Artemis Fowl meets Indiana Jones
Written on May 24th, 2008 by DrakeMackandaleStory Details
- Status : Incomplete
- Category: Crossovers
- Author: DrakeMackandale
- Word Count: 1287
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Chapter 5: A Truce?
LEP headquarters
Holly had just gotton back from a pizza store robbery. She really hated how Ark Sool always put her down and never gave her any big missions, like ones with the LEPretreval squad. She was leaving Sool’s office when her helmet started beeping. It was Artemis. Finally, thought Holly, an excuse to leave this place. I’ve got nothing better to do then to have to stop simple robberies.
Fowl Manor
Artemis was trying to reason with Indy when he heard a knock at his window. ”Come in Holly”, Artemis said. “Who’s Holly Artemis? There is no one ther…”. Indy was cut short because the window opened all on its own and Holly jumped out of thin air, right in front of Indy, and with her Neutrino drawn.
” HOLY SHIT! WHAT IS THAT THING”! Indy screamed. He dropped his gun and ran out the door. ”Besides him Artemis, why did you bring me here?” Holly asked. “Holly I found this map when I was in Peru. It’s a map of the lost city of Atlantis.”
Holly stepped closer and took a look at the map. “Oh my god,” Holly whispered, “This is the lost map the fairies have been looking for years. It was created by us.” “Holly I need your help. I want you to help me find Atlantis.”
”Fowl if you keep it out of the mud man public, youv’e got yourself a deal.”
One of Fowl Manor’s hallways
Butler was patroling the hall when he heard a scream. It was headed for him. Indy suddenly bust around the corner. He stopped right next to Butler. How do you get out of this place?” Indy asked. ”Go to the next right hand turn and keep following that hall.”
“Thanks. Indy ran down the hall and started screaming again. Wow, Butler thought, some strange people have been visiting Fowl Manor latley.
May 24th, 2008 at 2:46 am
need comments
May 24th, 2008 at 5:07 am
This is funny how u add edits to the movie with Artemis in it lol … This is alot better than most of ur other storied ur really improving! 5/5
May 24th, 2008 at 1:24 pm
New chapter added
May 24th, 2008 at 7:08 pm
The grammar/spelling needs work and they’re not trying to find Atlantis, they’re trying to find Cibola and the lost cities of gold…except they end up finding a magical alien skull
May 24th, 2008 at 7:32 pm
the sebolia thing was from national treasure 2, the crystal skull was from indiana jones. this is my story. its not based on indy j and the crystal skull I wrote it because indy j is out
May 25th, 2008 at 3:42 pm
Be careful categorizing your stories- this is a crossover. If you don’t know what that means, check ‘How to Categorize Your Story’ under the ‘Help and How To’s’ on the sidebar.
Also, I cleared your ratings because I noticed you rated your own story- and multiple times, too.
May 25th, 2008 at 8:39 pm
I changede my nickname to drakemackandale. its still me everybody i just changed my nickname and public name
May 26th, 2008 at 1:51 am
Well. You could have done a better job translating IJ to paper, but otherwise good!
May 26th, 2008 at 10:10 pm
Good job. Never would have thought of using Indian Jones. Did you see the new movie in theathers? I thought it sucked. Btw does anyone know when artemis fowl will be a movie?
May 27th, 2008 at 10:27 am
DAMN!!! I LOVE INDIANA JONES!! WOOOOT!! U beat me to the catch! And star Jinin, no offense, but it is drakemackandale’s story, so they can go wherever they want. Also, I like it alot. I was going to do a Indy and Arty story
Oh well, I can do it differently. Good Work! Keep Going!
Da da da da, da da da, da da da da! Da da da da da! lol
May 28th, 2008 at 1:57 am
theve got some news on this site about a fowl movie. i thought the indy j movie was good, up until the part in the end with the alien and the UFO
May 28th, 2008 at 10:42 am
AHH! DON’T SPOIL IT! Geez! Anyway. I like it
May 28th, 2008 at 8:42 pm
You need to watch out for change in verb tense. You began the story with “At the moment, Indiana Jones IS…” but the rest of the story is in past tense. Sorry if it’s nit-picky, but that sort of thing really distracts me from the story.
I think most of the characters are a tad OOC, particularly Artemis. He agrees to team up with Indy far too easily. He is also a bit too casual about calling up Holly as if he does this all the time.
I know it’s just a for-fun crossover but OOC bugs me even in a crossover. Because to me, the point is to see how the original characters would play off each other if they stayed in character.
Anyway, As long as you’re having fun and exploring new ideas, more power to ya.
July 5th, 2008 at 11:54 pm
I like your story
July 8th, 2008 at 9:10 pm
I love the Artemis Fowl graphic novel. I think Eoin Colfer should create a second graphic novel for The Arctic Incident. I am also hoping that (if the rumor is true) the Artemis Fowl Movie will come out soon!
PS: I think Artemis Fowl looks kind cute too!
July 24th, 2008 at 12:11 am
When will you update?
October 16th, 2008 at 8:37 pm
He had better update, or else I’m gonna come witha bullwhip. Trust me.
Juliet+Arty, I think Colfer said he was going to make ALL the books into graphic novels. (Though, I kinda hate Eoin cut corners.)
Other than the fact that Artemis and Indiana live in different time lines, believable storyline. And, again, update. I wasn’t kidding in the beginning. Or was I?
—delusional Artymon