Time Vortex

Written on March 28th, 2007 by inika

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  • Category: Action
  • Author: inika
  • Word Count: 742
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Some of them actually pulled Neutrinos on Artemis. When a group of 12 did this, he simply flicked a switch. They fell into a steel cage with dwarves that hadn’t eaten in days.

Holly actually came to talk to him. “We need to switch back!” she whispered. Artemis replied, “Impossible. The rip is gone, we’d need it and 2 pieces of silver from the past.”

Then the rockslide reached Haven. Police Plaza, to be exact. Foaly and Caballine, on the roof, were crushed. But not before Foaly’s will was written. He actually left all his things to artemis, of all people. However, the rip reoccured. This time, it did kill them. All but Artemis, with his silver watch. He threw a silver ring over to Holly. She caught it and was saved. But now Operation APOC had finished, and Holly still had a Neutrino.

“I always had loved you,” she said, aimed, and killed Artemis with one shot.

Author’s note: I have some credit to give. Colfer, thank you for the Artemis books. Fangathering, thank you for allowing me to create this. And thank you, dreams, for giving the story to me. This is not the end. The epilogue is in the works, and it will be enjoyable. Thank you.

You may now unshield.

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12 Reviews for “Time Vortex”

  1. BlackOpal Says:

    I don’t like how dwarves are used like sharks and crocodiles usually are. They are sentient. :P
    I really liked it! Interesting and fun. I think I’m going to put it in action, if that’s okay.

  2. moosebot Says:

    Made absolutely no sense, try i dunno, making sense next time. A nuetrino wouldn’t kill a person.

  3. inika Says:

    moose, figure this. Neutrino blast to heart= dead. One thing though. Note the note; a new one is in the works. Arty dont stay dead

  4. inika Says:

    also, opal, not intended. Little brothers with seriously big imaginations…

  5. inika Says:

    sorry for triple post. “pattern of triangles”? OBVIOUS mimzy reference

  6. inika Says:

    quad post…
    people, read and figure the REAL meaning of things. SPOILERS

    I wrote this from the idea that an experience can change a life. Artemis lost his family for 3 YEARS. That changes a life a lot. END SPOILERS
    Opal, my first story. Thanks for the review. Gave me encouragement.
    I swear my last review today.

  7. sigsaucer Says:

    Great

  8. inika Says:

    thanks. Theres another in the works involving the “Memories” series characters and a sprite named after my friend defending Haven and the surface!

  9. HoLlYiSsOcOoL Says:

    Why would she kill artemis ???????????????????

  10. ARTEMISISWICKEDAWeSOME Says:

    OK i didn’t get how holly shot arty and how he hated fairies

  11. inika Says:

    Sadly, I haven’t got the time to continue writing or checking on stories. I never finished Awakening’s first chapter, and I am afraid I never will. I’ve lost my interest in many things in recent weeks, and Artemis Fowl Fanfiction is one of them. I still write short stories on occasion, but I never publish them.
    I am sorry. This isn’t my choice to make.

    Goodbye,
    Cirel

  12. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    I liked it!!!!

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