You, Holly and Mulch Vs. Opal Koboi and Technology

Written on January 1st, 2008 by 017350

Story Details

      You, Holly and Mulch were at Entrance 2. Commander Root had sent you there as soon as you made your decision. First, you had to get past the DNA cannon. You couldn’t get past it without it shooting you. The only way to get past it was to either be someone that was authorized to pass, or shoot it. Obviously, you had to shoot it.  Holly brought out her Neutrino 3000, and shot it. It barely made a dent. Holly raised the settings on her Neutrino higher, and shot again. It only made the dent slightly larger. She raised the settings to full, and shot. This time, it finally shut down. You quietly slipped into the tunnel. You saw 2 gaurds in the distance. You and Holly sheilded, while Mulch dug underground. You were able to slip past the first gaurd… Then the second.

      Then, you saw something that you weren’t anticipating: A second gate. You stared at it in disbelief. There was a security camera and a voice activation lock. You were going to have to knock out one gaurd, and then threaten the next into activating the lock. But then the security camera would see them. You quickly dialed Foaly on your portable device. You explained to him your problem. Foaly instructed you to attach your portable device to the camera. Which you did. The camera’s light turned orange for a minute. “It’s now being fed a loop,” said Foaly. “So you should be able to continue now.” You thanked him, and proceeded to knock out the gaurds. You knocked out the first gaurd and muffled the second. Then you took him back to the gate, where you forced him to open it.

      After you got through, you saw several ornaments hanging from the ceiling. They looked a lot like security cameras. You stayed close to the wall, out of their sight. You wondered whether the best option would be to shoot the cameras, or just try to slip around.

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12 Reviews for “You, Holly and Mulch Vs. Opal Koboi and Technology”

  1. 017350 Says:
    January 1st, 2008 at 1:46 am

    Sorry for any mistakes in the layout of this story… Or any grammar mistakes. Please RR&R (Read, Rate and Review)! :)

  2. Olive Says:
    January 1st, 2008 at 7:59 am

    Okay, you definitly did this justice. It’s way better then mine. Aren’t they hard to make though? In order to make a good length it takes a whole lot of time.

  3. lil.arty Says:
    January 1st, 2008 at 8:21 am

    YAY i used a bomb! Opal got away :( i will get her one day lol :P
    great story. i tried to do on of these on the computre and i just couldnt so it must be harder then it looks :P :P :P

  4. 017350 Says:
    January 1st, 2008 at 4:50 pm

    lol Yes, I didn’t realize how much work these are until I did one. And, Olive, this story definitely NOT as good as yours. Not in my opinion. But I’m glad you liked it!

  5. mahi101 AF Fan Says:
    January 1st, 2008 at 4:58 pm

    I Know how much work u have to put into this.. lol , i never tried but i could tell because i tho9ught about it……….. I really liked it , even though i died after unplugging the computer…..lol

  6. FowlEmpress Says:
    January 2nd, 2008 at 1:06 am

    I died alot, that sucks. But great story and really good layout. Not any spelling problems i bothered to notice but all in all it was good.

  7. 017350 Says:
    January 6th, 2008 at 7:05 pm

    This story is #1 on the Top Tens List! Yay! Again, I want to thank Olive for giving me this idea! :)

  8. Jelly Says:
    January 10th, 2008 at 12:06 am

    I tried making on of these to. It’s HARD! thanku 4 the dedication I am flattered really! I made a lot of bad decisions and died VERY often so I cheated and went to the other page to survive to the end!

  9. 017350 Says:
    January 15th, 2008 at 2:52 am

    NO CHEATING! Although I guess you can’t cheat if there are no rules. :?
    Here are the rules:

    1. Obey all rules!
    2. Don’t cheat!
    3. Don’t break the rules!
    4. Always don’t always cheat!

  10. Jelly Says:
    January 22nd, 2008 at 3:13 am

    lol OK! I redid it and only died once. WOOPEE!!!

  11. 017350 Says:
    February 28th, 2008 at 6:29 pm

    I think that I might write more in this story. I might make nore possobilities to live and more to die. Hmmm…. should I?

  12. 017350 Says:
    March 26th, 2008 at 10:05 pm

    Okay! I’ve added a few more options! :)

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