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Mistake

Summary: Death awaits the foolish

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You must die

Or give in

Your life depends

On this decision

How can you be

Kind

Or Happy

When your love

Is Mad?

Locked away

Far Away

She Waits and waits

Day by Day

Hour by hour

Minute

By

Minute

Waiting for the

Hero

who will

 never come

Round

To sweep her off her

Feet

One never again

Will she meet.

You dying

Far away

While your love will forever

Be counting

Minute by Minute

Hour 

By Hour

Day

By Day.

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4 responses to “Mistake.” Join in!

  1. Cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FCD!!!

  2. This is good, and I like the theme. HOWEVER, I assume this is a poem, and I would like the syllables of each line to be more even, like say six for two lines, then seven, then maybe five. The poem flows better when you read it, and it looks more neat too.

  3. Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!! SCD

  4. Hmmm…

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