Challenge of the Appellations

Summary:                                                     No1                                                     “Move”                                                     by Thousand Foot Krutch                                                     http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=COi8Y4gOBN8  No1’s point of view:      We were on Hybras, […]

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                                                    No1

                                                    “Move”

                                                    by Thousand Foot Krutch

                                                    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=COi8Y4gOBN8

 No1’s point of view:

     We were on Hybras, transporting the island through time. We were all gathered in a circle, holding hands, speaking to each other inside our minds. I tried to explain what to do.

~Look, listen to my voice

~If you’re making the choice

~Tell all the girls and the boys

~Either scream or rejoice

~Let’s make that noise

~Either move or we will all be destroyed.

     It wasn’t working. There wasn’t enough contributed magic. We wouldn’t make it completely. I told all of them again, more urgently.

~Move and show me what you can do

~When you step into the circle and shake like we do and

~Move when you just can’t take it and

~Move if you just feel like breaking it.

     Still, it wasn’t working fully. The magic surrounding us, it was strong, but it wasn’t enough. We needed more from Abbot. I talked to him, mentally.

~Can you hear me?

~Stop, look, listen to my voice,

~It was never my choice to feel all alone.

~This is my home…

~Back up, you don’t know,

~If you’ve never been here, you’ve never been to the place inside,

~I face my fears, it takes everything I am

     Still, no type of response. Time was growing shorter and shorter. I began almost screaming at him, over and over. We needed to get through to him to save ourselves, Hybras, and the rest of the world.

~Move and show me what you can do

~When you step into the circle and shake like we do!

~Move when you just can’t take it

~And move if you just feel like breaking it!

~Move and show me what you can do

~When you step into the circle and shake like we do!

~Move when you just can’t take it

~And move if you just feel like breaking it!

     I felt that I might actually be getting through. And then there he was! Popping straight from Abbot! It was Qwan! I couldn’t believe it! I quickly clued him in.

~Come near me, stop, look, listen to my voice,

~If you’re making the choice, tell all the girls and the boys

~Either scream or rejoice

~Let’s make that noise

~Either move or we will all be destroyed

~Back up and let go,

~If you’ve never been here

~You’ve never been to the place inside

~I face my fears, it takes everything I am

     There was a huge surge of power as Qwan joined the circle, helping the sphere of magic around us grow, become stronger. With renewed hope, I reminded everyone to keep giving all they could.

~Move and show me what you can do

~When you step into the circle and shake like we do

~Move when you just can’t take it

~And move if you just feel like breaking it.

     We were almost there! And then we had made it! Hybras was again part of the real world, not locked in Limbo. I was exhausted. All that magic all in one place at one time… and the chance that Artemis or Holly hadn’t been keeping their thoughts completely on where we wanted to go and when. But we had eventually made it.

~I come crashing to the floor

~And I know there must be more like me

~I’ve seen this all before,

~I can’t carry this anymore, break free

~Breathe, and leave, until this storm is over,

~Cause underneath, there’s a diamond passing over

~So breathe, let’s leave, until this storm is over

~Because I want to take you away

     I couldn’t believe it. Then, as we boarded the shuttle that would take us away underground, I slowly relived those passed moments. I remembered the intense concentration, the fear, the anger, the hope, everything. I remembered my own words:

~Move and show me what you can do

~When you step into the circle and shake like we do

~Move when you just can’t take it

~And move if you just feel like breaking it.

     It was amazing that we had made it. Truly. And now things would be much better off for everyone. No more demons materializing throughout time, for me, no more of the teasing, and everyone generally just felt less stress. I don’t think I could ask for anything more.

 

Okay, so there they are! I don’t expect to win, but I figured I’d give it a shot. Remember, no constructive criticism for these. Please R&R and thanks for reading ’em!

P.S. I originally had a different songfic planned for Artemis, but it wasn’t completely focused on him, but I thought I did really well on it, so I’ll tack it onto the end of another “chapter” as sort of a bonus. Hope you enjoy it!

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2 responses to “Challenge of the Appellations.” Join in!

  1. These don’t suck! I’m serious! You did really good on yours. I loved it. Amazing job! 😀

  2. Arty’s: Nice and sweet. Fairly fitting for the situation. *insert concrit here, ‘cause I can’t write it for a challenge*
    Fighter: Haha, I wrote a songfic with Fighter – by Christina Augilera, no less. XD http://artemisfowl.fangathering.com/fanfiction/angst/fighter/ No one reads it anymore, and it’s pretty bad, so whatever, XD. I thought Holly’d feel more like this after the Time Paradox, not the Siege, but it’s an interesting take – having her sing it and all. I liked the ending ^^.
    Coral’s: My, interesting. I’ve seen few Coral-centered fics, and this was nice. Cute, meaningful, powerful, and an interesting take on things.
    No1: Again, you don’t see a lot of things. Never heard the song, but I can see how it would relate to No1’s experience. Without the lyrics, though, the thing kinda falls flat… and I just never read the lyrics, so… XD
    BONUS! XD: Cute, sweet, but you’re right, it doesn’t really suit for a character description. Overall, nice job!

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