You, Holly and Mulch Vs. Opal Koboi and Technology

Written on January 1st, 2008 by 017350

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      You took the gun from Mulch’s hands, turned the power level to full, took aim breifly, and shot! It hit Opal right in the neck. She died immediately. Her bodygaurds all looked at where the shot came from and saw a slight shimmer in the air. They all fired at you at the same time. One of the shots hit Holly. She fell to the earth. You looked at her and saw no blue sparks coming from her body. She was dead. And it was all your fault. You fought your emotions as best as you could. It took all you had to keep on running from that spot.

      In a blur of anger, you took your gun and shot wildly at the bodygaurds. Many of them died. But most of them were left when you ran out of shots. They hadn’t run out of shots though… They kept firing at you. One bullet hit you in the chest and you stumbled. The pain was terrible. One of the bodygaurds stooped over you, pointed it at your head, and fired. That was the last thing you ever saw.

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12 Reviews for “You, Holly and Mulch Vs. Opal Koboi and Technology”

  1. 017350 Says:
    January 1st, 2008 at 1:46 am

    Sorry for any mistakes in the layout of this story… Or any grammar mistakes. Please RR&R (Read, Rate and Review)! :)

  2. Olive Says:
    January 1st, 2008 at 7:59 am

    Okay, you definitly did this justice. It’s way better then mine. Aren’t they hard to make though? In order to make a good length it takes a whole lot of time.

  3. lil.arty Says:
    January 1st, 2008 at 8:21 am

    YAY i used a bomb! Opal got away :( i will get her one day lol :P
    great story. i tried to do on of these on the computre and i just couldnt so it must be harder then it looks :P :P :P

  4. 017350 Says:
    January 1st, 2008 at 4:50 pm

    lol Yes, I didn’t realize how much work these are until I did one. And, Olive, this story definitely NOT as good as yours. Not in my opinion. But I’m glad you liked it!

  5. mahi101 AF Fan Says:
    January 1st, 2008 at 4:58 pm

    I Know how much work u have to put into this.. lol , i never tried but i could tell because i tho9ught about it……….. I really liked it , even though i died after unplugging the computer…..lol

  6. FowlEmpress Says:
    January 2nd, 2008 at 1:06 am

    I died alot, that sucks. But great story and really good layout. Not any spelling problems i bothered to notice but all in all it was good.

  7. 017350 Says:
    January 6th, 2008 at 7:05 pm

    This story is #1 on the Top Tens List! Yay! Again, I want to thank Olive for giving me this idea! :)

  8. Jelly Says:
    January 10th, 2008 at 12:06 am

    I tried making on of these to. It’s HARD! thanku 4 the dedication I am flattered really! I made a lot of bad decisions and died VERY often so I cheated and went to the other page to survive to the end!

  9. 017350 Says:
    January 15th, 2008 at 2:52 am

    NO CHEATING! Although I guess you can’t cheat if there are no rules. :?
    Here are the rules:

    1. Obey all rules!
    2. Don’t cheat!
    3. Don’t break the rules!
    4. Always don’t always cheat!

  10. Jelly Says:
    January 22nd, 2008 at 3:13 am

    lol OK! I redid it and only died once. WOOPEE!!!

  11. 017350 Says:
    February 28th, 2008 at 6:29 pm

    I think that I might write more in this story. I might make nore possobilities to live and more to die. Hmmm…. should I?

  12. 017350 Says:
    March 26th, 2008 at 10:05 pm

    Okay! I’ve added a few more options! :)

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