Curiouser and curiouser… You should update! It seems interesting, but it’s so short at this moment, it seems like it might be nothing. So include more; we shall se where this goes…..
Hm, I am actually fairly impressed with your grammar. The AN scared me, but it was almost as good as the story so far! I’d suggest that you keep an eye on your punctuation in quotes ([“Then come in,” Artemis replied.] You forgot the comma), but otherwise it’s perfect. The story is very curious-making, and I’m DEFINATELY going to be keeping lookout for any updates on this *hints*. You worked hard and, it really shows
June 18th, 2010 at 1:56 pm
*strokes imaginary beard* Hmm… you’ve spiked my curiousity. You must continue, my friend. If you don’t, I’ll end up finishing it.
~CC
June 18th, 2010 at 9:17 pm
Curiouser and curiouser… You should update! It seems interesting, but it’s so short at this moment, it seems like it might be nothing. So include more; we shall se where this goes…..
*Ann
June 18th, 2010 at 10:03 pm
Hm, I am actually fairly impressed with your grammar. The AN scared me, but it was almost as good as the story so far! I’d suggest that you keep an eye on your punctuation in quotes ([“Then come in,” Artemis replied.] You forgot the comma), but otherwise it’s perfect. The story is very curious-making, and I’m DEFINATELY going to be keeping lookout for any updates on this *hints*. You worked hard and, it really shows
June 18th, 2010 at 11:12 pm
Wait… *reads synopsis* This is a Nick Fleming cross!!!
Did you know that the fourth book, the Necromancer, is out?
~cc
September 8th, 2010 at 8:07 pm
Keep…Writing…*Pulls out sword and waves it* Or I’ll stab you! (JK)