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Summary: Kill Kill The word echos round In his mind As she falls to the ground Life spills out Traped to […]

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Kill Kill

The word echos round

In his mind

As she falls to the ground

Life spills out

Traped to observe

Himself murder love

He did not deserve

Screaming in pain

No one shall hear

As dies the one the one thing

He most holds dear

Laughing cruely

At his wits

The Hunter stabbes

The shell to bits

Nothing to live for

The mind collapses

No escape

No chances

No Escape

No escape

No Life Left

No escape  

Two Heros,

no escape…

Pain penitrates

His protecive layer

Endless screams

Fill his mind’s lair

Cruel punishment

By one’s own hand

In his mind

Himself he canned

“Artemis, it’s time fo…ho-ho-holly! No, ge-get back, get baaaaaaggggggggg-

He laughs,

A maniac free.

 Orion

The killer

is coming

Coming

For

thee.

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12 responses to “Kill.” Join in!

  1. No escape.

  2. LOL, Artydreamer.

    THIS is what I’m talkin’ bout!No survival… death… blood… murder…

    Well. Sorry. This is… interesting… How… Never mind. I don’t really get it.

  3. This is really good.
    Ugh, Fal, how can you lol at this?!

  4. O.o short comments! They be my downfall! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

    Some grammatical mistakes, and some of it didn’t make sense, but otherwise very good! Why must the site be fraught with angst? They also be my downfall! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

    The line spacing, or whatever you call it, works out very nice, adds an air of dramatic-ness. Sicne this is short… I don’t have anything else to say, so… erm… BAI!

  5. The above comment was mine, I was logged into my dad’s account, sorry!

  6. Breakdown. Artemis kills Holly, Then kills himself.

  7. Sounds like someone familiar…. Very good. People dying and committing suicide. I like very very much.

  8. Very good. No specific main charachter, though we all know who it is.

  9. *moans in appreciation of angst* This is amazing… I love the uncontrollable aura (uncontrollable, Orion, not pastel blue with little dolphins).

  10. PASTEL BLUE!! With GREEN dolphins.

  11. That was really good… i like the whole thing.

  12. Fowlfan4ever June 13th, 2011 at 10:38 pm 12

    Like it!!!

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