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Sparks

Summary: Yes, it’s still me. LEPreconGirl. I am changing to my fanfiction.net username. But it’s still me. 🙂 A child. That […]

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Yes, it’s still me. LEPreconGirl. I am changing to my fanfiction.net username. But it’s still me. 🙂

A child. That was what was in his arms. A baby. Artemis smiled at the tiny girl, who had fallen asleep in his arms. Just a man and his daughter. Bt she was more. He could tell by the way she sparkled when she scratched herself, or how her ears had a ever so slightly pointed appearance. His stolen magic had been passed to her. He noticed a drop of water on her forehead, and wiped it off. He was crying. He had a family, a somewhat normal family. Juliet squeezed his shoulder, watching him.
“Holly. We’ll name her Holly.” he gulped, nodding. The baby, Holly, was transferred back to her mother. Juliet held her watching Artemis cry. Holly had died years ago, saving he world in the process. Such a cliche, but true. And Artemis had never really gotten over it, heart torn. But something was changing. The little baby, with her sparks, was mending his heart. He looked at her.
“Thank you, Holly.” he whispered. For saving his life. For fixing his heart.

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  1. Aw i really like this. Its really cute. There are some typos but other than that. Really great.

    5/s

  2. FantasyDevourer August 1st, 2011 at 3:14 am 2

    Aww… I loved it!!! No mistakes I saw, and it was really sweet. When I saw ‘was transferred back to her mother’ I was confused but then I got it.

  3. <3Trouble<3(FowlsGirl123) August 2nd, 2011 at 3:32 am 3

    Aw, this is so cute!

    The only mistakes I saw were probably typos.
    Bt she was more; should be: But she was more.
    a ever so slightly; should be: an ever so slightly

    This was awesome! I loved it! Kinda short, but still. I also love how Juliet and Artemis are together. They’re just so perfect for each other, although a lot of people probably don’t agree. Amazing!

    I love your new name, by the way!

    5 shiny stars!

  4. Hermione Fowl August 2nd, 2011 at 8:06 am 4

    It was vair vair good, but when someone speaks you need a new paragraph. That way it look like you’ve done more, as well as making it easier to read. 😀
    And, maybe you could add to this. Wouldn’t it be so much cooler if it was Holly’s baby, instead of having Arty’s magic?? And Juliet just thought it was hers?? Just an idea, you don’t have too. 🙂

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