It’s Really Him!!
Written on June 1st, 2010 by poodlepom40Story Details
(4 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
Loading ...Chapter One: BEAR!!!
Five tired girls stumbled out of the woods in Dublin,Ireland. All five flopped down on the ground,and were now laying on their backs. Penelope pushed off her one high top sneaker, (the bear had got the other one,) and brushed the dirt and pinecones from her jeans and tie-dyed shirt. Penelope tucked her short,brown hair behind her ears and dumped out her bag of art supplies and sighed.
“Look at this mess! Right know that bear is chowing down on a box of oil paints,and a pink ipod!” Ivy sat up putting her long,straight,chocalate brown hair behind her ears.
“Well,if SilverSong hadn’t followed the family of rabbits into the woods we might have made it to the picnicing area!” Ivy’s midnight blue eye’s glared at SilverSong,through her indigo rimmed glasses. SilverSong had stopped fiddling with her long white hair that was caught in the zipper of her aviators jacket,and was glaring back at Ivy.
“Hey,not my fault I’m part werewolf! And before you call me ridicolous,look at yourself. Your wearing leggings and long leather boots! And with you being tall,and slim you look like a cat.” Ivy being as quick tempered as she is,tackled SilverSong to the ground. Hermoine,who was helping Ohan with her leg that was bitten by the bear,ran over to help Penelope break up the fight.
“Stop,” yelled Hermoine.”Ohan needs medical help,so it would be best if we started moving!” Hermoine’s brown,purple streaked hair was covered with pine needles,and her one unzipped pants leg was getting ready to fall off completley. Hermoine spoke again.
“I would use my phone but,the bear ate it. I would use some of my umm…borrowed money,but my wallet feel into the stream,back there,”she said pointing to the woods. Ohan coughed.
“Umm,Hello!!! My leg is bleeding if you haven’t noticed!!” Ohan’s purple leggings had a huge tear in the where the bear had gotten her,and her feet where bare where her purple and black high tops usually are. The girls headed over to Ohan,and Penelope picked Ohan up and helped her to her feet. Ivy pointed to a large looking house in the distance.
“Let’s go there and see if we can get some help.” Ohan counted on her fingers.
“So….maybe we could be there in about an hour.” SilverSong shook her head.
“Actually only about twenty minutes.” Ohan frowned.
“Come on! You know math confuses me.” The girl’s turned toward the house and started walking. This might take a while…
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June 1st, 2010 at 11:26 pm
Come on!! Comment pweeze!
June 1st, 2010 at 11:26 pm
OMG OMG OMG WOOOOOH *arm punches upward*
*first comment marshmellow*
I’ve been waiting for this for quite a while…heehee.
I love the first chapter (partly because I’m in it) the interaction between the characters is brilliant. I honestly cannot wait for the update. Woot!…yes I’m a little hyper
June 2nd, 2010 at 12:03 am
Oh awesome. I love it. Love it, love it, love it!
Update, pleases!
June 2nd, 2010 at 12:05 am
I am sooooo doing the happy dance right know!! I was worried you guy’s wouldn’t like it.
I will update as soon as possible.
June 2nd, 2010 at 2:51 am
Great job, PPOM! Well written.
Could use a quick spell check, though. 
Have you read Aphrodite? Tis veery similar to zis…. 
June 2nd, 2010 at 7:02 am
I agree with CC-very similar to Aphrodite. But cooler. Cause I’m in it!!=)=)=) UPDATE OR FEAR MY WRATH!!!
June 2nd, 2010 at 12:40 pm
No,I never read Aphrodite,but I just did when I saw your comment and it IS like it!! I had nooooooooo idea
June 2nd, 2010 at 7:50 pm
Ahh I do wonder where Vinyaya’s got to. I remember doing a shared fic with her lol. She was an awesome writer *reminisces for a looong time* *someone whacks artyrox round the head* *coughs* anyway UPDATE PLEASE.
June 2nd, 2010 at 8:57 pm
It said six girls, but you identified only five. *makes a “?” face*
Anyhoodles…
I think it’s a cool storyline. B&M are totally in character. Hard to tell, however, where the action is going to go. I need plot for good comments (subtle hint, subtle hint).
~Yoshi *huge yawn followed by last-day-of-school-is-tomorrow lackadaisical celebration*
June 5th, 2010 at 11:16 pm
OMG I got mauled by a bear! …love the story, continue or die
June 8th, 2010 at 12:58 am
About Aphrodite: Its no big deal.
They’re both great. 
I luff the update! Keep on writing! 
~CC
June 8th, 2010 at 4:18 am
*giggles*Is it just me or does any one else notice that Arty can’t control puberty? *giggles*
June 8th, 2010 at 3:17 pm
AH. I can’t help noticing some punctuation mistakes. No spaces before a punctuation, and a space after it. The story’s weird in some places. I’d recommend a beta’er. But good job! I like!
June 8th, 2010 at 3:19 pm
(Sorry for the double post.you can edit it into one if you like.) But FIVE STARS. Seriously. Don’t get dragged down by my negative comment.
June 8th, 2010 at 5:12 pm
pubery.. puberty… puberty…. puberty.. makes Arty hotty
June 15th, 2010 at 9:33 pm
UPDATE ASAP
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July 29th, 2010 at 6:10 am
Waaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh UPDATE!