Dimension Bomb
Written on December 31st, 2007 by mahi101 AF FanStory Details
- Category: General
- Author: mahi101 AF Fan
- Word Count: 2118
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(5 votes, average: 4 out of 5)
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” Okay , so first of all where is the bomb?” Artemis said taking everything carefully , he had a plan , it defiitly wasn’t great , there were many flaws , but he had no time to think , and couldn’t think becasue they were a thousand feet up in the air.
Ellen said , ” Okay , it’s in the lower section of the plane , at the base.”
Artemis eyed her suspiciously , she seemed to know a lot of things ” Why there?
” That’s the place that can let the bomb reach through-out the plane , because this is a large plane of-course and newly built , if that bomb was put by some maniac that would pay two guys 20 million to kill Estrager, this person knows that exploding the WHOLE plane would be best so there is no chance of survival , instead of exploding just part of it and letting the rest fall. So the only place that can be accomplished from is the lower section midpiont base. ” Ellen said.
Artemis was stunned. ” Yet , she still has a good reason for knowing all these things.”
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December 31st, 2007 at 9:41 pm
hi , i hope you like it , but just tell me if I should continue or not , I wrote this in ten minutes… and its not great so I think not but w/e,tell me what yuou think.
December 31st, 2007 at 10:49 pm
you should definitlly continue!!! it’s great! i love plane stories, so my answer is yes. please post an update announcement if and hopefully do update.
January 1st, 2008 at 12:19 am
oh plz continue! i luv the whole thing
January 1st, 2008 at 1:01 am
thanx!
i am very happy and WILL continue now!
January 1st, 2008 at 1:05 am
happy new year!!
January 1st, 2008 at 1:19 am
its not new year here.. yet… in 5 housr it will be .. its only 7:18 PM decemeber 31 , Monday rite now.
January 1st, 2008 at 1:20 am
7:19 now
January 1st, 2008 at 2:35 am
YOU SHOULD CONTINUE I LIKES DA SOUND OF IT AND ITS ONLY DA 1ST CHAPTER.
January 1st, 2008 at 3:15 am
thanx
January 1st, 2008 at 3:16 am
i have the perfect idea of how to continue this! and there will be action , don’t worry to the action lovers out there.
January 1st, 2008 at 3:18 am
but i do want a few more commentors b4 i continue!
January 1st, 2008 at 4:03 am
ISN’T ANYONE ON?
January 1st, 2008 at 5:02 am
Awesome! This story is definitely going somewhere.
January 1st, 2008 at 4:03 pm
and yes holly will be here in the 4rth or 5th chapter.
January 2nd, 2008 at 2:56 am
awesome story. only a few grammer mistakes but other then that, amazing.
January 2nd, 2008 at 2:59 am
thanx, can u piont out the grammer mistakes? i woof like to fix them.. oh , if its the tatoo guy who has the gramer mistakes then he is SUPPOSE to gave grammer mistakes.
January 12th, 2008 at 11:34 pm
It’s nice. You always write awesome stories! Especially the one with Hanna and Merellda, and Icecrystalice. Remember?
January 12th, 2008 at 11:58 pm
Oh. Lol.=]
January 13th, 2008 at 12:19 am
yeah… i didnt give u the update on it did u?when they all go to school in the the place where their father is?
January 13th, 2008 at 12:20 am
No, gotta update.:P
January 13th, 2008 at 12:31 am
I am sorry I am not really into love stories. Maybe u should call it On the Plane ride home….
January 13th, 2008 at 12:38 am
nope.. ganna call it ” the bomb ” which btw- sends u 2 different dimensions……. ull like it , its action … well IM GETTING TO IT. lol.
January 13th, 2008 at 12:39 am
Lol. Cool.
January 13th, 2008 at 2:21 am
plz no more spam comments.
January 19th, 2008 at 1:39 am
I delete spam comments.
January 19th, 2008 at 1:39 am
sometimes………….( im lazy)
January 30th, 2008 at 2:24 am
Ellen’s Estranger, ISN’T SHE!?!?!?
January 30th, 2008 at 3:06 am
HUH……wow… smart….. yup.. you’re right …..
January 30th, 2008 at 3:07 am
That is her FULL name… Ellen Estrager, Estrager is her last name.
February 20th, 2008 at 3:57 am
Heh heh…it was SO obvious! The way those people mentioned Estranger and the way Ellen was acting… also, for the grammar and spelling mistakes, ask MMK if she would spell-check it for you. She’s nice enough to do that.
February 22nd, 2008 at 4:09 am
Yeah.. I was trying to make it obvious but I didnt think anyone would get it, Lol, YAY YOU ARE THE FIRST ONE TO GET IT WOOH!anyway, I’m ganna continue this soon.