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UoM

Summary: Mud Men have discovered Haven! What will happen? Lame summary, I know, just read the fic. CHAPTER 10 ADDED!

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

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Ok, this took a little longer than planed but here it is. I hope you enjoy!

“Zane, what happened?”

“Are you ok, Zane?”

“Zane! Thank goodness you’re alright!”

“Please guys! I don’t want to deal with this right now,” Zane said, trying to get out of everyone’s way. Of course, nobody listened.

Zane started backing up slowly.

“ZANE!” barked Trouble. “What in the name of Frond happened?”

“Can I tell you later? It’s a long story,”

“Long story short,” Trouble replied, narrowing his eyes.

“Fine. Goblins lighting Haven on fire, Mud-Men discovering us, and bomb exploding. Happy?” Zane replied, clearly not in a good mood.

“Yes, Captain,” the commandeered replied. “I’ll have your report tomorrow,”

Zane turned around and ran, sick of all the nonsense. He ran to E37. It was completely empty except for the person who ran it. Zawhew want on the shuttle to the surface.

I’m NEVER going back there, Zane thought bitterly. Ever.

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When Zane reached the surface, he sat down on the floor. He suddenly realized how exhausted he was. It would be to weird to lay down in the middle of nowhere, he thought. Maybe I’ll meditate. 

Randomly, a purplish-bluish mix of swirly stuff appeared in front of him.

Do I have the Atlantis Complex? This cannot be real, Zane thought.

The swirly stuff stopped moving. There was a door in its place. The door opened. A gold ring dropped out with a demented thing screaming ‘ My precious, my Precious!’ constantly.

I think I recognize this thing.

Then the door turned into a fire color. It again turned into a door. A clay dragon stepped out.

Ok, I definitely have the Complex, Zane decided.

Complex? What is this Complex you speak of? a voice said in Zane’s head that was definitely not his own.

Zane suddenly realized why he recognized the thing.

“D’arvit,” Zane cursed.

 Does anyone recognize what this thing is? Oh I love him, just love him! -Thunder

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

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21 responses to “UoM.” Join in!

  1. Nice try for a first fic. It’s really good, but still too early to say anything I guess. Please update soon,I’ll keep an eye open!

  2. Thanks Shaadia. I’ll update soon.
    Just added chapter 3!

  3. nice!!

    Inturupts comment: thanks Shaadia but to be honest, I think that I could have done better. Thanks again, reviews make me happy, me being happy means updates faster, to you being happy. It’s a cycle. ~Thunder

  4. The lord of the rings !!!!

    My precious

    Nice job Thunder

    Thanks, you got the series

  5. another case of atlantis complex! what’s his alter ego honna be like? please i must know!

  6. When is Ch 5 coming out, I want to see Zane’s alter ego

  7. Actually, it pops up under the Recently Updated bar whenever you update. Otherwise, no one would know.
    Ok, thanks!
    -Thunder

  8. hi thunder!!
    i was wondering if you could add me to your truth or dare. the comment section doesn’t load on my kindle.
    oh and i have a solution. i do it all the time.
    in your summary, write
    CHAPTER 5 ADDED
    in capital letters and there’s no missing it. or better yet, add it with capital letters in your title.

  9. THANK YOU! And I’ll add you in the next update.

  10. heehee…Gollum. now i like him!!
    Gollum is awesome, isn’t he? At least in my opinion.

  11. nice simon haha
    I think we both know why I put that name. Thanks! ~Thunder

  12. Gollum is so awesome…and funny! I always laughed my head off when he yelled “My precious!” in the LotR movies and books. It’s just so hilarious. I can’t wait to see more! Update soon!
    PS-Did you notice, I’m so weird my fav HP character is Dobby. And in LotR it’s Sméagol. And in AF it’s Mulch. heehee.

  13. I love Sméagol or Gollum. I don’t care which name you use. I’ll update when I get back, I’m going to an amusement park! Should I put this also under ‘funny’ then? I also love Dobby but in AF my favorite is Opal or Foaly. Thanks!

  14. Nice job Simon and gollum
    Thanks

  15. LEGOLAS IS AWESOME HE IS MY FAVORITE LORD OF THE RINGS CHARACHTER CUZ HE HAS A BOW!!!

    He’s pretty awesome.

  16. shaadiaTheWeird November 21st, 2013 at 11:16 am 16

    cool, i like the twist!
    thanks!

  17. Cool, an update! Hey, what’s with all the codes?? heehee.
    You’ll see. *smiles evilly and laughs like a maniac* No really. You will. Probably soon.

  18. Wats with the codes ??? And that was a total twist to the story

    They are important. Very important.

  19. I think that Renya should be spending her time trying to heal and not playing dramatic music. BTW awesome story try to make Foaly explode the worsfer while drinking coffe I love to see him mad at the world. It’s so funny :).

    I just thought it was funny. Thanks for the idea.

  20. Oh come on, please make a bad guy die. Pretty please?
    And the story’s progressing great. Just quit the cliffhanger thing. It makes things so much harder to predict. Well, that’s a good thing but…
    Oh slap me. I’m insane. Heehee.

    Maybe I will, maybe I won’t. Thanks! I’m glad it’s not easy to predict. I’m not slapping you! Cliffhangers on some chapters then if it is really annoying.

  21. Lili is a total bimbo. I can see why Holly hates her.

    Speaking of which, what happened to Holly?!
    Just wondering. Anyway, another well written chappie. Good work!

    Holly is coming next chapter. I didn’t want to put to much stuff in. Thanks!

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