Cant I get a taco!
Written on May 5th, 2008 by harrygzStory Details
(1 votes, average: 4 out of 5)
Loading ...Artemis was wandering the streets of New York when he came upon a taco bell. He was starving and even though he completely hated fast food he just couldn’t wait any longer. He almost vomited when he walked in. The smell of grease was everywhere. He walked up to the order desk and asked for a taco.
” Would you like mustard with that asked the order taker.
” Mustard on a taco! You cant be serious.”
” I’ll take that as a no.”
” Well I should hope so, said artemis in a sarcastic voice.”
“Would you like lettuce, asked the order taker.”
“Yes, replied artemis.”
” How about meat”
“Its a taco! Of course I want meat!”
“How about……”
“CAN I JUST GET A TACO!”
To be continued……….
May 5th, 2008 at 11:49 pm
*FCD* LOL That’s all!
May 6th, 2008 at 9:19 am
just fix up a few grammar mistakes and i think this is fine. it is unlikely that artemis would go into a fast food place but since this is a comic relief i think it is funny.lol nice wen u make him loose his temper.
“CAN I JUST GET A TACO!”
May 17th, 2008 at 11:17 am
The last thing Artemis said… It’s not like him
May 18th, 2008 at 8:27 pm
I thought this was pretty cute. It sounds like Artemis until the ending line. The “Can I just have a Taco” buisness..not so much. But overall it was good. ^_^
May 20th, 2008 at 12:03 am
Thats how I feel about the school lunch.
“CAN I JUST GET A TACO!?”
May 22nd, 2008 at 2:15 pm
I swear to god that’s just how taco bell is, ya ask for a taco and they give you a tortilla with nothin on it
weeeeeeee 4/5 luv it write more
This is BlackOpal- please don’t double post. Review once per chapter. I combined your messages.
June 4th, 2008 at 5:54 pm
I swear i feel like yelling that every time i go to taco bell.they ask you if u want things that don’t even belong on a taco! its really kinda of funny when u place arty in that situation. Well Done! 5/5
June 23rd, 2008 at 12:19 am
TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO TACO
This is BlackOpal- I edited out a lot of your tacos. Please make your comments less spammy and add more. Say what you like or don’t like about the story, comment on it, tell your rating and why, but don’t just post mindless shouts.
July 3rd, 2008 at 6:05 am
Haha twas awesomness! I know the last line was so not Artemis, but it was funny. Loved it!
July 8th, 2008 at 3:47 am
i accually dont mind arty not acting like himself. thats the wierd and funny part. it’s not a funny story if arty acts like himself!!! btw good story a little short though… i like it anyway!!
July 17th, 2008 at 9:12 pm
a li’l short though.. bt twas damn funnyyyyyyyyyyyyy!Keep it up!
July 17th, 2008 at 9:59 pm
i like tacos…..
CONTINUE
July 19th, 2008 at 8:21 pm
TEEHEE! funny. Artemis actually walking into a Taco Bell… wow. I loved the end. I dont care if its not like Arty to do that. Anyway…. HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!