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The Weekend

Summary: Half the village is talking about me. 'My hairs bright red and I've got a temper to match' I don't have a temper! Well not really...

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18

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A Very Angry Holly’s P.O.V.

I heard footsteps racing after us, and Artemis’s desperate voice calling to me.

“Polly! Polly, please wait!”

“Leave me alone!”

I didn’t think he was that fast, but he had a firm hold of my arm. “Stop.”

Polly tried toΒ  yank me back, but Artemis wound his arm around my waist and kept a firm hold of me.

“Let us talk for a moment, please, Holly.”

“I’m Polly,” she replied, unfamiliar with Artemis’s lack of brains.

He rolled his eyes. “Oh, right, both of you are Polly. Leave us alone now, please.”

She gave me a slightly alarmed look, but I reassured her. “He’s just stupid. He always calls me Polly.” I glared at him as I said this. “Come back in five minutes, we’ll be done then.”

So she left us alone.

“What will happen when she comes back?” Artemis whispered.

“I’ll go home,” I replied firmly.

He actually started to shake when I said that. “Away from me?”

“Yeah. At home.”

“Don’t!” His voice rose hysterically. “Stay with me! Polly, you cannot leave me! And I swear I’m not being stupid, I need you here!”

“What’s not stupid about that? You barely know me.”

“I love you.” Great. He was crying now.

“Really? I couldn’t tell.”

“I do,” he moaned. “But I’ve never been in love with someone before, so I don’t know what to do. You need to help me. Teach me. I can be nicer, I swear. I just don’t know how to be a good husband.”

Oh Frond, now I was going to cry. “Bad luck. You should have given me your soppy speech before. Now I’m in love with someone else, so you’re going to have to find someone else.”

He just stood there shaking and sobbing. Artemis literally dropped to the ground, outside in the mud, in his fancy suit, howling. I hugged him, hard, for about a minute, then left him there.

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18

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  1. ArtemisfianceNo1 November 10th, 2010 at 5:28 am 1

    ermm, a bit to short for me to properly comment, so when you make it a bit longer, tell us, and ill give you a proper comment πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ :mrgreen:

  2. Yeah, VERY short. But awesome. And there is no OOCness, Holly was as close to perfect as possible. πŸ™‚ UPDATE OR FEAR MY WRATH!!!!

  3. Liked the first chapter! ;P
    The second chapter shows that holly is a bit different from the books-more temper;P- but it is still good!!!
    Wish you luck with your writing, and hopefully, you’ll end up with more FINISHED stories than I have. Which would currently be one.

    The_Right_Girl
    “What do we want?”
    “World Domination!”
    “When do we want it?”
    “Now!”

  4. Well. Short. It must be LONGAH!

  5. erm…short, too short to comment.

    I thought Holly was a little OOC but other than that, no OOCness as far as I know.

    I actually think your writing style is really good so just write more like that and we’ll be flying πŸ˜€

    And I’ll give you grape juice for the update (a reasonably long one)

  6. Hahahahahhaha!!! No other comment, too short.

  7. Good, short. I like.

  8. it isn’t finished yet so stop calling it short I am in the middle of updating all my stories… well kind of so i’ll update as soon as possible don’t kill me if it takes until tommorow i’m doing my best πŸ™‚

  9. We shan’t kill you, we just… erm, nag you with pitch forks? πŸ™‚ update?

  10. Beckett Simpleton November 14th, 2010 at 9:30 pm 10

    Hmmm. Update? Short CHAPTERS (see, I didn’t say how it was just SHORT) this could be FUNNEH if it turns out good πŸ™‚

  11. Good way to begin – I like the twist on the setting, if you know what I mean (the castle/village idea). Holly was hilarious. Yes indeed, update!

  12. Interesting…please update soon! Maybe you can combine Chap 1 and 2? It’ll be longer, and you won’t be nagged so much! πŸ™‚

  13. Interesting…please update soon! Maybe you can combine Chap 1 and 2? It’ll be longer, and you won’t be nagged so much! πŸ™‚ Overall, very interesting. I want to see where this is going!

  14. Abandoned story #29249. Please stand in line and take a ticket.

    COME ON!!! WHY DOES EVERYONE WRITE A LITTLE BLURB, POST, THEN STOP WRITING?! So many ideas put to waste… I need an update NOW!

    It’s very interesting and very sarcastic, which I like. That “reached the sky”

    And chapter two was hilarious.

  15. thankyou my public, I am pleased with my comments. I will update now and post ASAP. your number 1 story writer and the most awesomest person in the world ( lets not forget modest!!!!) ABRACADABRA has left the building.

  16. My public? Seriously?
    Baby should be changed to Daughter. Yes, I’ve already read it, but I just noticed that now. There’s a big-ish gap after the letter, which must die NOW.
    Other then that, very good. πŸ™‚
    16th comment dance!!
    UPDATE OR FEAR MY WRATH!!!!!

  17. Stereotypical perhaps, but well done. Great update. Good grammer etc. I like Holly’s sarcastic nature. Pleez update!

  18. Your wish is my command. I have updated!!!

  19. That was really good!!. and funny.
    i give it 5 stars!! πŸ™‚

  20. Wow, someone with a sense of humor. We haven’t had one of those in ages; let’s see, was it 19 years? XD

    Anyway, loved it! The chapters are really short, and yes, OOC. I think you’re rushing it a bit, though. Might I suggest that you slow things down? I didn’t imagine a Beckett/Holly fic. Hmm. Should be interesting; if you get to that part (which means UPDATE!).

  21. “I will punch you into next week.”
    “Good, we get married then.”

    *giggle* *snicker* *snort* HILARIOUS!!!!!!! UPDATE! NO FRIGGIN MISTAKES! I AM IN A REALLY GOOD MOOD! I PRESSED CAPS LOCK BY ACCIDENT. I AM SO STUPID. UPDATE.

  22. Thankyou for those kind words of wisdom. Just updated and am updating again!! Love ME!!!!!!! πŸ˜›

  23. wow you updated a lot!!!!! I’m only on Chapter 6 I can’t read that fast. but so far it was really good!!. thank you for dedicating that chapter to me πŸ™‚

  24. This was good. can you post a warning on chapter 11. i read these fan fics out loud to my little sis and i had to skip the whole chapter. besides that IT WAS AWESOME!!!!!! πŸ™‚

  25. When are u gonna Update???????

  26. Hahahah! Beautiful! Magnificent! Artemis seems to be acting a bit like Orion now. πŸ˜€ And you have Holly almost perfectly. Great job! πŸ˜€

  27. Fowlfan4ever July 9th, 2011 at 4:15 pm 27

    Please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  28. Did you like my update? It was awesome. Iknow:)
    I will update more later.

    ABRA OUT!!!! πŸ™‚

  29. Wow that was amazing. I loved it every time holly and artemis would fight. Am I wiered cus I kinda liked chapter 11 ?!?

  30. Are you going to get Holly and Artemis back together or not. Update!!!!!!!!!!!

  31. Thanks guys. πŸ™‚ No, Amber, you’re not weird, I liked it too.
    Eragon-I can’t tell you that!!! That’d totally ruin the WHOLE STORY. If you keep reading the updates you’ll find out. πŸ™‚

  32. You updated thats good. I didn’t notice any mistakes and this is very good. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  33. OMG!!! THis is amazing!! I only saw a few spelling mistakes but other than that one of the best Fan FIcs I have EVER read!!! Please update soon.

  34. Hi, Abra here, on my co-writer’s account.
    Thanks!!! πŸ™‚ Will update ASAP. πŸ˜€

  35. *whistles* that’s AMAZING!!! I love it! Are you going to write more or did you forget to change the ‘finished’ thing?

  36. Arto_Fowlo May 9th, 2012 at 8:52 am 36

    More is coming, don’t worry. πŸ™‚ Glad you liked it.

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