The Box, the Wolf, and the Fowl.

Summary: The things people will do for food-- shame they didn't know who he was. Please read!

Chapters: 1 2 3

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Temptation. I taste it in my mouth, bittersweet and beckoning.

He’s rich, judgeing entirely on how he walks. His head towers above the mal-fed crowd, and as I pull closer, I see that he’s wearing a suit. Definately rich. He’s almost ceartainly not carrying any cash, but still.

I tag along anyways.

D’arvit. He’s heading back to the airport. I have failed. Unless… no. Cannibalisim is not an option.

***

Later, on the plane. This is a really nice crate. I could snach it and- again, no. They want dinner, not housing.

And yet I feel that the rich kid has more to offer. I can’t follow him around for weeks, so.

Kidnap? Well, I’m certainly not against it.

I’m brilliant. Insert evil laugh here.

***

Later, in some street after an hour or two. Off the plane. Insert colorfull swear word here.

Heh. This is not working out. A huge man greeted Mr.Fancy-Pants Kid as he stepped off the plane, and hasn’t left. Having lived on the streets my whole life, I’m not that bright, but I can tell he’s not leaving anytime soon.

So what do I do?

This will take some explaining.

You see, I’m not your average teenage she-stalker/hobo. I’m a werewolf teenage she-stalker/hobo.

So I transform and pounce, ‘cuz I’m one of those cool modern ones that can transform whenever they want, and don’t look like Hollywood major screw-ups.

That was stupid. Big Guy has guns. I would fight back; I’d love to bite him.  There’s that stupid tepmtation again. But that would curse him, and he’d probably rampage the town. See, I’m nice! I knock an interfering teen girl out of the way. Shame; she knew what she was doing.

I don’t know how it happens. Some how I knock Fancy Pants out. It was just a swift knock on the head. But here’s the thing: I’m not shot yet. I don’t look, just run. I have to get out of here. I’m lost, yes, but wolves have good homing instincts.

Chapters: 1 2 3

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23 responses to “The Box, the Wolf, and the Fowl..” Join in!

  1. OMG! IT IS QUIET! Which is exactly why I was working on a songfic. Quiet site=psychotic rant=songfic. Yup. Even though I should update my stories…
    Off topic now.

    Lotsa mistakes.
    Beckoning
    Leaving
    Definitely
    Certainly
    Cannibalism is sketchy, but I’m not sure if even I spelled it right…

    Anyway. Interesting style of writing you’ve taken up, Fal. It’s nice. I like it.

    “You see, I’m not your average teenage she-stalker/hobo. I’m a werewolf teenage she-stalker/hobo.”

    Heheh. POST SECOND CHAPTER NOW.

    Pie.

    FCD

  2. I like this, though its not my style. I like the attitude of your writing [see excerpt above]. The site is to quiet, its driving me nuts. excuse me a moment:

    LALALALALALALALALALA!!!!!! YADAYADAYADAYADAYADAYADA!!!!!!! NOMOS RUUUUUUUUUUULES!!!!!!!!

    OK, I’m all better 🙂
    I’d like more details, like where we are, and what we are doing.
    Update, or fear my ninjas.

  3. Different writing style, sadly I don’t really enjoy reading 1st person in this kind of manner. Now if you changed it to a different POV (Point-Of-View) than it would added more interest.

    When you turn from story telling to directly addressing the reader you could be a little more discrepant about it.

    This has an interesting character and hope you will add more to this story.

    – Mr. B

  4. Wow- better reveiws than I thought. This is my experiment on a new style. It works well when I have a bad mood >:D

  5. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  6. Hah, teenage were wolf girls, I currently know 2.

  7. UPDATE!!!!!!!! Insert colorful words here.

  8. Hmmmmm. I’m not sure I like the other magical creature crossovers. Especially with the other magical creatures as the main charachters.

  9. Hey, does anyone have a better title?

  10. Um… Okay… All my stories are zombies anyways…

  11. Pretty good looking. Imma likin this style! Uh, could ya tell us she- were-wolf hobo/stalker’s name? Please?!

  12. LOL i havent thought of one yet.

  13. FantasyDevourer July 24th, 2011 at 2:59 am 13

    I found mistakes. Mostly typos, though. I kinda liked the style, but only because I like the short sentences kind of writing.

    I agree with Short: What’s her name????

    This is interesting, but ok.

    3/s

  14. Yay ^^

    An honest person

  15. This is really interesting and good. I can’t wait for the next update!!

  16. Interesting. A bit confusing, but still. It kinda makes me think of Max Ride, I’m not sure why. Maybe cuz they remind me of Erasers. I like it. Um…5/s I guess.

  17. Interesting… I do wish for an update. Otherwise, there isn’t much to comment upon… let alone rate. 😉

  18. Update! I like it till now 😀

  19. ArtfullyInsane September 2nd, 2011 at 1:28 am 19

    I really like this, and the cliffy was good. Please update!

  20. Are you going to update any more? I think you should this is really good. I didn’t notice any mistakes and whats the she wolfs name? UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  21. Of course I’m going to updaate more. We haven’t gotten to my marvelous ending yet >:D

  22. Absent_Minded_Professor January 29th, 2012 at 11:35 pm 22

    That’s IT?! WHAT HAPPENS AFTER?! I like the writing style, though. And werewolves. I do love my werewolves.
    ~A_M_P

  23. He DIED?! *cry cry* If there’s no updates, I will keel you!

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