15 Years
Written on November 3rd, 2009 by crazy chickStory Details
- Category: General
- Author: crazy chick
- Word Count: 66
- Read 293 times
(10 votes, average: 4.6 out of 5)
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It had been almost fifteen years since he’d seen her. Fifteen years of wanting, searching. Fifteen years of emptiness. He would have gone to the ends of the Earth for her. But she’d betrayed him. She’d led him on, her and her little friend. They were liars. Both of them. But that changed nothing. He would still search. He would never stop looking.
Never.
November 3rd, 2009 at 2:31 am
*wipes tear* CC, I am so proud. I somehow feel as if I helped this. The only thing is, one “a” missing in one word. “screamed”, not “scremed”. Buit this was brilliant otherwise. Amazing, beautiful and original. I absolutely love. Update?
November 3rd, 2009 at 2:35 am
Of course.Update on the way. You are my most trusted advisor, TWS: If you say it’s good, it must be. And if you’ll look, nothing says “scremed” any more….
best e-buddies?
November 3rd, 2009 at 2:36 am
What TWS said! Keep it going cc!
November 3rd, 2009 at 2:44 am
thank u, thank u! and diddo 4 ur new conscience story… i love it. write a 2nd 1, please!
November 3rd, 2009 at 2:46 am
Yes keep it coming. This is your best work yet I think.
November 3rd, 2009 at 2:48 am
DEFINATELY best work yet
That’s meh e-buddy.
November 3rd, 2009 at 2:49 am
thank you! and not 2 brag, but i agree. it is the best work ive done. but that doesnt always mean “great…”
November 3rd, 2009 at 5:48 am
Like careybunny said.Is it Holly and Artemis?Please tell me!!!
November 3rd, 2009 at 10:16 am
That was great, Crazy Chick! I loved it!
P.S. Am I your E-buddy?? Lol JK JK -.-”
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(0.0) But I bet Bunny’s your e-buddy right? riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight?
November 3rd, 2009 at 3:21 pm
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Bunny have cutesy paws
November 3rd, 2009 at 10:24 pm
Update! This is so confusing right now!!!
November 3rd, 2009 at 10:26 pm
Sea Blue, best e-buddies. always. And no, I WILL NOT SAY IF EET IS ARTY AND HOLLY!!! you may not find out until the end…
November 8th, 2009 at 12:19 am
If you love me, you’ll update . . .
November 10th, 2009 at 1:21 am
Kay then… I updated. And no|body|has|read|it!!!
November 14th, 2009 at 9:19 am
interest spreads across my mind.
November 15th, 2009 at 2:38 am
wow. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
November 15th, 2009 at 6:26 pm
I absolutely love it!!! It’s absolutely beautiful in a chilling way
I love the imagery, too. The description is amazing.
One thing I don’t get, though, is who are Brennan and Alex?
November 18th, 2009 at 2:08 am
TWS… Guess who.
November 22nd, 2009 at 8:38 pm
Brennan is me TWS !!!
November 24th, 2009 at 9:29 pm
TWS, do u realize how many loose ends this thing has?
November 25th, 2009 at 2:53 am
@->–
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I like the story cc
November 25th, 2009 at 3:14 am
Too many loose ends?
Update?
January 24th, 2010 at 10:25 pm
I am so *slap* stinkin’ ashamed *slap* of *slap* myself for not *slap* commenting on my *slap* Best friend’s *slap* story!!!!
CC, it was absolutely thrilling, brilliant, wonderful, extravagant, and overall beautifully written! It’s definitely your best.
Five stars.
January 24th, 2010 at 10:51 pm
update chant!!! update…update…update!!
January 24th, 2010 at 10:53 pm
Update! Update! Update! Update or I’ll blow up your desk tomorrow at school and…. stab your Pre-Algebra textbook with a knife! (Oh, wait… you’d want that, wouldn’t you?)
February 17th, 2010 at 6:16 am
did part of the story get erased? wats goin on?
March 9th, 2010 at 10:42 pm
I updated it!
March 20th, 2010 at 2:44 am
Has it changed? Other then the update? Because my last comment was ‘Is it Holly and Artemis.’ I don’t get that.
March 20th, 2010 at 2:47 am
Well. I rewrote the whole thing and gave it a dif plot. There’s more than 1 chappie.
Its got new characters, too. 
THe whole reason the update announcement’s there is so someone’ll tell me to continue or revert to old ways. 
~CC
March 21st, 2010 at 12:08 am
I LOVE THE UPDATE! Thank you for it. Really. *hugs* I can’t way to see what happens next.
March 21st, 2010 at 3:32 pm
So… me should continue??!!!??!!!???!!!??!?!?
April 11th, 2010 at 6:32 pm
i don’t know. the old one had a mysterious air to it that i liked. But if you continue this I will most defiantly not complain.
July 29th, 2010 at 2:05 am
“Update, says the little voice in the background, Update!”
-Star
July 29th, 2010 at 2:15 am
:) I shall, then.
Soon-ish! XD
July 29th, 2010 at 3:23 pm
“Okay, you rock, says the little voice in the background.” XD.
July 29th, 2010 at 6:29 pm
XP So do you, wittle voice in the background.