The Summer of Artemis
Written on May 30th, 2009 by ArtemisFowlfan96Story Details
(13 votes, average: 4.92 out of 5)
Loading ... I was on page 52. All of a sudden, I heard a sucking sound. It echoed in the empty library. I looked up in surprise. So did Rashelle. Our eyes locked.
“What’s that?” Her voice cracked with fear.
“I don’t know.” I was almost as scared as her.
That’s when a huge, swirling green vortex appeared.
“Ahhhhhh!!!” We both screamed like little girls.
Suddenly, I felt the sensation that you get when you’re to close to the vacuum cleaner. I was being sucked in!
“Starla! I’m being sucked in!” Came Rashelle’s voice, barely audible above the noise of the portal.
“I am too!” I yelled. We were able to hold on to each other’s hands before entering complete and total darkness.
May 30th, 2009 at 1:46 am
Read, rate, and review please!
May 30th, 2009 at 3:01 am
I like it!!! I fell over laughing at the part about the eggs. Update it!! It’s not right left unupdated!!!
May 30th, 2009 at 4:48 pm
hey can I make a story more or less like this? It’ll sorta be a combo of this and ‘Eoin Colfers little suprise’ So can I?
May 30th, 2009 at 5:38 pm
I changed my mind NVM!!!
May 31st, 2009 at 12:22 am
You spelled the name of butlers gun wrong. its Sig Sauer, butstill, the story is good. thats funny how you tried to fry eggs on the drive way! Overall, very good.Keep on going!!
May 31st, 2009 at 4:14 am
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June 1st, 2009 at 12:35 am
Lol! Ok, ok, ok. I’ll see if i get any ideas
Yoshi: Lol! Thnx. I’ll update!
Ally Kat: Ur funny. In case u do decide 2 write that story, u have my permission. I will update!
Alias: Oh, I didn’t know that. I’ll change that immediately. Thnx. I will update!
June 1st, 2009 at 3:08 am
COME ON AND UPDATE ALREADY!!!!!!!
June 2nd, 2009 at 1:25 am
Come ON! I’ve read this a zillion and two times and STILL NO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!
June 3rd, 2009 at 5:06 am
I am working on the update right now-don’t worry!
June 3rd, 2009 at 5:41 am
YES IT’S ABOUT TIME! (sorry if I sound pushy)
June 3rd, 2009 at 6:06 am
It’s done!
June 3rd, 2009 at 6:35 am
LOL CHAPPY SIX!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
I know you just did but it’s sooooooooo good!
June 4th, 2009 at 12:40 am
Lol. Thnx. I will, but not now. I have to perform with my Young Women group at a retirement home.
June 4th, 2009 at 6:25 am
Chapter 7 is up. Enjoy!
June 4th, 2009 at 7:13 am
LOL!
June 6th, 2009 at 2:41 am
lol!i need to talk to you.i,m registerd on chat forum
June 6th, 2009 at 2:54 am
i love animorphs
June 6th, 2009 at 4:33 am
Lol. Thnx, guys! I have updated and now chapter 8 is up!!!
June 6th, 2009 at 4:43 am
chap 8 is awsome!update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
June 6th, 2009 at 5:13 am
Thnx. I can’t wait to talk to Artemis…
June 6th, 2009 at 6:26 am
This is gonna be kool… Hey I got a random idea, more portals start popping up everywhere in out universe and take some of from fan fiction along for your ride! You don’t have to use this idea, you don’t even have to acknowledge this comment! Just a random(stupid)idea fueled off of too much sugar!!!!!!
SUGAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *had random spaz moment* Oh and if you take this idea, I am Allison E. Kat. And you know what I like to be called(Ally or Ally Kat if you don’t) *has many more random spaz comment* LUV D UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
June 6th, 2009 at 7:21 am
update
June 8th, 2009 at 3:23 pm
Can’t wait for the next update!!!!
June 9th, 2009 at 4:58 am
I enjoyed it, actually. I myself thought of this idea, but it appears I have been beated to it. I must say, however, you are doing a splendid job with this Very good, overall. If I could give constructive crit, I would, but I cannot find anything in particular wrong with it. Write on, as this is a wonderful story thus far, and I hope that it gets even better, for I shall be reading it as it is updated.
June 9th, 2009 at 5:31 am
Father- Awww! thnx Father! That was a really well written review- wait. Has Artemis Fowl II gotten a hold of your password??? Lol jk.
AK- That’s a very good idea! I think I’ll use it in a different fanfic, if you don’t wanna use it. And I’ll probably have a new update… tomorrow?
Artybran- Okay. Tomorrow, mabey.
June 9th, 2009 at 5:34 am
Sweet on da update! And sure u can use da idea. It was fules off a sugar rush so I couldn’t think at the time and I’ve been getting sugar rushes a lot. So I couldn’t even write it if a wanted to!!! LOL!
June 9th, 2009 at 11:05 am
SOO GOOD!! CHAPTER & WAS MY FAV.!!!1
It was funny! UPD8 SOON!
June 11th, 2009 at 7:07 pm
OMG when will you update again??? AND, when will you make that new story?!?!?!?!?! I CAN’T WAIT!!!!!! (insert crazy please make the new story and update this one scream here)
June 13th, 2009 at 10:34 am
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June 14th, 2009 at 10:05 pm
Sorry! I have had a lot going on this week. I promise that I’ll have at least one more chapter done by either today or tomorrow but then I’m going camping and won’t be back until Saturday.
June 14th, 2009 at 11:38 pm
Can’t wait!
June 16th, 2009 at 6:11 am
Nice low steam cliffy. Can’t wait for the next update! JK I can wait. I won’t threat you with death threats, or death threats to kill Arty unless you update… this time. *smiles evily*
June 19th, 2009 at 8:11 pm
(Please, if Artemis Fowl had somehow outsmarted me and gotten into my account, he would have to be real. And, unfortunately, he is not yet real. Or is he?)
I found that last chapter rather good, I suppose. However, I must say it was rather short, and left me ‘hanging’ as some would say. I found that Artemis seemed a little bit out of character; however, as Artemis Fowl is such a unique and hard to grasp character, it is nearly impossible to get him perfectly in character. Please continue with your story, so I may read what is next.
June 21st, 2009 at 1:09 am
Lol!
AK- I am back and will update soon.
Father- Lol! Umm… ok… thanks? Are you sure you aren’t Artemis Fowl II? If not, what has happened to you???!!!
June 21st, 2009 at 2:03 am
I can’t wait for chappy ten!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well I can, but whats the fun in just waiting? *grabs seashell sword* Update or say hello to my little friend! *swings seashell sword menichingly*
June 21st, 2009 at 3:18 am
Ok… Scary… I’ll get writing soon, but It probably won’t be till July till I really get a lot of time for updates.
June 21st, 2009 at 3:23 am
That’s fine. Just update soon! Or else… *takes out Sig Sauer* MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!(dang this thing is heavy!)
June 21st, 2009 at 5:54 am
Update, or else I might just have to kill you, and Artemis.
June 22nd, 2009 at 3:31 am
ok… You’re blunt, Kag… Lol. Glad you guys like it! I’ll get on it soon.
June 22nd, 2009 at 4:12 am
I know she’s very blunt. I’m much more detailed in my death threats. PLEASE UPDATE BEFORE YOU HAVE TO GET OFF THE COMPUTER OR ELSE I’LL MURDER YOU ON CHRISTMAS EVE WITH ARTY! How’s that for a Christmas present? JK! I could never go through with that. Well i could, but only with Kagome or Opal or someone like that. coughtjonspirocough. But seriously, UPDATE!!!!
June 22nd, 2009 at 5:33 am
Okay, I’ve updated. Sorry It’s so short. I wasn’t planning on stopping there, but I had to go do the dishes, and I’ve got to go back now because I am only taking a break. Bye!
June 24th, 2009 at 5:34 am
Update. Or I’ll kill you. I have the weapons. I have the tourture devises. I have Arty. And I know how to hide bodies. I suggest you update.
June 24th, 2009 at 5:35 am
xD Sorry! I needed to get out supressed emotions and acidently put up that coment! SORRY!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE! I’D NEVER KILL YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
June 25th, 2009 at 6:25 am
Ok.. thanks…? lol i’ll update soon
June 26th, 2009 at 8:04 pm
UPDATE!! this is amazing! you can use my name. it’s Faith.
June 27th, 2009 at 11:13 pm
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!
June 30th, 2009 at 5:16 am
UPDATE OR I SWEAR YOU’LL WAKE UP TIED TO A CHAIR WITH OPAL HOLDING A BUZZ BATON IN YOUR FACE IN A WEEK OR LESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
July 7th, 2009 at 1:26 am
PLZ UPD8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
July 7th, 2009 at 1:40 am
Ok lol sorry. I have tried to write an update twice before, but the first time, we had a power shortage, and the second time, the website crashed! I’ve had terrible luck! I am writing the update right now and it should be out within the half hour!
July 7th, 2009 at 1:50 am
THANK YOU!
July 7th, 2009 at 2:04 am
It’s updated, and I am now working on It’s Okay, Holly!
July 7th, 2009 at 2:10 am
THANK YOU! FOR THE LOVE FOALY THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
July 7th, 2009 at 2:19 am
Lol! Thank you…? lol
July 7th, 2009 at 1:47 pm
UHHHH LIKE CONTINUE!!!!! SOOOOOOOO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!
July 12th, 2009 at 11:53 pm
Thanks, iwuvarty. I will continue this as soon as I update on ‘It’s Okay, Holly!’
July 13th, 2009 at 6:00 am
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!!! (yes I’m better, more or less. Distraction tactic doing well so far)
July 14th, 2009 at 9:28 pm
YEY!!! u r continuing!
July 22nd, 2009 at 5:37 am
lol
yeah yay… i’ll continue soon
July 27th, 2009 at 7:22 am
I luv da update! LOL Butler carried Artemis back up to his room, and he fell asleep in the car! Very un-Artemis like, but that’s why I loved it! besides, if Artemis was tired anough that would happen… Please put up chapter 13(AAAAH!!! UNLUCKY!)soon!
August 3rd, 2009 at 5:12 pm
YEY
Luv the new chapter!
August 11th, 2009 at 7:46 pm
lol thnx I will be updating very soon, and yes, chapter 13 is where the bad luck starts… lol!!!
August 11th, 2009 at 8:30 pm
wow nice story
August 11th, 2009 at 9:02 pm
update please
March 20th, 2010 at 3:58 am
AMAZING I can not belive this
you created….I….I’m …speachless
UPDATE PLEASE: PLEASE UPDATE: UPDATE PLEASE:PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!
March 20th, 2010 at 4:31 am
Oh one more thing,
Are you from Utah because that is my FAVORITE state EVER it has every thing
SNOW
mountains
and 95% of my family
AMAZING STORY
April 3rd, 2010 at 9:52 pm
Lol, yes, I’m from Utah. There hasn’t been much snow here this year, though. It’s weird. Thanks for the reviews, bookygirl1996!
And thanks, rashelle!
April 10th, 2010 at 12:43 am
love it