A Tiny Problem…The long awaited Audition story!!!!!!

Written on February 2nd, 2008 by Holly314

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  • Status : Incomplete
  • Category: General and Action and Funny
  • Author: Holly314
  • Word Count: 963
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Chapter 2

“So,” Artemis said matter-of-factly.  “The strings’ motion was what caused global warming.”

She stared at him a moment, smirked mirthlessly, and then said, “A book is only good if you read it one page after the other.”  Artemis just glared at her.  “You’re jumping to conclusions, Arty.” He winced.  “The global warming was courtesy of your own good selves.  Friction does not exist in the strings’ dimension.  There is only motion.  If the strings stopped moving, they would disappear.” 

“By your seperation of humans from faeries I would guess you are not one of the former.  What species?  You are much to tall for an elf.”

“Witch.” she said flatly. 

“Suits you,” Artemis said with a sarcastic edge. 

She had learned to bear these types of insults, and didn’t even give him a look.  “You do know we’re being watched.”

“By what?  The manor’s security is of the highest grade.”

“Not all things are material..”  she stared blankly at the fire, her eyes shifting through many colors.  

“Speaking of material,” he said, snapping her out of her trance.  “If there is no friction in the strings’ world, why would we freeze?”

“We witches are made of fire and earth.  We do not like the cold.  In all the excitement, I switched to a local witch phrase.  To “freeze” is to cease existance.  Since we are made up of strings, and motion is their only way of existance, then when they stop, they disappear. I am putting this simply for your smaller human brain.  We witches, being linked with the earth, know much more about this than you ever could comprehend.  It is hard for us even to explain into words.  We don’t know what they are; we know how they are.  Big difference.”

“Promise me you’ll tell me someday.” he said.

“I hope your brain doesn’t explode.”  Just as she said that, a large brilliantly colored shape flew out of the fire and onto the rug; it looked almost…birdlike

YAY! Cliffhanger! R&R please! 

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17 Reviews for “A Tiny Problem…The long awaited Audition story!!!!!!”

  1. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    Very intresting.. please continue. I want to know more about this. Does charlotte noe artemis from before or something?

  2. lbutler Says:

    INTERSTING VERY BUT IT WAS TO SHORT! HEY GUESS WHATTHIS HAS NOTHING T DO WITH YOU STORY BUT MY BUBBA LIKES JELLY ! DO YOU THINK SHE LIKES HIM??? NO HE’S TO WEIRD! I HAVE TO ASK HER SOON! BUT FIRST IM GOING TO EMBARRASS HIM SOME MORE! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH HA

  3. Olive Says:

    Oh I love it! It must have required research and the work you did is appairent. Great job!

  4. lil.arty Says:

    yay u used my character. just the way i imagined her as well. hope the rest is just as fabulouse :P :P

  5. Holly314 Says:

    Well, I already knew about the string theory, and I applied it to my own needs. Realy the whole idea of the existance of strings is still very controversial, so it worked perfectly.

  6. Jelly Says:

    lol the fire has eyeballs!~ that was really good! (…) We will all freeze. She nodded Mutely (…)

  7. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    wow.. i thought u meade up the thring theory… ccool! ITS REAL!

  8. mayqueen17 Says:

    This is cool! And I thought the string theory was made up too! ^^ Update more! ^^

  9. Olive Says:

    I really like it, especially she knowing more then Artemis. Priceless humor!

  10. Jelly Says:

    ooooooh! I get it! its like the atoms are all moving around us and if they ever stop moving they die and if they move to fast they run out of energy and die quicker so everythings atoms r moving quick and will die soon!

  11. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    I LOVE THE SCIENCE IN THIS! , but it’s kind of… well she IS putting into ELEMTARY school terms for artemis, its really funny, saying that artemis wouldn’t “understand.” or that his brain couldn’t handle it.lol,, I LOVE THIS!

  12. lil.arty Says:

    absoulutly luvvvvvvv it…like the sientific parts in it as well

  13. mayqueen17 Says:

    Hee hee, Arty got outsmarted! The fire birdie is pretty! ^^

  14. Holly314 Says:

    I actually made up the witch term, because…well I inadvertently changed the string thing to no friction and then thought “no friction equals no heat! AAAAAAAAH!!!!!” So I thought that up in like two seconds. lol :P

  15. Jelly Says:

    COOL! r u going 2 update 2nite?

  16. lil.arty Says:

    is this gonna be continued??

  17. Minerva Paradizo Says:

    Not so sure I liked this one…

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