Curiouser and Curiouser

Written on May 28th, 2008 by DomovoiBlack

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  • Category: Funny and Angst
  • Author: DomovoiBlack
  • Word Count: 3520
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This is my first attempt on this site. I will probably add more soon–for now I am figuring out how to use the site. :)

Summary:

Artemis believes himself to be victim of a conspiracy. Takes place immediately after the Eternity Code.

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14 Reviews for “Curiouser and Curiouser”

  1. shanette Says:
    May 28th, 2008 at 6:27 am

    Wow, your style of writing is really nice. I like it. I like the pace of the story. And so far Artemis and Butler aren’t that OOC. Very nice. It’s very nice so far.

  2. Holly314 Says:
    May 28th, 2008 at 1:06 pm

    This is really good for a first fic. There isn’t that much OOC’ness (which I despise)and there ae abolutely no spelling or grammar errors. It’s very interesting! Update soon!

  3. artyrox Says:
    May 28th, 2008 at 4:52 pm

    Oh my gosh! This is absolutely brilliant for a first time fic. There are no major grammar errors and I hope to expect more great stories/fics from you. (your stories are definetly better than mine)

  4. DomovoiBlack Says:
    May 28th, 2008 at 8:33 pm

    Wow, thank you for the nice feedback, everyone! I’m trying my best to stay in character. One of my biggest problems with fan fic is I tend to make everyone a bit too emo. (I have written a few NUMB3RS and Harry Potter fics before.)

    I should update later today or at least sometime very soon. :)

  5. Star Jinin Says:
    May 28th, 2008 at 10:54 pm

    No offense, but the style is…awkward. Artemis is OOC, but only slightly. And many of the lines are a bit cliched…sorry, I’m just a picky person.

  6. BlackOpal Says:
    May 29th, 2008 at 12:02 am

    Hmm, really? I thought that Artemis was very in character.
    Remarkably so, actually.
    I liked it a lot. I can barely imagine what they went through with the contact lenses. That would’ve killed Butler. Someone managed to put something in their eyes!
    It’s a great idea that I’ve never seen covered before.

  7. DomovoiBlack Says:
    May 29th, 2008 at 3:31 am

    About cliches: Eoin Colfer uses them a lot, and I am trying to incorporate some of the author’s style into my own. However, I reread my chapter and was unable to find any cliches. Perhaps what you meant was “hackneyed language,” another tendency of Colfer’s. But he does use a lot of brilliant metaphors and he uses old cliches in a new way that makes them forgivable. So, while I can see how someone might find the style annoying, I don’t plan to change it. Thanks! :)

  8. artyrox Says:
    May 29th, 2008 at 9:27 pm

    You better not change it because I absolutely adore it. Your writing style (to me) is quite mature so is your explaination above.

  9. Shanette Says:
    May 30th, 2008 at 8:49 am

    Yes, I like your style a LOT. It’s just so grabbing. I like the updates by the way. ;)

  10. Minerva Paradizo Says:
    May 31st, 2008 at 4:02 am

    I only found one error. On chapter four, end of the chapter, you said Herve’. I think you meant Herve’s. Wait, I take that back. I think it should be Herve. I love giving constructive criticism, but I can’t on this story. :p
    Please keep updating. I love where this is leading. You have an eye for writing, and you remind me of Eoin Colfer’s style of writing.
    Write on!
    Minerva Paradizo

  11. DomovoiBlack Says:
    June 3rd, 2008 at 4:27 am

    Thanks for supportive compliments, everyone!

    Minerva, thanks so much! Good eye there–the reason I said “Herve’” was because there should be an “accent ague” over the second e, but I have found no good way to do that without messing it up with lots of weird symbols. So I used an apostrophe instead. It was the best I could think of, and if someone knows how I can put the proper symbol in, let me know please! :) Perhaps I will try copying the e from a French website.

  12. artyrox Says:
    June 3rd, 2008 at 6:20 pm

    Have you tried using the num lock thing. I’ll show you. press num lock then press alt+130 (on the number keyboard to the right of the keyboard and not the numbers at the top of the letters) to get an é and do all that but instead of alt+130 do alt+138 to get an è. Hope I helped. I actually made a word document on all the symbols as far as alt+323. That was a lot of hard work. Update soon.

  13. holly101 Says:
    June 7th, 2008 at 11:38 pm

    I think this is really, really, good. I have only read a few fanfics, but most of them weere not very good. This story is so like the actual Artemis Fowl. Update soon!!!

  14. BabyGrouch Says:
    July 10th, 2008 at 12:45 am

    It was a nice story that fi well with the books 3 and 4. Maybe Eoin Colfer should’ve used your story in the beginning of The Opal Deception.

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