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The Weekend

Summary: Half the village is talking about me. 'My hairs bright red and I've got a temper to match' I don't have a temper! Well not really...

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18

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Holly’s P.O.V.

I turn up at the Manor that Saturday with hundreds of other ladies, all dressed up in their finery. I look pathetic compared to them-scruffy, untidy, no make-up. Certainly no good for a Prince.

At the door I’m given a ticket-No.374. I’m guessing that’s when I get my dance with Prince Artemis. Number 8 has just been called out, so I’m in for a long wait.

I have a total of zero dances in the 3 hour wait. Lots of drinks, though, hoping it will stop me being bored to death. Number 373 is called-I’m next.

Yeah, my number’s called, what joy. I so don’t want to be here.

“Name?”

“Ooo, polite. I’m Holly. What’s your name?” Like I didn’t know.

He doesn’t get mad, to my disappointment. “Prince Artemis.”

He extends his hand, ready to dance, but I refuse. “No thanks. I don’t dance.”

Artemis laughs. “I like you, Polly. You’re very independent. You can be my wife.”

What?! “No, thanks.”

But he’s already speaking to the crowd. “This is my wife, Polly. . .” He whispers to me, “What’s your name?”

I consider lying, but decide not to bother. “Holly Short.”

“Polly Short!” he announces.

Idiot.

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18

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  1. ArtemisfianceNo1 November 10th, 2010 at 5:28 am 1

    ermm, a bit to short for me to properly comment, so when you make it a bit longer, tell us, and ill give you a proper comment 🙂 🙂 🙂 :mrgreen:

  2. Yeah, VERY short. But awesome. And there is no OOCness, Holly was as close to perfect as possible. 🙂 UPDATE OR FEAR MY WRATH!!!!

  3. Liked the first chapter! ;P
    The second chapter shows that holly is a bit different from the books-more temper;P- but it is still good!!!
    Wish you luck with your writing, and hopefully, you’ll end up with more FINISHED stories than I have. Which would currently be one.

    The_Right_Girl
    “What do we want?”
    “World Domination!”
    “When do we want it?”
    “Now!”

  4. Well. Short. It must be LONGAH!

  5. erm…short, too short to comment.

    I thought Holly was a little OOC but other than that, no OOCness as far as I know.

    I actually think your writing style is really good so just write more like that and we’ll be flying 😀

    And I’ll give you grape juice for the update (a reasonably long one)

  6. Hahahahahhaha!!! No other comment, too short.

  7. Good, short. I like.

  8. it isn’t finished yet so stop calling it short I am in the middle of updating all my stories… well kind of so i’ll update as soon as possible don’t kill me if it takes until tommorow i’m doing my best 🙂

  9. We shan’t kill you, we just… erm, nag you with pitch forks? 🙂 update?

  10. Beckett Simpleton November 14th, 2010 at 9:30 pm 10

    Hmmm. Update? Short CHAPTERS (see, I didn’t say how it was just SHORT) this could be FUNNEH if it turns out good 🙂

  11. Good way to begin – I like the twist on the setting, if you know what I mean (the castle/village idea). Holly was hilarious. Yes indeed, update!

  12. Interesting…please update soon! Maybe you can combine Chap 1 and 2? It’ll be longer, and you won’t be nagged so much! 🙂

  13. Interesting…please update soon! Maybe you can combine Chap 1 and 2? It’ll be longer, and you won’t be nagged so much! 🙂 Overall, very interesting. I want to see where this is going!

  14. Abandoned story #29249. Please stand in line and take a ticket.

    COME ON!!! WHY DOES EVERYONE WRITE A LITTLE BLURB, POST, THEN STOP WRITING?! So many ideas put to waste… I need an update NOW!

    It’s very interesting and very sarcastic, which I like. That “reached the sky”

    And chapter two was hilarious.

  15. thankyou my public, I am pleased with my comments. I will update now and post ASAP. your number 1 story writer and the most awesomest person in the world ( lets not forget modest!!!!) ABRACADABRA has left the building.

  16. My public? Seriously?
    Baby should be changed to Daughter. Yes, I’ve already read it, but I just noticed that now. There’s a big-ish gap after the letter, which must die NOW.
    Other then that, very good. 🙂
    16th comment dance!!
    UPDATE OR FEAR MY WRATH!!!!!

  17. Stereotypical perhaps, but well done. Great update. Good grammer etc. I like Holly’s sarcastic nature. Pleez update!

  18. Your wish is my command. I have updated!!!

  19. That was really good!!. and funny.
    i give it 5 stars!! 🙂

  20. Wow, someone with a sense of humor. We haven’t had one of those in ages; let’s see, was it 19 years? XD

    Anyway, loved it! The chapters are really short, and yes, OOC. I think you’re rushing it a bit, though. Might I suggest that you slow things down? I didn’t imagine a Beckett/Holly fic. Hmm. Should be interesting; if you get to that part (which means UPDATE!).

  21. “I will punch you into next week.”
    “Good, we get married then.”

    *giggle* *snicker* *snort* HILARIOUS!!!!!!! UPDATE! NO FRIGGIN MISTAKES! I AM IN A REALLY GOOD MOOD! I PRESSED CAPS LOCK BY ACCIDENT. I AM SO STUPID. UPDATE.

  22. Thankyou for those kind words of wisdom. Just updated and am updating again!! Love ME!!!!!!! 😛

  23. wow you updated a lot!!!!! I’m only on Chapter 6 I can’t read that fast. but so far it was really good!!. thank you for dedicating that chapter to me 🙂

  24. This was good. can you post a warning on chapter 11. i read these fan fics out loud to my little sis and i had to skip the whole chapter. besides that IT WAS AWESOME!!!!!! 🙂

  25. When are u gonna Update???????

  26. Hahahah! Beautiful! Magnificent! Artemis seems to be acting a bit like Orion now. 😀 And you have Holly almost perfectly. Great job! 😀

  27. Fowlfan4ever July 9th, 2011 at 4:15 pm 27

    Please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  28. Did you like my update? It was awesome. Iknow:)
    I will update more later.

    ABRA OUT!!!! 🙂

  29. Wow that was amazing. I loved it every time holly and artemis would fight. Am I wiered cus I kinda liked chapter 11 ?!?

  30. Are you going to get Holly and Artemis back together or not. Update!!!!!!!!!!!

  31. Thanks guys. 🙂 No, Amber, you’re not weird, I liked it too.
    Eragon-I can’t tell you that!!! That’d totally ruin the WHOLE STORY. If you keep reading the updates you’ll find out. 🙂

  32. You updated thats good. I didn’t notice any mistakes and this is very good. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  33. OMG!!! THis is amazing!! I only saw a few spelling mistakes but other than that one of the best Fan FIcs I have EVER read!!! Please update soon.

  34. Hi, Abra here, on my co-writer’s account.
    Thanks!!! 🙂 Will update ASAP. 😀

  35. *whistles* that’s AMAZING!!! I love it! Are you going to write more or did you forget to change the ‘finished’ thing?

  36. Arto_Fowlo May 9th, 2012 at 8:52 am 36

    More is coming, don’t worry. 🙂 Glad you liked it.

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