You, Holly and Mulch Vs. Opal Koboi and Technology
Written on January 1st, 2008 by 017350Story Details
(8 votes, average: 3.63 out of 5)
Loading ...You, Holly, and Mulch were at entrance 1. After you made your choice, Root sent you three there immediately. Holly went first, then you, and then Mulch. Holly and you shielded, and Mulch dug underground. Then, you attached a bug to the password pad. The screen on the pad went blank for a moment. Then, the door opened and let them pass. But there, just inside the gate was a pixie. A strong muscular male pixie. ”D’arvit” swore Mulch. Holly raised the setting on her Neutrino 3000 and shot. The shot got about 2 inches away from the gun, and dematerialized. The pixie smiled. “De-materialization” he said “Happens to all guns in the tunnel.” He grinned “Except ours.” He shot at Holly. It hit her right leg. Just above the knee. Holly fell to the floor, unable to stand. You quickly ran to her side, and Mulch burrowed underground. He shot again at you. It hit you square in shoulder. Blue sparks immediately encircled the wound. The pixie was about to shoot again, but just then Mulch ran up behind him and whacked him with a silver box. He fell and dropped the gun. Mulch quickly grabbed it, turned the power level to low, and shot him. The pixie was out cold. For now.
You quickly sheilded and moved on. The alarms were blaring now. Opal knew that you, Holly, and Mulch were there. You rounded a corner and saw Opal Koboi and an army of bodygaurds. She was talking with one of them in a whispered voice. You looked at the gun in Mulch’s hand. Then you looked at all of Opal’s bodygaurds.
Shoot Opal and give away your position to her bodygaurds. - Chapter 3
Don’t shoot Opal and stay hidden from her bodygaurds. - Chapter 5
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January 1st, 2008 at 1:46 am
Sorry for any mistakes in the layout of this story… Or any grammar mistakes. Please RR&R (Read, Rate and Review)!
January 1st, 2008 at 7:59 am
Okay, you definitly did this justice. It’s way better then mine. Aren’t they hard to make though? In order to make a good length it takes a whole lot of time.
January 1st, 2008 at 8:21 am
YAY i used a bomb! Opal got away
i will get her one day lol 
great story. i tried to do on of these on the computre and i just couldnt so it must be harder then it looks
January 1st, 2008 at 4:50 pm
lol Yes, I didn’t realize how much work these are until I did one. And, Olive, this story definitely NOT as good as yours. Not in my opinion. But I’m glad you liked it!
January 1st, 2008 at 4:58 pm
I Know how much work u have to put into this.. lol , i never tried but i could tell because i tho9ught about it……….. I really liked it , even though i died after unplugging the computer…..lol
January 2nd, 2008 at 1:06 am
I died alot, that sucks. But great story and really good layout. Not any spelling problems i bothered to notice but all in all it was good.
January 6th, 2008 at 7:05 pm
This story is #1 on the Top Tens List! Yay! Again, I want to thank Olive for giving me this idea!
January 10th, 2008 at 12:06 am
I tried making on of these to. It’s HARD! thanku 4 the dedication I am flattered really! I made a lot of bad decisions and died VERY often so I cheated and went to the other page to survive to the end!
January 15th, 2008 at 2:52 am
NO CHEATING! Although I guess you can’t cheat if there are no rules.
Here are the rules:
1. Obey all rules!
2. Don’t cheat!
3. Don’t break the rules!
4. Always don’t always cheat!
January 22nd, 2008 at 3:13 am
lol OK! I redid it and only died once. WOOPEE!!!
February 28th, 2008 at 6:29 pm
I think that I might write more in this story. I might make nore possobilities to live and more to die. Hmmm…. should I?
March 26th, 2008 at 10:05 pm
Okay! I’ve added a few more options!