You, Holly and Mulch Vs. Opal Koboi and Technology

Written on January 1st, 2008 by 017350

Story Details

       You used the computer to place bombs in the tunnel. They would go off in 15 minutes. You had to get out of the tunnel. You quickly downloaded a portion of the computers data to your portable device. If needed, it would act as a remote to the timing of the bombs explosion, the gates, and the guns. You sheilded and made for the exit. You made it, only to find that there were gaurd blocking it. They were wearing eyepieces of some sort. They could see where you were! You pressed a button on your portable device, and when they tried to shoot at you, the bullets dematerialized into thin air. You smiled. Holly took the gun and fired several shots until all the gaurds were on the floor. You left, closed the gate behind you, and hopped on your shuttle back to Haven City. As you left, you heard a loud BOOM!!!!! Opal was dead. But then, you saw a small pod leaving the tunnel. Opal wasn’t dead. She had escaped. Oh well… It would have been too good to be true anyway…

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12 Reviews for “You, Holly and Mulch Vs. Opal Koboi and Technology”

  1. 017350 Says:
    January 1st, 2008 at 1:46 am

    Sorry for any mistakes in the layout of this story… Or any grammar mistakes. Please RR&R (Read, Rate and Review)! :)

  2. Olive Says:
    January 1st, 2008 at 7:59 am

    Okay, you definitly did this justice. It’s way better then mine. Aren’t they hard to make though? In order to make a good length it takes a whole lot of time.

  3. lil.arty Says:
    January 1st, 2008 at 8:21 am

    YAY i used a bomb! Opal got away :( i will get her one day lol :P
    great story. i tried to do on of these on the computre and i just couldnt so it must be harder then it looks :P :P :P

  4. 017350 Says:
    January 1st, 2008 at 4:50 pm

    lol Yes, I didn’t realize how much work these are until I did one. And, Olive, this story definitely NOT as good as yours. Not in my opinion. But I’m glad you liked it!

  5. mahi101 AF Fan Says:
    January 1st, 2008 at 4:58 pm

    I Know how much work u have to put into this.. lol , i never tried but i could tell because i tho9ught about it……….. I really liked it , even though i died after unplugging the computer…..lol

  6. FowlEmpress Says:
    January 2nd, 2008 at 1:06 am

    I died alot, that sucks. But great story and really good layout. Not any spelling problems i bothered to notice but all in all it was good.

  7. 017350 Says:
    January 6th, 2008 at 7:05 pm

    This story is #1 on the Top Tens List! Yay! Again, I want to thank Olive for giving me this idea! :)

  8. Jelly Says:
    January 10th, 2008 at 12:06 am

    I tried making on of these to. It’s HARD! thanku 4 the dedication I am flattered really! I made a lot of bad decisions and died VERY often so I cheated and went to the other page to survive to the end!

  9. 017350 Says:
    January 15th, 2008 at 2:52 am

    NO CHEATING! Although I guess you can’t cheat if there are no rules. :?
    Here are the rules:

    1. Obey all rules!
    2. Don’t cheat!
    3. Don’t break the rules!
    4. Always don’t always cheat!

  10. Jelly Says:
    January 22nd, 2008 at 3:13 am

    lol OK! I redid it and only died once. WOOPEE!!!

  11. 017350 Says:
    February 28th, 2008 at 6:29 pm

    I think that I might write more in this story. I might make nore possobilities to live and more to die. Hmmm…. should I?

  12. 017350 Says:
    March 26th, 2008 at 10:05 pm

    Okay! I’ve added a few more options! :)

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