~ Sylvia ~
Written on October 7th, 2007 by HS9Story Details
(13 votes, average: 3.77 out of 5)
Loading ...Artemis’s POV
I looked at Juilet. She had proceded into jumping up and down in the flower bed. That girl… She is very infuriating. She obviously knows what I dislike and waht I do like…
“ARTYARTYARTYARTYARTYARTYARTYARTYARTYARTYARTYARTY! DOYOUHAVEANYCHOCOLATE?!!!!!”
I backed away slowly. “Yes. But BUtler has it at the moment. Go find him.”
“OKAY!”
I watched as she bounded off into the manor.
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October 7th, 2007 at 2:11 am
Enjoy! I hope you like this one! Do you really think that the name Sylvia means “tree climber”?
October 7th, 2007 at 2:21 am
ook…umm, I could look it up….
October 7th, 2007 at 2:23 am
Okay, Sylvia means forest.
October 7th, 2007 at 2:31 am
Huh? I thought it meant “tree climber”. I looked up that name in about five resources and it said that it meant “tree climber”. Oh well.
October 7th, 2007 at 6:33 pm
I thought this was a song fic because of the ~ so I was reluctant to read it better get that changed *first comment dance*
October 7th, 2007 at 10:16 pm
Very cool. I can’t wait for more!
October 8th, 2007 at 3:21 am
Is my story really that bad? Only two stars? If it is, Tell me. If it is bad, than I will delete it.
October 8th, 2007 at 3:26 am
NO WAY!!dont you dare delete it!!!some people are just so rude giving such a great story a bad review!!!
October 8th, 2007 at 3:27 am
I can’t rate your story again because when yo poted it I gave it 5 stars don’t delete it!
October 8th, 2007 at 3:56 am
I think your story definitely deserves more than two stars. Especially at this early stage, when the plot has yet to be completely revealed.
I wouldn’t judge the value of your story based on ratings. Honestly, it could be one random person who doesn’t like you repeatedly rating it low. Or, at worst, there are several people (maximum three, since Jelly and I both rated you higher than your average) who don’t like your story. So what? If YOU like your story, keep writing. I have a story I wrote that’s rated lower than this one, and I don’t care (though I wish I knew why).
The point is, your story is good, keep writing.
October 8th, 2007 at 4:55 am
Thanks. I won’t delete it. My sister might though.
October 13th, 2007 at 3:58 am
I read the first chapter today i’m going to read the 2nd chapter at 5o,clock in the afternoon this is a great story HS9 keep writing
October 13th, 2007 at 3:59 am
I forgot the ..
October 14th, 2007 at 7:59 pm
Um… I’ve read everything you’ve got so far and am thouroughly confused. It just seems like Book 1 with an extra character (who I don’t really get), and then everything got really weird and Artemis is shooting tranquilizer darts at random people all the time. Don’t get me wrong- it’s a good story, and I like the parts I understand; I just think you need to take things slower and explain things more.
October 14th, 2007 at 8:59 pm
To MMK: Artemis is not shooting random people with trnquilizer darts all the time. The last one was the girl’s enemy. I guess you are right. It does seem alot like the first book but it has a new character in it.
October 14th, 2007 at 9:07 pm
Oh! I thought that was still Artemis at the end. So… Artemis was interested in Sylvia because she’d read the AF books and knew what would happen to him; he forced her to help him kidnap Holly; she helps Holly escape; they go to a dance; someone else kidnaps Sylvia. Did I get that right?
October 14th, 2007 at 9:32 pm
Yes and no. The dance part was really random. It just came to me because I was bored. I am only eleven, so do not blame me! Besides, Artemis Fowl does not handle the darts. Butler does. Artemis Fowl has no idea that he is in a book series. The only reason why he kidnapped her so he could force her to help him capture a fairy was because he was bored and wanted to do something.
June 29th, 2008 at 10:05 pm
I updated. Again.