You, Holly and Mulch Vs. Opal Koboi and Technology
Written on January 1st, 2008 by 017350Story Details
(8 votes, average: 3.63 out of 5)
Loading ...You decided to stay hidden. You watched as Opal continued whispering to the bodygaurd. Then, the bodygaurd left and went down the corridor that you had just come down. You continued to watch as she continued whispering something into each of the bodygaurds’ ears. Until there was only one left. This one she left to guard herself. Then she went down another corridor, and you followed her. She led you into a room with 23 doors. On each door there was written a name of someone she hated. Sure enough, you spotted your name on one of the doors. Opal went into the room with the name “Foaly” on it. You managed to slip in after her. Mulch didn’t. He was stuck outside with the bodygaurd. You and Holly, still sheilded, looked at the computer next to Opal. It showed an animated version of Foaly in his office. The date on the computer was in 3 days. Suddenly there was an explosion, and the animated Foaly did a weird demonstration af dying.
Opal was going to plant a bomb in Foaly’s office! You quickly left the room and went into the room titled “Artemis”, then “Holly”, “Mulch”, “Root”, “Trouble”, “Butler”, and so on! Opal was planning on disposing of them all in different ways. Mostly bombs. You quickly called Foaly and explained the situation. Then you hung up, went back to the main part of the tunnel, and explained it to Mulch. Then you ran back to the room. Opal had left by now. You looked at her computer. Hmmm…
Unplugg the computer - Chapter 6
Use the computer to set bombs in the tunnel to kill Opal, possibly killing you. - Chapter 7
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January 1st, 2008 at 1:46 am
Sorry for any mistakes in the layout of this story… Or any grammar mistakes. Please RR&R (Read, Rate and Review)!
January 1st, 2008 at 7:59 am
Okay, you definitly did this justice. It’s way better then mine. Aren’t they hard to make though? In order to make a good length it takes a whole lot of time.
January 1st, 2008 at 8:21 am
YAY i used a bomb! Opal got away
i will get her one day lol 
great story. i tried to do on of these on the computre and i just couldnt so it must be harder then it looks
January 1st, 2008 at 4:50 pm
lol Yes, I didn’t realize how much work these are until I did one. And, Olive, this story definitely NOT as good as yours. Not in my opinion. But I’m glad you liked it!
January 1st, 2008 at 4:58 pm
I Know how much work u have to put into this.. lol , i never tried but i could tell because i tho9ught about it……….. I really liked it , even though i died after unplugging the computer…..lol
January 2nd, 2008 at 1:06 am
I died alot, that sucks. But great story and really good layout. Not any spelling problems i bothered to notice but all in all it was good.
January 6th, 2008 at 7:05 pm
This story is #1 on the Top Tens List! Yay! Again, I want to thank Olive for giving me this idea!
January 10th, 2008 at 12:06 am
I tried making on of these to. It’s HARD! thanku 4 the dedication I am flattered really! I made a lot of bad decisions and died VERY often so I cheated and went to the other page to survive to the end!
January 15th, 2008 at 2:52 am
NO CHEATING! Although I guess you can’t cheat if there are no rules.
Here are the rules:
1. Obey all rules!
2. Don’t cheat!
3. Don’t break the rules!
4. Always don’t always cheat!
January 22nd, 2008 at 3:13 am
lol OK! I redid it and only died once. WOOPEE!!!
February 28th, 2008 at 6:29 pm
I think that I might write more in this story. I might make nore possobilities to live and more to die. Hmmm…. should I?
March 26th, 2008 at 10:05 pm
Okay! I’ve added a few more options!