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The Weekend

Summary: Half the village is talking about me. 'My hairs bright red and I've got a temper to match' I don't have a temper! Well not really...

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18

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Holly’s P.O.V.

Oh Frond. I can’t believe I did that. Artemis is here, though, so I have no time to mope.

“Polly!” comes a voice, as the door is thrown open. “Polly, I missed you.”

In the movies they say ‘I missed you too’, and kiss, and it’s all boring and romantic. But I say “Shoot. Your here.”

“You’ve been crying!” Artemis cries triumphantly. “I can tell.”

“Congrats. Now go away.”

“Woman are so much nicer in movies. Particularly Princess’.”

“Well, I’m not a Princess. And if you say ‘yet’ I will punch you.”

He sits beside me. “Violence is not the answer, Polly.”

“Ugh. Do you annoy me like that on purpose?”

“Yes. I think it’s romantic teasing.”

“Romantic! I am going to punch you, and you think it’s romantic?!”

“Yes.”

I bury my face in my pillow. I don’t regret cheating on him now, he deserved it. Even though it was his brother. And the wrong brother.

“You know I can still see you.”

“Yep, but I can’t see you.”

“Did you know your naked?”

“Well, you shouldn’t be here, so it shouldn’t matter.”

“You’re very pretty naked.”

I huddle under the blankets. What a perv. He shouldn’t be looking, he should be hiding his eyes.

“Polly, why are you naked?”

“That’s how I sleep,” I lie.

“Oh. I can’t wait until we can share a bed.”

I glare at him. “We won’t share a bed. Ever.”

“Oh. What a boring honeymoon we’ll have.”

That caught my interest. “Honeymoon? Where?”

“It’s a surprise.”

“You realise this is possibly the only nice thing I’ve said to since we’ve met, and you won’t take the opportunity to start a conversation.”

“Oh. Oops. OK, pretend I never said that. Ask again. Start over.”

I roll my eyes. He’s so immature.

“Fine. Where are we having our honeymoon?”

“That’s not what you said.”

“Ugh! For Frond’s sake, tell me!”

“You have anger management issues.”

“No. You’re just really annoying.”

“That was rude. You should apologise. And then go to councelling.”

I hide back under the blankets. If I refuse to speak to him he might give up.

Or fairies might be real.

“Why do you do that?”

No answer.

“Polly, why do you do that?” he repeated. “You always hide when I’m speaking to you.”

“That’s cause you always say dumb things.”

“Oh. I’m sorry. I thought I was being nice.”

“Nice! How is calling me Polly and forcing me to marry you nice?!”

“Oh. I thought-”

“I don’t care what you think. Go. Away.”

He’s silent, for once. Sure, he’s annoying, but I do feel sort of bad. Particularly when I pull my head out from under the blankets and see tears streaming down his cheeks. Brilliant. That’s the second guy that’s cried because of me. The second Prince.

“Oh! Don’t cry! I’m sorry!”

“I thought you liked me,” he whispered. “You kissed me. I remember.”

Oops. “Yeah. I just. . .”

He looked up at me through his long, dripping eyelashes. “You were pretending for the camera.”

“Yeah.” Why did I admit it? That was really dumb.

“Oh. I’m going to leave.”

“Don’t! Stay!” And that was even dumber.

“Why are you being nice? You don’t like me.”

And, true to his word, he gets up and leaves, still crying like a little kid.

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18

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  1. ArtemisfianceNo1 November 10th, 2010 at 5:28 am 1

    ermm, a bit to short for me to properly comment, so when you make it a bit longer, tell us, and ill give you a proper comment 🙂 🙂 🙂 :mrgreen:

  2. Yeah, VERY short. But awesome. And there is no OOCness, Holly was as close to perfect as possible. 🙂 UPDATE OR FEAR MY WRATH!!!!

  3. Liked the first chapter! ;P
    The second chapter shows that holly is a bit different from the books-more temper;P- but it is still good!!!
    Wish you luck with your writing, and hopefully, you’ll end up with more FINISHED stories than I have. Which would currently be one.

    The_Right_Girl
    “What do we want?”
    “World Domination!”
    “When do we want it?”
    “Now!”

  4. Well. Short. It must be LONGAH!

  5. erm…short, too short to comment.

    I thought Holly was a little OOC but other than that, no OOCness as far as I know.

    I actually think your writing style is really good so just write more like that and we’ll be flying 😀

    And I’ll give you grape juice for the update (a reasonably long one)

  6. Hahahahahhaha!!! No other comment, too short.

  7. Good, short. I like.

  8. it isn’t finished yet so stop calling it short I am in the middle of updating all my stories… well kind of so i’ll update as soon as possible don’t kill me if it takes until tommorow i’m doing my best 🙂

  9. We shan’t kill you, we just… erm, nag you with pitch forks? 🙂 update?

  10. Beckett Simpleton November 14th, 2010 at 9:30 pm 10

    Hmmm. Update? Short CHAPTERS (see, I didn’t say how it was just SHORT) this could be FUNNEH if it turns out good 🙂

  11. Good way to begin – I like the twist on the setting, if you know what I mean (the castle/village idea). Holly was hilarious. Yes indeed, update!

  12. Interesting…please update soon! Maybe you can combine Chap 1 and 2? It’ll be longer, and you won’t be nagged so much! 🙂

  13. Interesting…please update soon! Maybe you can combine Chap 1 and 2? It’ll be longer, and you won’t be nagged so much! 🙂 Overall, very interesting. I want to see where this is going!

  14. Abandoned story #29249. Please stand in line and take a ticket.

    COME ON!!! WHY DOES EVERYONE WRITE A LITTLE BLURB, POST, THEN STOP WRITING?! So many ideas put to waste… I need an update NOW!

    It’s very interesting and very sarcastic, which I like. That “reached the sky”

    And chapter two was hilarious.

  15. thankyou my public, I am pleased with my comments. I will update now and post ASAP. your number 1 story writer and the most awesomest person in the world ( lets not forget modest!!!!) ABRACADABRA has left the building.

  16. My public? Seriously?
    Baby should be changed to Daughter. Yes, I’ve already read it, but I just noticed that now. There’s a big-ish gap after the letter, which must die NOW.
    Other then that, very good. 🙂
    16th comment dance!!
    UPDATE OR FEAR MY WRATH!!!!!

  17. Stereotypical perhaps, but well done. Great update. Good grammer etc. I like Holly’s sarcastic nature. Pleez update!

  18. Your wish is my command. I have updated!!!

  19. That was really good!!. and funny.
    i give it 5 stars!! 🙂

  20. Wow, someone with a sense of humor. We haven’t had one of those in ages; let’s see, was it 19 years? XD

    Anyway, loved it! The chapters are really short, and yes, OOC. I think you’re rushing it a bit, though. Might I suggest that you slow things down? I didn’t imagine a Beckett/Holly fic. Hmm. Should be interesting; if you get to that part (which means UPDATE!).

  21. “I will punch you into next week.”
    “Good, we get married then.”

    *giggle* *snicker* *snort* HILARIOUS!!!!!!! UPDATE! NO FRIGGIN MISTAKES! I AM IN A REALLY GOOD MOOD! I PRESSED CAPS LOCK BY ACCIDENT. I AM SO STUPID. UPDATE.

  22. Thankyou for those kind words of wisdom. Just updated and am updating again!! Love ME!!!!!!! 😛

  23. wow you updated a lot!!!!! I’m only on Chapter 6 I can’t read that fast. but so far it was really good!!. thank you for dedicating that chapter to me 🙂

  24. This was good. can you post a warning on chapter 11. i read these fan fics out loud to my little sis and i had to skip the whole chapter. besides that IT WAS AWESOME!!!!!! 🙂

  25. When are u gonna Update???????

  26. Hahahah! Beautiful! Magnificent! Artemis seems to be acting a bit like Orion now. 😀 And you have Holly almost perfectly. Great job! 😀

  27. Fowlfan4ever July 9th, 2011 at 4:15 pm 27

    Please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  28. Did you like my update? It was awesome. Iknow:)
    I will update more later.

    ABRA OUT!!!! 🙂

  29. Wow that was amazing. I loved it every time holly and artemis would fight. Am I wiered cus I kinda liked chapter 11 ?!?

  30. Are you going to get Holly and Artemis back together or not. Update!!!!!!!!!!!

  31. Thanks guys. 🙂 No, Amber, you’re not weird, I liked it too.
    Eragon-I can’t tell you that!!! That’d totally ruin the WHOLE STORY. If you keep reading the updates you’ll find out. 🙂

  32. You updated thats good. I didn’t notice any mistakes and this is very good. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  33. OMG!!! THis is amazing!! I only saw a few spelling mistakes but other than that one of the best Fan FIcs I have EVER read!!! Please update soon.

  34. Hi, Abra here, on my co-writer’s account.
    Thanks!!! 🙂 Will update ASAP. 😀

  35. *whistles* that’s AMAZING!!! I love it! Are you going to write more or did you forget to change the ‘finished’ thing?

  36. Arto_Fowlo May 9th, 2012 at 8:52 am 36

    More is coming, don’t worry. 🙂 Glad you liked it.

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