~ Sylvia ~
Written on October 7th, 2007 by HS9Story Details
(13 votes, average: 3.77 out of 5)
Loading ...This is a new story of mine. Please R,R, and R.
I was walking home with my friend one day when a limo came up to me. I didn’t notice the limo because I was talking to my friend. Then I turned around and saw a limo following me. I stopped and told my friend to run. We both started to run. Unfortunately, the limo was faster so we both got shot with a dart. I woke up to see a boy about 12 or 13 staring at me. His face was so white, you would have thought he was a vampire. His eyes looked cold. When he spoke, my spine shivered. He said,” I will meet you again tomorrow.” Then, he let us out of the limo. My friend said,”What was that all about?”
While we were at school, a limo appeared. They went inside. They went to the sixth grade hall and appeared in the doorway of my classroom. When he saw me, he had a small smile playing among his lips.
I was arguing with someone in my class. We were arguing about who was smarter. Me or him. We stopped when the boy I saw yesterday came in. I whispered,”Artemis Fowl.”
Artemis Fowl went to my teacher and told her something. Then he went over to me and told me to go with him. Then my friend asked him,”What is your name?” Artemis Fowl.” “Isn’t that a girl name?” I said sarcastically. He gave me his best vampire glare. It had no effect on me for some reason. He was surprised.
“Yes. It generally is a female name. It was the name of a Greek goddess. But every now and then, a male earns the right to use it for the talent of hunting.” “I know that. I am not an idiot.” “Then why did you ask? And really, you should not make fun of my name. Your name , which is Sylvia, means…….” “Don’t you dare say it. Don’t you dare.” He started to smile. “How rude it is to interrupt someone older that you.” “You are only one year ,two months, and twelve days older than me!” “Still.”
“Your name means “tree climber”.” Everyone started laughing. I turned to him and said,” What do I have to do for you?” He smiled. “It depends. Butler? Give her the watch.” His bodyguard, Butler, came in and strapped an incredibly expensive watch onto my wrist. I looked at it and smiled. “What if I lose it?” “You had better not.”
That is all for now. Please R,R, and R.
Some other stories by HS9:
- Two Simple Updates
- Terror at Japan
- ~ I Miss You ~
- Things Are Different Now (A Sequel to A.F.G.K.)
- Artemis Meets the Suite Life
October 7th, 2007 at 2:11 am
Enjoy! I hope you like this one! Do you really think that the name Sylvia means “tree climber”?
October 7th, 2007 at 2:21 am
ook…umm, I could look it up….
October 7th, 2007 at 2:23 am
Okay, Sylvia means forest.
October 7th, 2007 at 2:31 am
Huh? I thought it meant “tree climber”. I looked up that name in about five resources and it said that it meant “tree climber”. Oh well.
October 7th, 2007 at 6:33 pm
I thought this was a song fic because of the ~ so I was reluctant to read it better get that changed *first comment dance*
October 7th, 2007 at 10:16 pm
Very cool. I can’t wait for more!
October 8th, 2007 at 3:21 am
Is my story really that bad? Only two stars? If it is, Tell me. If it is bad, than I will delete it.
October 8th, 2007 at 3:26 am
NO WAY!!dont you dare delete it!!!some people are just so rude giving such a great story a bad review!!!
October 8th, 2007 at 3:27 am
I can’t rate your story again because when yo poted it I gave it 5 stars don’t delete it!
October 8th, 2007 at 3:56 am
I think your story definitely deserves more than two stars. Especially at this early stage, when the plot has yet to be completely revealed.
I wouldn’t judge the value of your story based on ratings. Honestly, it could be one random person who doesn’t like you repeatedly rating it low. Or, at worst, there are several people (maximum three, since Jelly and I both rated you higher than your average) who don’t like your story. So what? If YOU like your story, keep writing. I have a story I wrote that’s rated lower than this one, and I don’t care (though I wish I knew why).
The point is, your story is good, keep writing.
October 8th, 2007 at 4:55 am
Thanks. I won’t delete it. My sister might though.
October 13th, 2007 at 3:58 am
I read the first chapter today i’m going to read the 2nd chapter at 5o,clock in the afternoon this is a great story HS9 keep writing
October 13th, 2007 at 3:59 am
I forgot the ..
October 14th, 2007 at 7:59 pm
Um… I’ve read everything you’ve got so far and am thouroughly confused. It just seems like Book 1 with an extra character (who I don’t really get), and then everything got really weird and Artemis is shooting tranquilizer darts at random people all the time. Don’t get me wrong- it’s a good story, and I like the parts I understand; I just think you need to take things slower and explain things more.
October 14th, 2007 at 8:59 pm
To MMK: Artemis is not shooting random people with trnquilizer darts all the time. The last one was the girl’s enemy. I guess you are right. It does seem alot like the first book but it has a new character in it.
October 14th, 2007 at 9:07 pm
Oh! I thought that was still Artemis at the end. So… Artemis was interested in Sylvia because she’d read the AF books and knew what would happen to him; he forced her to help him kidnap Holly; she helps Holly escape; they go to a dance; someone else kidnaps Sylvia. Did I get that right?
October 14th, 2007 at 9:32 pm
Yes and no. The dance part was really random. It just came to me because I was bored. I am only eleven, so do not blame me! Besides, Artemis Fowl does not handle the darts. Butler does. Artemis Fowl has no idea that he is in a book series. The only reason why he kidnapped her so he could force her to help him capture a fairy was because he was bored and wanted to do something.
June 29th, 2008 at 10:05 pm
I updated. Again.