken Hearts Handle-Bar Moustaches And Vagabond lice.

Written on December 21st, 2007 by Unappreciated genius

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Dont ask about the name. Just dont.

 

Sorry i havnt updated my stories for so long every one ( that is, IF any of you have read them *glares evilly at you all* ). I have been away sailing!!!! t’was fun. But now im back, and will be updating my stories soon. For now- i wanted to put an altered version of an email someone sent to me ( yes, i did get their permission to put it up here)

 (p.s, please dont go off at me for the shipping in this story,  there is hardly anyone to pair up!)

 

 

 

 Butler Had no experience in writing songs. But he was taking a stab at it, because he was writing a letter to Angeline- and a song felt like the right thing to put in there. So far, his letter read:

 

Angeline,
 
I’m the biggest idiot ever, now I know how I made you feel, and I just hope that Artemis treats you right, because you deserve it, I don’t know what I was thinking by ‘loving’ the other woman whos name i shall not mention, when you were tehre all along, waiting for me , i could’ve loved you. I know that I wasted my time on her, when you were there. And I’m not sure, but I think that’s how you feel about me too. I know it’s a ’lame’ me thing to do, but I wrote a song, because whenever I try to write something “deep” it comes out something like the above, undecipherable and stupid. So here you go. But the song’s really bad. So to put it blunt - I’m sorry, and I hope it works with you and Artemis.
 
 

I can feel it sinking in now

At the bottom of my gut im dead

It’s how I killed myself without moving

I’d give up everything just to go back

But i’ve depived myself of that

You were screaming in my ear

I don’t know what was going through my head

And now I think there is no way of proving

That I want this now more than ever

But I’ve hurt you one too many times

I hope you make this hurt me more

I hope he treats you so much better

I hope you find your own neverland

A place where he can hold your hand

I hope he makes you believe

I hope you make me watch you leave

I hope you forget what you made me feel

Something that never will be real

I’m wishing that you’d woken me up

All those sweet nothings I wish I’d said

While I was chasing after what I dread

You had waited for so long

And now I realize why you’ve gone

I want to run away from here

Just as long as it makes you happy

And now you can fly away

And be the best you can be

Because now I can see, you’ll never be with me

I hope you make this hurt me more

I hope he treats you so much better

I hope you find your own neverland

A place where he can hold your hand

I hope he makes you believe

I hope you make me watch you leave

I hope you forget what you made me feel

Something that never will be real

I can’t work it out, I heard you shout

I could’ve turned around and forever been with you

But now I’m in a self made hell

And I can never escape this is my fate

I hope you make this hurt me more

I hope he treats you so much better

I hope you find your own neverland

A place where he can hold your hand

I hope he makes you believe

I hope you make me watch you leave

I hope you forget what you made me feel

Something that never will be real

I’m sorry

I’m sorry

I’m sorry

Goodbye

 

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14 Reviews for “A Wild Yet Flawless Orchestration Of Broken Hearts Handle-Bar Moustaches And Vagabond lice.”

  1. Unappreciated genius Says:

    Please… read- you dont have to reveiw, or rate. But. Just read it.

  2. Unappreciated genius Says:

    Oh yeah, and with the song- you can make up the tune so that it fits to your liking. And sorry about the Neverland Reference… i know Butler would never put that in there, But as i mentioned before- i didnt write the song.

  3. lbutler Says:

    i like it you did something origanal with some thing people have used before as far as i know no one has ever made butler write a song and it still says something about the way you wrtie . i like it !

  4. ARTY'SELFFRIEND Says:

    I used the I Saw Three Ships song! It’s a catchy Holiday tune! eggggsaaaalanttt!

  5. Star Jinin Says:

    …OO
    * *
    ___

    Artemis would kill Butler for that… oh wait, he can’t! XD. Seriously though. It seems reallly…unusual…

  6. Unappreciated genius Says:

    Star Jinin,

    Its meant to be unusual. Thats how all my stories are, haha- if you hadnt noticed by now.

  7. lil.arty Says:

    unusal yes but i like it

  8. elfreda Says:

    poor butler……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………plz continu!

  9. Demon_Obsession Says:

    strange but good.
    Well, Butler would have some time trying to forget that.
    The tune I created is stuck in my noggin!
    somebody GET IT OUT!
    MERCY!!!!!!!!!!!

  10. Shanette Says:

    wait… Did you read that title before? It sounds horribly familiar. A wild yet flawless…. Oh My God, it really sounds familiar!

  11. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    Love it, I know its hard making up songs (I made up tons cuz I love to sing)

  12. Shanette Says:

    I loved to sing too! Singing’s really nice, LOL.

  13. computerzandbks4ever Says:

    its…creepy (no offense)

    butler’s too old for angeline!

    add in a comepletly new character for butler to luv!

  14. Minerva Paradizo Says:

    You should put this through a spell check… It’s really hard to read.
    I agree. It’s original!

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