Dimension Bomb

Written on December 31st, 2007 by mahi101 AF Fan

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  • Author: mahi101 AF Fan
  • Word Count: 2118
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Well I got this idea from a story , about a plane. I don’t know which story but I am greatful for the person about writting  it , I think It was artemis having to sit next to some insane person on a plane. lol , any way on with my story , with the only thing similar will be the plane nothing else.. I think….

” Mother , why is it that we have to take a plane to America , why not a privet Jet or so?” Artemis asked , Artemis was 15 years old and much kinder now, yet still in puberty.

” Artemis , before I became a criminal , I stayed in a counrty house durring the summer in America. I had a friend there, he was very kind , and my best frind , I would like to visit him , but I don’t want to hurt his feelings or anything , because he is not as rich as us, he already knows we’re rich but we don’t have to rub it in his face by bringing a private jet. And anyway , we are still going first class. Don’t worry about it Artemis.” His father said.

 Artemis was still not happy , but didn’t argue.

When they enterred the plane it was set up like this , there were two sets of seats on the left handside and the right handside and the middle had three seats. His mom and dad sat on the left handside, Butler Myles and Beckett sat in the middle , and Artemis sat alone in the righthandside, there was an empty seat beside him , the window seat.

  Well , there really wasn’t much to do, just sit and wait for the plane to start. It didn’t look like anyone would be sitting in the seat next to him, Artemis sat back , peace and quiet, he hadn’t experianced that for some time now!

  A girl about Artemis’s age rampaged to the seat next to him , she was wearing a maroon tanktop and a dark brown mini skirt with maroon leggings, and soft brown boots with heals.It looked perfect with her fair complexion and clear skin with  dark black hair taht was 2 inches below her shoulder , it was cut in steps and was strait, long maroon fingernales and light maroon lipstick , with beautiful pinkish earings that looked like pinkish pretty earings with a diamond ringdiamond ring  ,  she didn’t seem to notice him and she looked really angry,

” Yes I am ANGRY! Furious , dist–” She was speaking into a cellphone in her hand “YES! He is making me come home because some stupid friends of his are comming! Well Why should I care? Yes! he cut my vacation time off , No! Not even! I bet he doesn’t care! Well , I’m not that mad anymore anyway .. yeah whatever………sure.”

She closed the cellphone and she sighed, she didn’t look that angry anymore , then she turned her head and saw Artemis starring at her like she was crazy.  Her expression softened and Artemis kept loooking at her ,

 ” Oh my god , I am sooooo sorry , you probably think I am crazy or something, I really am sorry , I was just really angry.. I am soo sorry…” The girl went on , Now Artemis noticed how Beautiful she was and she looked way better when she wasn’t on a rampage or so, he blushed but she didn’t seem to notice

 ” No , It’s quite alright, ” Artemis said  and the girl blushed, 

” So , Umm…. What is your name? ” The girl asked,  Artemis felt uneasy , he didn’t want to give his name away, Butler told him never to do that , anyone could be a spy. The girl seemed to sense his discomfort,

” Never mind , my name is Ellen, nice to meet you. ” She said reaching out her hand and Artemis shook it , Suddenly the plane started , ” Oh no….” Ellen said , and she clucthed the seat , she already had a seat belt on ,

” Oh god , please , oh no,…a” Ellen said with her eyes closed.

“What happened are you scared? ” Artemis asked ,
“Well , yeah …. I have never ridden a public plane before actully and it’s kind of scary so I .. ” She started but then the plane started , and she almost screamed, but Artemis didn’t want to start a comostion and he put his hand over her mouth.she grabbed his other hand and held on tightly, and she let go  when they were up and were flying , her face had dried tears on it and she looked misrable ..

“Oh , god , I am sorry , It’s just that I really got scared…….. ” She said… she pulled out some lotion and rubbed it on her face ,

” Uh , yes , it’s okay. ” Artemis said …. Artemis blushed remembering the momment when she took hold of his hand….

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31 Reviews for “Dimension Bomb”

  1. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    hi , i hope you like it , but just tell me if I should continue or not , I wrote this in ten minutes… and its not great so I think not but w/e,tell me what yuou think.

  2. Olive Says:

    you should definitlly continue!!! it’s great! i love plane stories, so my answer is yes. please post an update announcement if and hopefully do update.

  3. lil.arty Says:

    oh plz continue! i luv the whole thing :P

  4. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    thanx! :) i am very happy and WILL continue now!

  5. lil.arty Says:

    happy new year!!

  6. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    its not new year here.. yet… in 5 housr it will be .. its only 7:18 PM decemeber 31 , Monday rite now.

  7. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    7:19 now

  8. kiZza_dats_me Says:

    YOU SHOULD CONTINUE I LIKES DA SOUND OF IT AND ITS ONLY DA 1ST CHAPTER.

  9. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    thanx

  10. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    i have the perfect idea of how to continue this! and there will be action , don’t worry to the action lovers out there.

  11. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    but i do want a few more commentors b4 i continue!

  12. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    ISN’T ANYONE ON?

  13. 017350 Says:

    Awesome! This story is definitely going somewhere. :)

  14. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    and yes holly will be here in the 4rth or 5th chapter.

  15. Olive Says:

    awesome story. only a few grammer mistakes but other then that, amazing.

  16. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    thanx, can u piont out the grammer mistakes? i woof like to fix them.. oh , if its the tatoo guy who has the gramer mistakes then he is SUPPOSE to gave grammer mistakes.

  17. _Ariel_ Says:

    It’s nice. You always write awesome stories! Especially the one with Hanna and Merellda, and Icecrystalice. Remember?

  18. _Ariel_ Says:

    Oh. Lol.=]

  19. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    yeah… i didnt give u the update on it did u?when they all go to school in the the place where their father is?

  20. _Ariel_ Says:

    No, gotta update.:P

  21. Jelly Says:

    I am sorry I am not really into love stories. Maybe u should call it On the Plane ride home….

  22. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    nope.. ganna call it ” the bomb ” which btw- sends u 2 different dimensions……. ull like it , its action … well IM GETTING TO IT. lol.

  23. _Ariel_ Says:

    Lol. Cool.

  24. Jelly Says:

    plz no more spam comments.

  25. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    I delete spam comments.

  26. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    sometimes………….( im lazy)

  27. Star Jinin Says:

    Ellen’s Estranger, ISN’T SHE!?!?!?

  28. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    HUH……wow… smart….. yup.. you’re right …..

  29. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    That is her FULL name… Ellen Estrager, Estrager is her last name.

  30. Star Jinin Says:

    Heh heh…it was SO obvious! The way those people mentioned Estranger and the way Ellen was acting… also, for the grammar and spelling mistakes, ask MMK if she would spell-check it for you. She’s nice enough to do that. :P

  31. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    Yeah.. I was trying to make it obvious but I didnt think anyone would get it, Lol, YAY YOU ARE THE FIRST ONE TO GET IT WOOH!anyway, I’m ganna continue this soon.

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